今天写的作文

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对自己今天的作文实在是没有信心,所以拿出来给大家看看.个人感觉有点像Toefl文章.这种文章可以作为SAT文章吗?

Almost everyone dreams to be famous. People love the feeling to be known and to be popular. I admit that sometimes fame brings happiness, yet I thing that most of the times, not being famous offers more pleasure.

. a$ S- G6 g# D; G1 Q3 c9 Z2 t9 lAdmittedly, fame brings happiness. To be recognized by strangers provides pleasure and satisfies our vanity. However, I believe that a lot of people who are famous are willing to trade their fame for a little privacy. This can be best examplified by actors and actresses. Some people only acknowledge how glamorous actors are on red carpet, disgarding the fact that actors had problems too. Not once have I seen actors quarreling with paparazzi and are annoyed by media intruding into their personal life. I’ve seen a picture of a well-known actress grabbing a paparazzo’s camera, trying to smash it. The actress was visibly annoyed. Lack of privacy is a problem brought by fame and I don’t think that living in an environment with no privacy provides happiness.
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2 Y0 k' R5 `! ^9 KBeing ordinary also fives us more freedom. Every word or action famous people say or take are put under microscopes to be examined. Therefore, they have to be more careful with their remarks and behavior. Prince Harry is a well-known figure. Lots of people wish that they were him because his life seems so luxurious and alluring. Yet, for the Prince, fame means to be more careful in public. Prince Harry had been accused of using four-letter words and hurting journalists when he was drunk. He has been a headache for the royal family because of his inappropriate behavior. But for most people, cursing and 酒后失态 is quite normal and can be spotted anywhere at anytime. The only problem is that for famous people, they have influence on the public. Whatever mistake they make will be accused as a bad image. If they can’t live a normal life due to fame, how can they be happy?

- h' k. a2 x' G  w4 }Fame brings not only glamour, but pain too. Though people seem happy when they’re famous, but I thing the trouble fame causes overweigh the advantages. Therefore, I don’t think that fame offers happiness. I’d rather be ordinary.

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2 h2 L# n5 Y/ X' s& I4 p[ 本帖最后由 brenfan 于 2009-1-16 13:12 编辑 ]

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原帖由 lengygf 于 2009-1-16 14:14 发表
2 @. x8 I( L# H3 h) W有点像我高一时候写的英语作文

幼稚？

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记得一个帖子讲写文章的五段论

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原帖由 东北女孩 于 2009-1-16 21:43 发表
记得一个帖子讲写文章的五段论

最讨厌的就是五段论哦~托福的时候都没有那么写。