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本帖最后由 不会太久vivian 于 2009-1-21 19:27 编辑
按照ddcmj的指导~改过之后·第二段加了头删了尾·结尾加了呼应·基本上·有了看相,结构完整。可是底子不好,论点有点单薄··逻辑不够深刻··· 以后要好好想论点啊···:p~~多谢的ddcmj呢~~~
I disagree with the statement ,on the contrary, i hold a strong positive attitude toward the view that having meals together means a lot to each member in family.
For grandparents, is happyness to see kids. Usually ,they live in the big but empty department alone.The thing they looking forward most is sons and daughters bringing kids coming for meal,which also bringing the laugh and care. I thought of my grandparents when I saw the title. Always, i receive the phone call from my grandma ,'I'v cooked your favourite duck,are you coming tonight?’ Parents are the people who missing you most,they maybe worry if there is no news from you for several days. Therefore,having meal regularly with parents is meaningful for them ,which contains love and care.
For children, dinner time is a good opportunity to communicate with each other. As children grows up,their mind are developing. Parents often know nothing about what their kids are thinking, although they lives together . When you are seated/sitting beside the table for more than half an hour,things get changed,you have to say something. You may talk about the weather ,news,or something happened around .In this way, children get ideas exchanged with parents thus makes them become friends.
For husbands or wifes,the meal time is the most enjoyable time. Pretty daughter's joke is a good method to relax them from full day's tired work. Having a taste of the delicious food cooked by tender wife made husband feel that married her is the most right decision him have ever made. Eating together is becoming an small activity which full of fun .
In my opinion, as a conclusion, having meal with family regularly is becoming more and more important. With the increase of efficient , the time we left for family is decreasing. Having meal together, to make sure the health of grandparents,to find a excuse to commucate with sons,to feel the romance among lovers. It follows that,do not save the tiny half an hour for meal.After the keen competition from society, during the precious time ,people will find the warm and love from family.
ddcmj啊 你的名字·好奇怪·cmj,莫非,搓麻将?
~这句也满奇怪,真是不知道怎么改的好·于是搬出来 看有没有大侠路过拔刀相助一把:
中文是·再火热的电视也无法吸引外公外婆,只有孙女的到来才能令他们脸上有笑容。
No matter how hot the movie is in TV, my grandparents'smile won't show up, unless the lovely face of grandson turns up. |
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