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[未归类] 【09年1月-4月】TOEFL作文互改小组-之【TWE作文】1月24号作业 by genius_east [复制链接]

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发表于 2009-1-27 15:28:17 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
本帖最后由 genius_east 于 2009-1-29 14:14 编辑

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Nowdays eating meals with families regularly is not important any more. Usespecific reasons and examples to support your answer.



Family is an essential part of life. As a research shows, familylife is one of the most important factors in happiness. In my opinion, there isno doubt that eating meals with families regularly is definitely important.Through gathering and eating meals, we can keep a healthy relationship andpromote mutual emotion with our families.

It is hard to imagine that if families rarely eat meals together, howcan they keep a normal relationship each other? A husband is always eating mealsoutside, while his wife is left home alone. If you were she, what would yousay?
Furthermore, nowadays, people areso busy that they have little leisure time to share with their families. For acomfortable family life, we work hard. But if we have no time with ourfamilies, what's the meaning of a hard work? A family shouldn't be a lonelyplace for we cannot endure loneliness. We need to stay with our relatives. Weneed to enjoy a happy meal and a healthy life.

What's more, human beings are not machines working days and nights aswell as animals living by their instinct but emotional creatures. We can’t livewithout love. We are trying our best to seek an opportunity to strength ourlove with families for love is not self-seeking. Obviously, eating meals is thechance. We can relax, chat, and laugh during a meal time, even though we are soexhausted and distressed for our work. Compared with a casual meal alone, afamily meal brings us a new life filling with love. Not only do we get adelicious meal, also we improve our mutual love. What a perfect chance it is!

In conclusion, since it is important for us to have a healthyrelationship and promote mutual love with our families, we must have a regularmeal together.
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