【12月-1月IBT综合备考活动】☆Jelly月♂1月3日作文

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1.3日作业 It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor （06.12.16 & 08.1.5）

Everybody in the world has many friends, from classmates to co-workers, from younger person to older one; some of which are great humor; while some of others are very smart. Is it very important for your friends with high intelligent rather than with a good sense of humor? I don’t think so. As for me, from the sense of truly friendship, both two kinds of friends are equally cardinal for me.

My bright friends with high intelligent will give me a helpful hand when I am being confused in difficulties. And in most times, when I am facing with big trouble that beyond my personal capacity, my smart friends always can help me to find a good way freeing me out, and I really appreciate their help. Besides, many excellent friends surrounding me do help me a lot on my studying aspect. Once time, when I am studying in the high school, I can not catch up with my classmates or follow the teachers. I felt very disappointed and upset at that time, and going to give up myself. However, one of my friends, the best student in our class, forwardly tutors me with my weakness on study. If there was no aid from him at that moment, there is no university allow me studying nowadays.

Obviously, the wise friends are very important to me, but it dose not mean that my facetious friends are less crucial. The day spending in school is very boring, and everyday we likely repeat doing the same things: studying, eating, sleeping... and continuously listening to up to eight classes everyday makes me almost exhausted. However, at least, I can enjoy the short but very happy time in the break, all of that attributing to my most humorous friend. He always be besieged by such a large number of students, and also, he was able to make everybody laugh without self-control. I have to say, no matter how boring and fade a party is, if he was there, the atmosphere can not get hotter anymore. Without this humorous friend, a bulk of happiness in my life will lost.

Thanks to my bright friend, he helps me passing by the most difficult time in my life; thanks to my humorous friend, he makes my plain life so colorful. All in all, it does not matter if my friends are ingenious or not, if they are funny or not, since both of them are all my precious and indispensable portions in my whole life.

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Everybody in the world has many friends, from classmates to co-workers, from younger to elder; some of which are great humor; while some of others are very smart. Is it very important for your friends with high intelligent rather than with a good sense of humor? I don’t think so. As for me, from the sense of truly friendship, both two kinds of friends are equally cardinal for me.(开头写得很好哦)
My bright friends with high intelligent will give me a helpful hand when I am being confused in difficulties. And in most times, when I am facing with big trouble that beyond my personal capacity, my smart friends always can help me to find a good way freeing me out, and I really appreciate their help. Besides, many excellent friends surrounding me do help me a lot on my studying aspect. Once time, when I was studying in the high school, I could not catch up with my classmates or follow the teachers. I felt very disappointed and upset at that time, and was going to give up myself. However, one of my friends, the best student in our class, forwardly tutored me with my weakness on study. If there were no aid from him at that moment, there would be no university allow me studying nowadays. (注意虚拟语气的用法)
Obviously, the wise friends are very important to me, but it dose not mean that my facetious friends are less crucial. The days spending in school is very boring, and we likely repeat doing the same things everyday: studying, eating, sleeping... and continuously listening to up to eight classes everyday makes me almost exhausted. However, at least, I can enjoy the short but very happy time in the break, all of that attributing to my most humorous friend. He always be besieged by such a large number of students, and also, he was able to make everybody laugh without self-control. I have to say, no matter how boring and fade a party is, if he was there, the atmosphere can not get hotter anymore. Without the humorous friend, a bulk of happiness in my life will lost.留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USAM({D4`kThanks to my bright friend, he helps me passing by the most difficult time in my life; thanks to my humorous friend, he makes my plain life so colorful. All in all, it does not matter if my friends are ingenious or not, if they are funny or not, since both of them are all my precious and indispensable portions in my whole life. (结尾写的很好啊！)


楼主的文章写的很好，层次分明，句子恰当，让人一看就懂。是一篇很不错的文章，我该向楼主学习。
里面出现了一些时态错误和一些小毛病，以后能注意的话你的文章就Perfect了！

d596086UID: 2522476

谢谢你的修改啊。。。你说的问题我以后多加注意
主要是这个题目比较好写而已

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文章很好，结构清晰，也比较新颖，例子也很生动，呵呵