【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组 第四次作业 by lewinsky】

lewinskyUID: 2479218

Should students at university or in college choose difficult courses even if they cannot get top grades? While i concede that excellent students have the ability to take formidable classes,in most other cases,however, it is by encouraging students to accept challenge rather than to evade difficulties and, in turn, gain a capacity to elevate themselves.
   According to prior experiences and stereotype, a myriad of people claim that the most important measures of a college student's academic performance are tests. That's not necessarily true to some extent, from my perspective, those who get normal grades have potential academic talents as well. Unfortunate thing is many Chinese students who may not be good at taking examinations, for instance, there are very superb students who have good minds.Nevertheless, they merely get lost in the system which has been so regimented that each student has to choose courses by the grades. In this case, we human-beings are losing talent that way.
   Furthermore,this is particular true which going back the question of the arts and artists. All too often we observe that creative people are not good classical students, in the sense of being proficient in examinations,and good at getting grades.They may work very hard,but their minds work differently which do not work by getting answers to questions. As a matter of fact, we should not judged students based on their paper record which impede them continue to pursue knowledge.
   In sum, grades, as no doubt,are of great significance in education system.Now it seems that, however,a multitude of people have exerted a value on it which is beyond its true worth. Consequently, i strongly agree with that students should choose difficult classes no matter how low grades are.

neozhongnlUID: 2448721

Should students at university or in college choose difficult courses even if they cannot get top grades? While i concede that excellent students have the ability to take formidable classes,in most other cases,however, it is by encouraging students to accept challenge rather than to evade difficulties and, in turn, gain a capacity to elevate themselves.（个人认为这两点逻辑上转折似乎不成立，因而造成了文章中心在第一段看来不明确）( M' C4 B0 _& h6 d
   According to prior experiences and stereotype, a myriad of people claim that the most important measures of a college student's academic performance are tests. That's not necessarily true to some extent, from my perspective, those who get normal grades have potential academic talents as well. Unfortunate thing is many Chinese students who may not be good at taking examinations, for instance, there are very superb students who have good minds.Nevertheless, they merely get lost in the system which has been so regimented that each student has to choose courses by the grades. In this case, we human-beings are losing talent that way.（读了第二段似乎感觉楼主重点在叙述whether or not a student could get top grades的问题。。。但在下认为题目更多的是在讨论学生是否应该选择困难的课程，（即使不能得高分）。。。因此似乎分数的问题对于题目是次要的）
   Furthermore,this is particular true （which）删 going back the question of the arts and artists. All too often we observe that creative people are not good classical students, in the sense of being proficient in examinations,and good at getting grades.They may work very hard,but their minds work differently which do not work by getting answers to questions. As a matter of fact, we should not judged students based on their paper record which impede them continue to pursue knowledge.
   In sum, grades, as no doubt,are of great significance in education system.Now it seems that, however,a multitude of people have exerted a value on it which is beyond its true worth. Consequently, i strongly agree with that students should choose difficult classes no matter how low grades are.

（楼主用词都很好，应该是准备过G的，但是似乎有点没有抓住题目的重点，个人意见哦：））

lewinskyUID: 2479218

确实感觉到有点难写，论点都有点牵强
    谢谢批改哈。。。