【12月-1月IBT综合备考活动】之【TWE写作】12月28日作业 by cos

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12.28日作业In today's world, to speak well is more important than to write well.（07.1.26）

There are two basic methods to communicate with others: speak and write. Now, in the era of rapid social and technological change leading to more impromptu words, some people argues that to speak well is more important that to write well. However, in my opinion, I think both speaking and writing skills are equally crucial.
Firstly, speaking cannot substitute writing for many fields of life. In the past, we had to write to other before the telephone was invented. So if you speak will you can make friends freely. But, when it comes to the low makers, newspaper editors, and so on, it’s useless to speak well. They have to choose the most appropriate words to express the meaning. Therefore, a skillful writer is also important in modern life.
Secondly, if one doesn’t speak well, he/she can still finish his/her work outstandingly, because he/she can cooperate with others. Take me for example, when I was at my second year in the university, the teacher of one course resigned us a team work—a presentation on what aspect you are interested in on the course. There were five in my team. The person who speaks well was the declaimer, the one who proficient on PPT prepared the PPT. I’m not good at speaking but good at writing, so I wrote the final report of the task. At last, we got an excellent score on the team work.
Thirdly, it is not easy to say which one is more important in my situation. It is also the same, when we want to make out which one is more important between speaking and writing. Each of the two has its irreplaceable function to our lives at certain situation. It is not visible to discern which is more significant.
Consequently, due to the above analysis and reasons, the importance of speaking is as heavy as that of writing. What we should do is to improve both speaking and writing abilities, and make best use of the advantage and bypass the disadvantage.

hustly0415UID: 2407456

There are two basic methods to communicate with others: speak and write（这里应该用名词）. Now, in the era of rapid social and technological change leading to more impromptu words, some people argues that to speak well is more important that to write well. However, in my opinion, I think both speaking and writing skills are equally crucial.
我觉得开头不错，我也是喜欢这样开头的，直接切入正题，然后拿出自己的观点

Firstly, speaking cannot substitute writing for many fields of life. In the past, we had to write to others  before the telephone was invented. So if you speak will you can make friends freely. But, when it comes to the low makers, (这一段意思不是很明白)newspaper editors, and so on, it’s useless to speak well. They have to choose the most appropriate words to express the meaning. Therefore, a skillful writer is also important in modern life.

Secondly, if one doesn’t speak well, he/she can still finish his/her work outstandingly, because he/she can cooperate with others. （句式可以多些变换，这句就感觉可以把if放后面）Take me for example, when I was at my second year in the university(建议换成a sophomore,看其来词汇高级一点，呵呵), the teacher of one course resigned us a team work—a presentation on what aspect you are interested in on the course(这个句子有些乱). There were five in my team. The person who speaks well was the declaimer, the one who proficient on PPT prepared the PPT. I’m not good at speaking but good at writing, so I wrote the final report of the task. At last, we got an excellent score on the team work.
例子有说服力，但语言的组织好像可以稍微修饰一下

Thirdly, it is not easy to say which one is more important in my situation. It is also the same, when we want to make out which one is more important between speaking and writing. Each of the two has its irreplaceable function(赞一个！) to our lives at certain situation. It is not visible(你是想说wise吗？) to discern which is more significant.

Consequently, due to the above analysis and reasons, the importance of speaking is as heavy as that of writing. What we should do is to improve both speaking and writing abilities, and make best use of the advantage and bypass the disadvantage.

作文的段落安排还不错，尤其赞开头，呵呵。
不过个人觉得几个分论点选得不是特别好，呵呵。个人意见，说得不对的地方请见谅，呵呵。
句式上跟我一样，哎，变化太少了~~

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