【12月-1月IBT综合备考活动】之【TWE写作】1.8作业 by cos

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1.8日作业07.4.21 Movies and televisions make more negative effects than positive effects on young people’s behavior.
In the era of rapid social and technological change leading to increasing mass media invading to our life, people especially the young generation will more convinent to enjoy movies and televisions. Movies and Televisions give us information about our life our country and the whole world, which made our life more ease positively, while, they also bring some negative effects that misguide to the wrong direction. In my opinion, movies and televisions make more negative effects than positive effects on young people’s behavior.
The first reason is that, movies and televisions usually include some senses about crime, which will be inevitably watched by teens. Many of students usually play game about killing a person or revenge for his partners. I asked them why they like playing at this way. "Because, people in the film did that, it's interesting!", they answered. I’m very frustrated to see this kind of situation. What a terrible phenomenon it is!
Also as we know, there is some sort of habit to watch movies and televisions. It is difficult to get rid of the habit of watch them every day or every week. Last year, I was crazy about the serial "life". I didn't miss any night to watch it. And even in the daytime, my brain is full of the pictures and actors of "life". As a result, I did pass two of my courses.
Another, we can choose other media to get the information in movies and televisions. We can read news in newspapers, rather than watch news on TV, read novels in books, rather than watch films. Books and newspapers are best friends of our humans. Anyway, movies and TVs is not indispensable in our life, keep away from them, you’ll enjoy a better life.
In conclusion, watch movies and televisions are not as good as we though at the beginning. I have discarded them when I found the negative effect is heavier than the positive ones. I hope more and more young people will join me and pay attention to protect ourselves from their negative effect.

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In the era of rapid social and technological change leading to increasing mass media invading to our life, people especially the young generation will be more convenient to enjoy movies and televisions. Movies and Televisions give us information about our life in our country and around the whole world, which made our life more ease, while, they also bring some negative effects that misguide to the wrong direction. In my opinion, movies and televisions make more negative effects than positive effects on young people’s behavior.

The first reason is that, movies and televisions usually include some senses about crime, which will be inevitably watched by teens. Many of students usually play game about killing a person or revenge for his partners. I asked them why they like playing at this way. "Because, people in the film did that, it's interesting!", they answered. I’m very frustrated to see this kind of situation. What a terrible phenomenon it is!
Also as we know, there is some sort of habit to watch movies and televisions. It is difficult to get rid of the habit of watch them every day or every week. Take me for instance, last year, I was crazy about the sitcom of "life". I didn't miss any night to watch it. And even in the daytime, my brain is full of the pictures and actors of "life". As a result, I failed two courses.

Another, we can choose other media to get the information in movies and televisions. We can read news in newspapers, rather than watch news on TV, read novels in books, rather than watch films. Books and newspapers are best friends of our humans. Anyway, movies and TVs is not indispensable in our life, keep away from them, you’ll enjoy a better life.
In conclusion, watch movies and televisions are not as good as we though at the beginning. I have discarded them when I found the negative effect is heavier than the positive ones. I hope more and more young people will join me and pay attention to protect ourselves from their negative effect.

楼主的作文总体来看不错，语句通顺，错误很少。我觉得例子如果再生动点就好了！个人意见，呵呵