【12月-1月IBT综合备考活动】之【TWE写作】1.9作业 by cos

cos7jUID: 2492350

1.9日作业07.9.8  A teacher's ability to relate well with students is more important than to give them knowledge.
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In the era of rapid social and technological change, teachers play an increasingly crucial role in most of our lives. We gain majority knowledge from our teachers. So a teacher's ability to give them knowledge seems to be important, while, in my opinion, a teacher's ability to relate well with students is more important than to give them knowledge. I'll demonstrate my view in following paragraghs.

Good relation with students is the preaquition of knowledge giving. Imaging that, a teacher fails go get well with his/her students, the students would probably don't want to listen to what he/she says in the class. Even he/she has the best way to arrange his/her lesson properly, his/her words just come into their mind and go out the other side. Finally, students do obtain little knowledge he/she gives. Luckily, my father know this point very well, who is a chemistry teacher. His students, including me, always like listening to him and talking with him, because he knows how to relate well to his students. In his class, we pay all of our attention to what he said, and get the knowledge impressively. Anyway, good relationship is one of the best ways to teach students easily for a teacher.

Also, students will improve their interpersonal skills, if their teacher get will with them. They will graduately find the ways to improve relationship, which their teacher used on them. Take me for example, I got my interpersonal skills from my father, when I was in my middle school. This ability is something more than knowledge. You only can learn from others rather than from books. I'm very luck to get the ability, when I was learning chemistry from my father.

If I'm so lucky to be teacher in the future, I would get well with my students first, and then motivate their interest to me, to my class, to the discipline I teach, finally, they will get both knowledge on textbooks and social ability of interpersonal skills.

d596086UID: 2522476

写的还不错
现在的话不要太在意时间写，开始写就努力写多一点，文章多展开
像第三段举例后，发现文章段落字数还不够，那就多写几句总结的句子，或者从另一个方面再补充一下

xlwxxyUID: 2568970

第一个例子细节再多一点；
第二个例子再展开一下；
最后再丰富一点；
会更好。
不过看临场发挥啦。
语句还通顺，有些词比较好。