【12月-1月IBT综合备考活动】之【TWE写作】12月28日作业

xlwxxyUID：2568970

12.28日作业In today's world, to speak well is more important than to write well.（07.1.26）
As speak and write are two main aspects communicate, we cannot exist without any of them. New era reflected as the rapid speed development of technology and science, influent us to increase our oral and writing skill. However, which one is more significant, it is hard to give an obvious answer. Speaking is more convenient than writing. Nevertheless, it has more time for one to consider elaborately and logically through writing.

Everyone in modern world needs to be able to colloquial more than one language. As speaking rather than writing, is an effective and efficient to demonstrate project or idea towards accompanies. Grasp a practical skill of expression in colloquial is increasing importances. Otherwise, as modern era require students to have more sense of creation. While creative expression is a marriage of cognitive ability and expression of one’s emotions. According to coherrent and fluency colloquial expression, one can expression thoughts more speedily and abstractly. Abstract idea is govern of balance and contrast, one only can grasp the moment of thoughtful sensation through transcript it immediately to oral language in mind. Then speak to others or write down in paper.

On the other side, we cannot bury the significant of writing after refer to importance of speaking skills. As patterns of publications are sharply accreted in new era, writing skill acquires to accrue as well. Take New York Times for example, in order to attract more readers and make profit, journalists have to write beautiful essays used advanced sentences and vocabularies. Students’ papers need advanced expression. Worker acquired capabilities of excellent writing skill may gain more appreciation from boss.

To sum up, whether to speak well is more important than to write well, it cannot be given a definitely answer, both of them are interdependent.

mpromanusUID：2565872

As speaking and writing are two main aspects of communication, we cannot exist (这话似乎太严重点儿了吧..) without any of them. The New era reflected as by the rapid speed (rapid本身就是形容speed的，不需要重复) development of technologies and science, influences us to increase our oral and writing skills. However, which one is more significant, it is hard to give conclude with an obvious answer. Speaking is more convenient than writing. (不一定.) Nevertheless, one has more time for one to consider ('consider' what?) elaborately and logically through writing.

Everyone in the modern world needs to be able to colloquial (? You mean 'speak'?) more than one language.(这也不一定. 很多美国人就只会说英语而且对此感觉良好因为到处都备受礼遇 - 这种容易让读者觉得自己被b4的话还是不写为好..) as speaking rather than writing, is an more effective and efficient than writing to demonstrate projects or ideas towards accompanies (? Do you mean 'companions' or 'companies'?). Grasping a practical skill of expression in colloquial (? I think you mean 'oral languages'..and I think you're not understanding the proper use of 'colloquial' at all..) is increasingly important. Otherwise, as the modern era requires students to have more sense of creativity (然后呢? 句子没完啊..). While creative expression is a marriage of cognitive ability and expression of one’s emotions. (句子又没完啊..) According to With coherrent and fluent colloquial oral (现在很确定了..你以为colloquial就是 口语的 的意思..不是!) expression, one can expression more abstract thoughts more quickly? speedily and abstractly. Abstract idea is govern of balance and contrast, (..这里完全不懂..) one only can grasp the moment of thoughtful sensation through transcripting it immediately to oral language in mind (? 既然是口语，为什么还要in mind?). Then speak it to others or write it down in paper.(问题就是问你speak和write，结果你说口语说了半天还是speak or write..另外问题是关于speak WELL和write WELL, 是读和写能力的质量，不是关于单纯的speaking和writing的能力..)

On the other side, we cannot bury the significance of writing after referring to the importance of speaking skills. As patterns of publications are sharply accreted in new era, writing skill acquires to accrue as well.(..这里整句完全不懂..)  Take the New York Times for example: in order to attract more readers and make profit, journalists have to write beautiful essays using advanced sentences and vocabularies. (但是报纸没法用说的呀..所以你这例子对于 比较说和写 这个目的来说没有可用性呀..) Students’ papers need advanced expressions. Worker who acquired capabilities of excellent writing skills may gain more appreciation from bosses.

To sum up, whether to speak well is more important than to write well, it cannot be given a definitely answer, both of them are interdependent. (最后也没有结论啊..)

总结:

从最近几次给你的修改看来，你有明显的倾向性，有自己会说的或者亲身经历过的例子，就能说得比较顺，不然就意思空泛，而且词不达意的现象就会比较严重。那么首先请避免使用你不能确定自己100%会用的高级词汇，第二个就是要多准备一些自己有经历有话题的例子，尽量各种方面都准备一些，还有就是请注意词语的词性。

就这个题目来说，你是很有些跑题的。。题目是问speak well和write well哪一个重要，是能力质量的比较，而不是问speak和write哪一个比较重要。请注意审题。

nickey0809UID：2349468

呵呵，有高手帮你改语法……
读你的文章每次都比较吃力俄i，觉得你用词和造句都比较怪，可能我还没到那种程度吧
两者都OK的文章不好写的，而且一般只能拿到平庸的分数吧

chineseladyUID：2403976

LZ加油哦:handshake 我就不献丑喽:loveliness: