【12月-1月IBT综合备考大帖】之【TWE作文】by 达达 12.18号作业

达达摩摩UID: 2499908

12.18日作业Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are busy doing different things that they can do few things well.（2007.3.3）

       These days , people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in past . Many experts point out that , along with the development of modern society , it is an inevitable result and there no way to avoid it . People have to more and more different things , but there is a problem many things we have to do , however how many things we can do well? So from my point of view , I think we can do few things and are well with these things.

       One of the primary causes is that make every effort to do everything best. For example, there are so many subjects in last term in my university , I am so tired and I did not know how to do it , I did not know how can I study . But calm down and think over I feel it is not so difficult . I decided to do everything well, step by step to do. First of all , I review the most good at the subject and then in the view of some of the basic knowledge to expand my own. After several months , after testing, I have been successful. All of subjects I passing. I am so happy, so I prefer to do everything well and do few things.

      Furthermore, insist on doing everything, acquire more and more knowledge and skills. Si Ma Qian , one of the foremost historians of ancient China , who lived in the Han Dynasty, once offended his emperor, Han Wu Di. As a result, he received castration and was sent to jail. All his properties were confiscated. Those days had been to most difficulty period of Si Ma Qian’ life .However , bad thing turned out to be quite good. Si MA Qian could concentrate 100 percent on writing his book. Shi Ji (means A record by the Historian) . After years of hardworking , he finished the great book and is considered Father of the Chinese History as a result. To do one thing and be good at it ,it so beneficial for our life.

     To sum up, it is serious about doing everything So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to do many things and do few thing better is better for our life.

jackallen0714UID: 2510951

These days , people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely work和这个词搭配不妥 than in past . Many experts point out that , along with the development of modern society , it is an inevitable result and there no way to avoid it . People have to more and more different things , but there is a problem many things we have to do , however how many things we can do well? So from my point of view , I think we can do few things and are well with these things ？什么意思.

One of the primary causes is that make every effort to do everything best. For example, there are so many subjects in last term in my university , I am so tired and I did not know how to do it , I did not know how can I study . But calm down and think over I feel it is not so difficult . I decided to do everything well, step by step to do 可省. First of all , I review the most good at the subject 最擅长的科目？这么说很不地道 and then in the view of some of the basic knowledge to expand my own. After several months , after testing, I have been successful. All of subjects I passing 此句缺谓语. I am so happy, so I prefer to do everything well and do few things.
      
     Furthermore, insist on doing everything, acquire more and more knowledge and skills 主语呢. Si Ma Qian , one of the foremost historians of ancient China , who lived in the Han Dynasty, once offended his emperor, Han Wu Di. As a result, he received castration and was sent to jail. All his properties were confiscated. Those days had been to most difficulty period of Si Ma Qian’ life .However , bad thing turned out to be quite good 这是例子的中心思想，可是和你的TS有关系么. Si MA Qian could concentrate 100 percent on writing his book. Shi Ji (means A record by the Historian) . After years of hardworking , he finished the great book and is considered Father of the Chinese History as a result. To do one thing and be good at it ,it so beneficial for our life.

     To sum up, it is serious about doing everything So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to do many things and do few thing better is better for our life.

语法要注意句子结构，例子要和TS相关联，另外尽量用英文化的思考方式，不要中文直译。
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闹闹喵UID: 2500331

These days , people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely (这里应该用形容词比较级吧？)than in past . Many experts point out that , along with the development of modern society , it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it . People have to 缺谓语 more and more different things , but there is a problem many things we have to do , however how many things we can do well? So from my point of view , I think we can do few things and are well with these things.

       One of the primary causes is that make every effort to do everything best.这一句结构有问题，看不懂。 For example, there are so many subjects in last term in my university , I am so tired and I did not know how to do it , I did not know how can I study . But calm down and think over I feel it is not so difficult . I decided to do everything well, step by step to do. First of all , I review the most good at 看不懂the subject and then in the view of some of the basic knowledge to expand my own. After several months , after testing, I have been successful. All of subjects I passing 应该用过去时. I am so happy, so I prefer to do everything well and do few things. 论证的不够充分，你是怎样把很多事情一起做好的，只用了一句话带过，而花了较多的笔墨在这些事情很多以及你所取得的成绩上，有点本末倒置

      Furthermore, insist on doing everything, acquire more and more knowledge and skills. Si Ma Qian , one of the foremost historians of ancient China , who lived in the Han Dynasty, once offended his emperor, Han Wu Di. As a result, he received castration and was sent to jail. All his properties were confiscated. Those days had been to most difficulty period of Si Ma Qian’ life .However , bad thing turned out to be quite good. Si MA Qian could concentrate 100 percent on writing his book. Shi Ji (means A record by the Historian) . After years of hardworking , he finished the great book and is considered Father of the Chinese History as a result. To do one thing and be good at it ,it so beneficial for our life. 司马迁被囚那一段与文章主题无关，可以删掉

     To sum up, it is serious about doing everything So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to do many things and do few thing better is better for our life.这一句看不懂，做很多事是好的，而且做少一些事并做好是对我们的生活有利的？

唔，还需多多练习