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发表于 2008-12-22 21:32:14 |显示全部楼层
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to cooperate with other well is more important today than in the past.

Is the ability of cooperate more important than before? There is no consensus among people. Some argue that they could work huge things by themselves through the Internet. On the other side of the leaf, others, including me, is convinced that cooperation is more essential then before. My reasons will be presented as follows.

There are two fundamental arguments to support my claim; the first one has to goes on the modern social life. For one thing, there is no denying that the rhythm of modern life is much higher than before. Such high rhythm spark people to use cooperate to improve efficiency. Like the streamline in factory. Besides, in the spare time, the new things need us to cooperate with others. For instance, we have to pass the ball in basketball games and share the excellent weapon in online games. Such new situation does not have in the past.

In addition, why there is so many people still fond of cooperation with others is that cooperation could benefit our mental health. On one hand, it is university acknowledged that we felt well when we share or cooperate with others. This kind of situation does not change whether in the past or modern life. As a result of which, citizens' mental health will need cooperation even in the high technology modern life. Moreover, we cannot emphasize the significant of cooperation in social life two much. As for me, I use MSN and email to chat with others. Such kinds of social cooperation do not happened in the past time, like the generation of our parents.

Nevertheless, an argument ,also the one I find most compelling, against my claim, is that during the improvement of technology individuals' ability has huge improved which we do not need cooperate with others sometimes. Like we could find huge information from internet and go to another country by cars. Although I concede this point, in my observation, this kind of ability is another way of cooperation. For instance, the huge information of internet is sanded by others and public transports net has huge of people work for it.

In sum, this issue is a complex one, requires subjective judgments. Thus, we surely need cooperate in the past because of the low technology, but we still need cooperation with other in the modern life. In the final analysis, so significant of the cooperation in modern life is that we can not afford to ignore it. Consequently, we need more cooperation than before.
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发表于 2008-12-23 22:14:55 |显示全部楼层
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to cooperate with other well is more important today than in the past.

Is the ability of cooperate more important than before? There is no consensus  on the issue(是不是好一点,最好少用people之类的词)among people. Some argue that they could work huge things by themselves through the Internet. On the other side of the leaf, others, including me, is convinced that cooperation is more essential then before. My reasons will be presented as follows(新短语,学习了).2~3yXYBR y

There are two fundamental arguments to support my claim; the first one has to goes on the modern social life. For one thing, there is no denying that the rhythm of modern life is much higher than before. Such high rhythm spark people to use cooperate to improve efficiency. Like the streamline in factory. Besides, in the spare time, the new things need us to cooperate with others. For instance, we have to pass the ball in basketball games and share the excellent weapon in online games. Such new situation does not have  appear in the past. 留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USA-oC)g{r/t8s;lM_[

In addition, why there is are so many people still fond of cooperation with others is that cooperation could benefit our mental health. On one hand, it is university acknowledged that we felt well when we share or cooperate with others. This kind of situation does not change whether in the past or modern life. As a result of which, citizens' mental health will need cooperation even in the high technology modern life. Moreover, we cannot emphasize the significant of cooperation in social life two too much. As for me, I use MSN and email to chat with others. Such kinds of social cooperation do not happened in the past time, like at (不知道好不好)the generation of our parents.


Nevertheless, an argument ,also the one I find most compelling, against my claim, is that during the improvement of technology individuals' ability has huge improved which we do not need cooperate with others sometimes. Like we could find huge information from internet and go to another country by cars(不懂by cars). Although I concede this point, in my observation, this kind of ability is another way of cooperation. For instance, the huge information of internet is sanded by others and public transports net has huge of people work for it. bbs.gter.net(N1{w4fH


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In sum, this issue is a complex one, requires subjective judgments. Thus, we surely need cooperate in the past because of the low technology, but we still need cooperation with other in the modern life. In the final analysis, so significant of the cooperation in modern life is that we can not afford to ignore it. Consequently, we need more cooperation than before.


很切题,例子也很丰富,ball in basketball games and share the excellent weapon 这个例子好像需要细说一下,特别是share the excellent weapon

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