[作文] 【综合写作】一点小总结~ [复制链接]

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发表于 2009-2-18 12:50:40 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

个人觉得，这部分真是忒简单。。。
但是第一次写还是死的很惨，翻了下资料。后来写几遍就还有点人样了·~共享下大家一起进步~

【综合写作】
score 5
1.有效回答了问题
2.很好的组织，扩展，用了合适的细节
3.统一性、逻辑层进、连贯
4.语言一致性，句式词汇的变化，地道的表达。可以有小错误。

综上
稿纸对折。。
1.阅读的时候，e.g 左边，大概记个主题，关键是3点（一般都是，仔细找，有的时候不会有特别明显的连词。）关键词必然得记。当然记的前提是能够看完&理解全文。时间充足再记点细节。时间多嘛再顺手记俩词语搭配。个人觉得其实要点足够（理解第一！），因为写的时候主要写听力的东西~
2.听力，of course 另一边， e.g 右边。一般来说，听力里面的1，2，3肯定特别明显~what's more 啊，Furthermore啊，不记这些，第一，还是理解~理解听力怎样攻击/支持阅读的，记下反驳的要点&细节，细节来不及写上就记脑子里。不要因为记而放弃听！大忌~~

最后写的时候嘛，记得把记上的想办法都写上，阅读和听力的关系一定要表达清楚~！
后面贴上俩模板~主要掌握它的对比词汇。当然直接套用的话，个人觉得里面有些词重复的有些多~

综合写作Templates
1. 1.Controversy (144words)
In the lecture, the professor makes several points about__________________. The professor argues that_____________________. However, the reading contends that_______________. The professor’s lecture casts doubt on the reading by using a number of points that are contrary to _____________.

The first point that the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is that _______________. According to the professor, _____________________. ________________differs from the reading in that the reading states_________________. The point made by the professor casts doubt on the reading because_____________________.

Another point that the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is _____________________. The professor claims that _____________________________. However, the reading states ____________________. This point is contradicted by ________________.

Finally the professor states that, on the contrary of the reading, ________________________. In other words, ________________________________. This directly contradicts what the reading indicates, because___________________.

In conclusion, the points makes in the lecture contrast with reading. ____________ and _________demonstrate that ____________is in doubt.

补充句型
This makes explanation in the reading seem less likely.

2. 2。Support
In the lecture, the professor makes several points about ______________________. The professor argues that ________________________. The points made by the professor agree with ____________. In fact, the examples used by the professor support ____________________.

The first point that the professor uses to support the reading is that _______________. According to the professor, _____________________. ________________supports the reading, which holds that _________________. The point made by the professor support on the reading because _____________________.

Furthermore, the professor bolsters the reading by stating that _____________________. The professor claims that _____________________________. This point agrees with the reading, which contends that ____________________. ________________shows the truth of the reading because________________.

Finally the professor states that, in support of the reading, ________________________. Specifically, ________________________________. This perfectly reinforces what the reading indicates, because___________________.

In conclusion, the points makes in the lecture support the reading. ____________ and _________demonstrate that ____________is valid.