Issue49【0906G ANap Hand 作文互改小组】第四次作业 by irvine666

irvine666UID: 2575525

最近看了点Goethe的文章,想着发展一下新的写作思想,结果憋了将近2小时,写成完全赞同了...

TOPIC: ISSUE49 - "Imaginative works such as novels, plays, films, fairy tales, and legends present a more accurate and meaningful picture of human experience than do factual accounts. Because the creators of fiction shape and focus reality rather than report on it literally, their creations have a more lasting significance."
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Splendid development in the realm of literature and performing art manage to emancipate thinking and mind of human beings. Though it is true that tribulation and happiness in human experience are to serve as a catalyst for individuals' maturity, the imaginative works offer a more appropriate and more comfortable way for people to reach out to success. Imaginative works, as are demonstrated below, could be an easy-accepted approach to citizens to realize their own world and life experience.

Generated to be realistic, the ones are utilized, by the functions of factual examples, to illustrate the experiences of predecessors to individuals to enhance their conditions in competition or cooperation. When faced with sealed future, the anxiety of ignorance and negligence, which excruciate one's heart seriously, could be eliminated by the experiences of predecessors. Evaluating these phlegmatic instances, the inexperienced, who are eager to do the trick, may endeavor to absorb the essences. However, unfortunately, filling with plenty of gratuitous information, these realistic affairs, which are regarded as one bright light aimed the darkness, may be too complex and incomprehensible to demonstrate their meanings definitely. Furthermore, distanced by times, and confined by environment, most examples are impossible for individuals to adopt. Since the factual examples of the sophisticated dissatisfied a myriad of people, another form of showing experiences and lessons emerged --- Imaginative works.

Such works, as outcomes of writters and artists, illustrate what happened in the authors' daily lives and what occurred in their private ideologies to readers. Such are conclusions and abstractions of factual instances, established as it are, like objective truth, are eternal and universal. It is self-evident that where there is no life, there is no imagination. Considering as opposite direction, some people may argue that since the works are merely embodiments of life, one should regards factual human experiences as the Bible of Christianity actually. They may further put forward that pure fictions are detrimental to individuals to comprehend the essences of modern world. Nonetheless, these works are not simply embodiments of reality, but also, vivid reflections of reality. And they are derived from imagination, which based on and stemmed from the environment of society, not fantasy. This form of artistic expression manifests human practices and lessons dramatically and concretely. Hence, once an imaginative work is produced, it draws an accurate and meaningful picture of life.

Moreover, were their conception defined as Kant, the imaginative works such as novels, plays, films, fairy tales, and legends are "shortcuts" for human beings to understand the observation of sense. Produced as the epitomes of society and daily life, no other artistic or literary fruit receive more resonances and appreciations in reflecting human experiences explicitly than imagination works. Both because the purposes are illustrating one or some aspects of human experiences distinctly, and the way to express stories by authors is straightforward and visual, the imaginative works fascinate a myriad of people to make out what are really beneficial for them in the experiences of their forebears. By the film of Matrix, public realizes that revolution and self-liberation comes along with long-term striving and tremendous perils; And by a fairy tales of The Little Mermaid, both children and adult establish a conviction that love is dedicating to each other. Understanding the meanings insightfully, human beings thereby attempt to receive the experiences.

It is imagination that supplements the faults of factual examples to reveal their intrinsic connotations straightforward to public; It is imagination that turns the abstract theories over to actual essences; and it is imagination that enlightens the public further to realize what is, eternal and universe. In other words, the imaginative works, with a lot of work and summing-up of authors in it, present an accurate and meaningful drawing of human experience. These works, eclipse the factual accounts.

irvine666UID: 2575525

忘了写提纲,来个简易的:
1.factual examples have too much information to guild people accurately.
2.imaginative works provide vivid expressions to make idea clear.
3.imaginative works are more accurate for their both special content and inner attitude of authors toward the stories or paintings to illustrate the human experience.

goingeastUID: 2439824

Irvine的这篇文章，我看了两天，用词很好，比我丰富多了，表达也不错，算是一篇佳作。我给版主说说看看能不能给个优先。。
Such works, as outcomes of writters[writers] and artists, illustrate what happened in the authors' daily lives and what occurred in their private ideologies to readers
These works, [,去掉] eclipse the factual accounts.