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1.7号作业2006.10.29
Young people enjoy life better than the older people
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As the saying that the largest capital of young people is the prime, and it is really reasonable.  Young people have good health, ample energy, and wide interest; all of which afford them a better way to enjoy the modern life. But every coin has two sides. From some extent, the older people have a better perception of the enjoyment, as well as much more time spending on it; therefore, they can enjoy the lifetime in a more meaningful way than the young people.

The young people, who are at the height of splendour in the whole life time, can enjoy the life in various ways, some of which are limited for the older people. Because of the good body condition, the youth can play drastic sports game to exhibit strong vigor; because of the young age, young people can eat almost every kind of delicious food without much worry; because of the strong receptivity, young guys can enjoy many modern recreations, such as play games online. On the contrary, as for the older ones, they can not play too many movements; and can not eat too much food with a high amount of oil and fat; besides, most of them even have no idea about using the computer, not to mention playing the exiting and complex online-games.

Although the young people have so many ways to enjoy the life which the older can not, they also endure much more pressures and burdens from private life and work place, which make them not able to enjoy the life totally. What the goals of the young people? Why should they strive so hard? They try their best to sedulous study, to painstakingly work, to diligently educate their children, all of that just in order to own a better life in the old ages. Maybe they can enjoy a travel or other things, but all of which can only be down in the holiday. As for the most time, the young people need to strive for their successful future. However, on the other hand, it is just the time for the older people to enjoy the life. They can test the sweet fruit which one using whole life strives for; they can relax themselves by watching TV and doing other easy things all the day without the pressures and troubles from the outside word; they also can enjoy a travel all the year.

What's more, since the older people have much more life-experiences than the young, they have a better known about the real enjoyment of life. The young people always are distracted with short-term things. For instance, many students are infatuated with the computer games, and spend all day playing it without studying. They though they were enjoy the time while playing games; nevertheless, one day in the future, they will quietly regret themselves wasting so much time on such meaningless affairs. Differently, you can easily find than many old people choose to read books in the spare time, because they know that the most enjoyable thing in life is not playing but studying. The knowledge is actually the real enjoyment in one's whole life.

Personally, as one of the young people, althorn I can fully enjoy the happiness in the young age, I still know the main task for me at the recent time is striving and working. So, as for the pleasure matters, I can enjoy it in the later lifetime.

[ 本帖最后由 d596086 于 2009-1-7 21:56 编辑 ]

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As the saying that the largest capital of young people is the prime, and it is really reasonable.  Young people have good health, ample energy, and wide interest; all of which afford them a better way to enjoy the modern life. But every coin has two sides. From some extent, the older people have a better perception of the enjoyment, as well as much more time spending on it; therefore, they can enjoy the lifetime in a more meaningful way than the young people. prime这个意思比较生僻

The young people, who are at the height of splendour in the whole life time, can enjoy the life in various ways, some of which are limited for the older people. Because of the good body condition, the youth can play drastic sports game to exhibit strong vigor; because of the young age, young people can eat almost every kind of delicious food without much worry; because of the strong receptivity, young guys can enjoy many modern recreations, such as play games online. On the contrary, as for the older ones, they can not play too many movements; and can not eat too much food with a high amount of oil and fat; besides, most of them even have no idea about using the computer, not to mention playing the exiting and complex online-games.段首再整个句子说说 better life 是啥就好了 d
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Although the young people have so many ways to enjoy the life which the older can not, they also endure much more pressures and burdens from private life and work place, which make them not able to enjoy the life totally. What the goals of the young people? Why should they strive so hard? They try their best to sedulous study, to painstakingly work, to diligently educate their children, all of that just in order to own a better life in the old ages. Maybe they can enjoy a travel or other things, but all of which can only be down in the holiday. As for the most time, the young people need to strive for their successful future. However, on the other hand, it is just the time for the older people to enjoy the life. They can test the sweet fruit which one using whole life strives for; they can relax themselves by watching TV and doing other easy things all the day without the pressures and troubles from the outside word; they also can enjoy a travel all the year这个论点不错.
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What's more, since the older people have much more life-experiences than the young, they have a better known about the real enjoyment of life. The young people always are distracted with short-term things. For instance, many students are infatuated with the computer games, and spend all day playing it without studying. They though they were enjoy the time while playing games; nevertheless, one day in the future, they will quietly regret themselves wasting so much time on such meaningless affairs. Differently, you can easily find than many old people choose to read books in the spare time, because they know that the most enjoyable thing in life is not playing but studying. The knowledge is actually the real enjoyment in one's whole life..f1qa5yl.C
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Personally, as one of the young people, althorn I can fully enjoy the happiness in the young age, I still know the main task for me at the recent time is striving and working. So, as for the pleasure matters, I can enjoy it in the later lifetime.
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