【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组 angelool 第五次作业】

angeloolUID: 166036

Do you agree or disagree, technology make people's lives simpler in turn to make people's lives more complicated.

Development of science and technology has an great impact on the life of everybody. Some people may argue that the innovation makes people's lives more complicated, because without understanding the principle of the invention they even couldn't finish the easiest thing, such as entering the right codes to get into his room. However, I believe, in most of the cases, people's lives have become much simpler due to the technology which are utilized in all aspects of the society.

On the one hand, in the every aspect of the life, people can communicate with each other much more conveniently. For instance, one had to write letters to let the other one know some quite important thing in the past, which is time consuming and it could have be too late when the letter arrived. Now, each one has one phone to say hello to anybody immediately wherever the person is. With the introduction of computer and Internet technology, the limit of time and space has been greatly diminished. The international meeting between USA, China and Japan could be easily held when all the people are in their respective work places, which is owing to the improvement of technology.

On the other hand, inventions of different kinds of machine has freed quite a huge of people from boring and energy consuming work. Many things could be simply done just with one press on the button, and other procedures will be conducted by the instruments. In the old days, borrowing a book from the library is really a tedious thing because for most of time you are looking up the one you want among the countless cards. When you finally found the card, it would cost you more time to wait for the book keeper until he finds the one in the end. Nowadays, the condition has been totally different. Usually it only takes you a few minutes from choosing the right book on the Internet to getting the book from the "hand" of the robot, the function of which is to pick up the books and carry them to the readers by following the instructions from the computer. The life has become way more pleasant and convenient than before.

In summary, various kinds of useful inventions and cutting-edge technology have made everybody's life more enjoyable and much simpler. Due to that, we could spare more time and energy making more beneficial creations and in turn simplify our everyday life to let it be more meaningful and colourful.


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mimicaUID: 2457275

Development of science and technology has an (a)great impact on the life of everybody(on everybody's life). Some people may argue that the innovation makes people's lives more complicated, because without understanding the principle of the invention they even couldn't finish the easiest thing, such as entering the right codes to get into his room. However, I believe, in most of the (删去)cases, people's lives have become much simpler due to the technology which are utilized in all aspects of the society.

On the （删去）one hand, in the every aspect of the life, （这一句插在这里有点不明白）people can communicate with each other much more conveniently. For instance, one had to write letters to let the other one （others）know some quite important thing(s) in the past, which is time consuming and it could have be too late when the letter arrived. Now, each one has one phone to say hello to anybody immediately wherever the person is. (中式思维)With the introduction of computer and Internet technology, the limit of time and space has been greatly diminished. The international meeting between USA, China and Japan could be easily held when all the people are in their respective work places, which is owing to the improvement of technology.

On the other hand, inventions of different kinds of machine has freed quite a huge of people from boring and energy consuming work. Many things could be simply done just with one press on the button, and other procedures will be conducted by the instruments. In the old days, borrowing a book from the library is （was）really a tedious thing because for most of time you are (were)looking up the one you wanted among the countless cards. When you finally found the card, it would cost you more time to wait for the book keeper until he finds the one in the end. Nowadays, the condition has been totally different. Usually it only takes you a few minutes from choosing the right book on the Internet to getting the book from the "hand" of the robot, the function of which is to pick up the books and carry them to the readers by following the instructions from the computer. The life has become way (删)more pleasant and convenient than before.

In summary, various kinds of useful inventions and cutting-edge technology have made everybody's life more enjoyable and much simpler. Due to that, we could spare more time and energy making more beneficial creations and in turn simplify our everyday life to let it be more meaningful and colourful.

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2.某些句子中式思维，句型有待改进。
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alexdelUID: 2265655

Do you agree or disagree, technology make people's lives simpler in turn to make people's lives more complicated.

        Development of science and technology has an great impact on the life of everybody. Some people may argue that the innovation makes people's lives more complicated, because without understanding the principle of the invention they even couldn't finish the easiest thing, such as entering the right codes to get into his room. However, I believe, in most of the cases, people's lives have become much simpler due to the technology which are utilized in all aspects of the society.

        On the one hand, in the every aspect of the life, people can communicate with each other much more conveniently. For instance, one had to write letters to let the other one(another,没有两个人的限定） know some quite important thing(s) in the past, which is time consuming(consumed) and it could have be(been) too late when the letter arrived. Now, each one(everyone,没有多人的限定） has one(a) phone to say hello to anybody immediately wherever the person is. With the introduction of computer and Internet technology, the limit of time and space has been greatly diminished. The international meeting between USA, China and Japan could be easily held when all the people are in their respective work places, which is owing to（用一般现在时态） the improvement of technology.
        On the other hand, inventions of different kinds of machine has freed quite a huge (+amount) of people from boring and energy consuming work. Many things could be simply done just with one press on the button, and other procedures will(would,因为前面用的could) be conducted by the instruments. （用个过渡）In the old days, borrowing a book from the library is(was) really a tedious thing because for most of time you are(were) looking up the one you want(wanted) among the countless cards. When you finally found the card, it would cost you more time to wait for the book keeper until he finds(found) the one in the end. Nowadays, the condition has been totally different(changed,different用于两者区别）. Usually it only takes you a few minutes from choosing the right book on the Internet to getting the book from the "hand" of the robot, the function of which is to pick up the books and carry them to the readers by following the instructions from the computer. The life has become way(?) more pleasant and convenient than before.7 L6 d0 Z, }& a0 k& y$ d2 h* e$ [* b

       In summary, various kinds of useful inventions and cutting-edge technology have made everybody's life more enjoyable and much simpler. Due to that, we could spare more time and energy making more beneficial creations and in turn simplify our everyday life to let(make) it be more meaningful and colourful.

感觉楼主的作文越来越没地方可改了，呵呵。