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[活动] TOEFL 4—6月Dark_Tournament写作小组 angelmuzilfyer的 第5次作业 [复制链接]

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topic:Do you agree or disagree, technology make people’s lives simpler in turn to make people’s lives more complicated.
A person in the 17th century would never imagine one day he could fly to the other side of the world for only several hours. But this is the most common thing nowadays. It is technology that let the legend come true. With the development of technology, lives lead to be so vivid and simpler than ever before, especially after the computer has been developed. Although there may be some disadvantages, I believe there are far more advantages.
Firstly, take computers as an example, people who surf on the internet can not only do some online chatting, play exciting games and watching latest movies, but also shop on the internet and perform business, which will absolutely save time and money a great deal. That is also the reason why my friend lily seldom goes out, but still has new clothes to show off even during the busy exam week. In addition, to gain some specific information, all you need to do is just click on the mouse, input some words, and after few seconds, you can acquire all you want. however, if you refer to the books in the library, it may take you half a day.
Secondly, technology turns the world into a mall village. Wherever you are , whenever it is ,you can obtain all the news around the world at the first time. Meanwhile, World tourism is never a science fiction, just as the saying goes “anything is possible”, there is no need for people to sail on the sea for months to go abroad forever. Airplanes solve all the problems.
Thousands of examples to be listed can account for the convenience technology brings. I can not imagine how life will be without technology. we benefit so much from it that colors and fun are fulfilled in our life. We convince the golden policy the The faster the technology develops, the better our life will be.

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本帖最后由 duduyan11 于 2009-2-19 10:44 编辑

topic:Do you agree or disagree, technology make people’s lives simpler in turn to make people’s lives more complicated.
A person in the 17th century would never imagine one day he could fly to the other side of the world for only several hours. But this is the most common thing nowadays. It is technology that let the legend come (comes ) true. With the development of technology, lives lead(这个用不用被动呢) to be so vivid and simpler than ever before, especially after the computer has been developed. Although there may be some disadvantages, I believe there are far more advantages.+ u& d: T1 S4 v
Firstly, take computers as an example, people who surf on the internet can not only do some online chatting, play exciting games and watching  (watch  the ) latest movies, but also shop on the internet and perform business, which will absolutely save time and money a great deal. That is also the reason why my friend lily seldom goes out, but still has new clothes to show off even during the busy exam week. In addition, to gain some specific information, all you need to do is just click on the mouse, input some words, and after few seconds, you can acquire all you want. however, if you refer to the books in the library, it may take you half a day.% `. m% S5 ^+ D% Y4 [% e4 B+ f
Secondly, technology turns the world into a mall village. Wherever you are , whenever it is ,you can obtain all the news around the world at the first time. Meanwhile, World tourism is never a science fiction, just as the saying goes “anything is possible”, there is no need for people to sail on the sea for months to go abroad forever. Airplanes solve all the problems.4 x2 O6 ~* W+ l8 _. k
Thousands of examples to be listed can account for the convenience technology brings. I can not imagine how life will be without technology. we benefit so much from it that colors and fun are fulfilled in our life. We convince the golden policy the The faster the technology develops ( the faster technology develops ), the better our life will be.
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谢谢~~辛苦了~ 2# duduyan11

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topic: Do you agree or disagree, technology make people’s lives simpler in turn to make people’s lives more complicated.

A person in the 17th century would never imagine one day he could fly to the other side of the world for only several hours. But this is the most common thing nowadays. It is technology that let the legend come true. With the development of technology, lives lead to be so vivid and simpler than ever before, especially after the computer has been developed. Although there may be some disadvantages, I believe there are far more advantages.

Firstly, take computers as an example, people who surf on the internet can not only do some online chatting, play exciting games and watching latest movies, but also shop on the internet and perform business, which will absolutely save time and money a great deal. That is also the reason why my friend lily seldom goes out, but still has new clothes to show off even during the busy exam week. In addition, to gain some specific information, all you need to do is just click on the mouse, input some words, and after few seconds, you can acquire all you want. however, if you refer to the books in the library, it may take you half a day.

Secondly, technology turns the world into a mall village. Wherever you are, whenever it is ,you can obtain all the news around the world at the first time. Meanwhile, World tourism is never a science fiction, just as the saying goes “anything is possible”, there is no need for people to sail on the sea for months to go abroad forever. Airplanes solve all the problems.

Thousands of examples to be listed can account for the convenience technology brings. I can not imagine how life will be without technology. We benefit so much from it that colors and fun are fulfilled in our life. We convince the golden policy the The() faster the technology develops, the better our life will be.
除了很少的拼写问题,就找不出问题,我的水平只能到这了,可以找别人再看看,在我看来这叫范文
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