【12月-1月IBT综合备考活动】 by yuanyuan 12月27日作文

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When it comes to advertisements, quite a few people would claim that advertisements value nothing and waste money and time for companies; But in my opinion, I think advertisements have their virtues, contributing to a successful sale.

First of all, advertisements serve as an amazing aid for consumers, reasoning that the number of opportunities for consumers is so huge in a supermarket that consumers often feel confused about which to purchase, without the assist of advertisements. For example, I want to purchase a bottle of water, I feel overwhelmed when confronting mountainous brands of drink. If there are no advertisements to introduce the quality or their strengths, even the most demanding consumers would not know which one to buy. In short, advertisements are to people what water is to fish.

In addition, advertisements functions as glamour draw for public’s attention, boostering the possibility to sale. Here is an instance. The advertisement of Coca Cola which is associated with worldwide sport stars such as Yaoming and Liuxiang, would definitely attract young people who are dream of being a super star in these fields to buy the drink - that means, teenagers are willing to purchase Coca Cola with the motivation of these celebrities. Indeed, the importance of advertisements can never be ignored.

Of course, advertisements might yield little effects to those consumers who know clearly what they want. Also, some false or exaggerate advertisements may even decrease the trust in public. Thus, it is seldom a wise act for companies to waste money and time on advertising in some circumstance.

By and large, there is a rhyme and reason for companies to focus on their advertisements, which is featured as attracting public and guiding consume behavior.

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When it comes to advertisements, quite afew people would claim that advertisements value nothing and waste money andtime for companies; But in my opinion, I think（与inmy opinion 重复）advertisements have their virtues,contributing to a successful sale.

First of all, advertisements serve as anamazing aid for consumers, reasoning that the number of opportunities forconsumers is so huge in a supermarket that consumers often feel confused aboutwhich to purchase, without the assist of advertisements. For example, I want topurchase a bottle of water, I feel overwhelmed when confronting mountainousbrands of drink. If there are no advertisements to introduce the quality ortheir strengths, even the most demanding consumers would not know which one tobuy. In short, advertisements are to people what water is to fish.

In addition, advertisementsfunctions as glamour draw for public’s attention, boostering the possibility to sale. Here is aninstance. The advertisement of Coca Cola which is associated with worldwidesport stars such as Yaoming and Liuxiang, would definitely attract young peoplewho are dream of being a super star in thesefields to buy the drink - that means, teenagers are willing to purchase CocaCola with the motivation of these celebrities. Indeed, the importance ofadvertisements can never be ignored

Of course, advertisements might yieldlittle effects to those consumers who know clearly what they want. Also, somefalse or exaggerate advertisements may even decrease the trust in public. Thus,it is seldom a wise act for companies to waste money and time on advertising insome circumstance.

By and large, there is a rhyme and reasonfor companies to focus on their advertisements, which is featured as attractingpublic and guiding consume behavior.

文章的结构不错，有少数语病，从论证上来看，个人觉得，分论点还可以。字数稍微显得少了点。