【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组 ０００第六次作业】

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The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide

What is the best travel? A tour guide led group or travelers themselves led group? There is no consensus among people. Some people argue that travel themselves is more freedom than other kinds travel. On the other side of the leaf, others, including me, are convinced that a tour guide led group is the best way of trip.

There are two fundamental arguments to support my claim. The first one has to do the purpose of the travel. For one thing there is no denying that most of people travel for feeling the different style of their common life. Such kinds of place are surely having not been familiar by the travelers. Thus, the tour guide could help you to know the culture and history of the new place. For another, the tour guide will use there knowledge to let the travelers to know more about the place than travel travelers alone. Like the Summer Palace will be unusual after you know the buildings' history. A survey conducted by Global Travel Committee indicates that most of travelers want to know the history and the local cutler where they traveled through tour guide.

In addition, why so many travelers are fond of travel with tour guide is that guide will save their time and lighten their finical burden. On one hand, it is universally acknowledge that tour guide will made the schedule in the travel to let visitors travel more place at the same time. As for me, the tour guides make the travel line very well after know where I want to place when I was travel in Beijing. On the other, we can not emphasize the finical power influence our travel too much. Obviously, most guide could buy the discount ticket and told us where is not worth to play.

Nevertheless, one argument, also the one I find most compelling, against my claim, is that visitors will have individual purposing and loss the flax time schedule when we travel by tour guide. Although I consider this point, in my observation, we could discuss with the guide and choose the guide who suite us. One needs look no further than the successful traveler to find amply evidences that this is the case. For instance, my professor is 56 years old and also a big fun of trip; he will discuss the schedule with his guide before travel and find the elder guides who are good at history and local culture. Now, he is famous in travel in our school.

In sum, this issue is a complex one, which requires subjective judgments. Thus, travel by ourselves surely satisfy the freedom and faxable of the travel. Other fundamental needs of our travel like, the history of a city, the culture of local people, are more well-met by tour guide travel than by ourselves travel. In the final analysis, a tour guide led group is the best way of trip.

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【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组 ０００第六次作业】

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The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide

What is the best travel? A tour guide led group or travelers themselves led group? （此表达错误，建议与下一句合并起来表达）There is no consensus among people. Some people argue that traveling themselves is more freedom than other kinds of traveling. On the other side of the leaf, others, including me, are convinced that a tour guide led group is the best way of trip.

There are two fundamental arguments to support my claim. The first one has to do with the purpose of the travel. For one thing there is no denying that most of people travel for feeling to feel the different style different from of their common life. Such kinds of places are surely having not been familiar with by the travelers. Thus, the tour guide could help you to know the culture and history of the new place. For another, the tour guide will use there knowledge to let the travelers to know more about the place than travel travelers alone. Like the Summer Palace will be unusual after you know the buildings' history. A survey conducted by Global Travel Committee indicates that most of travelers want to know the history and the local cutler where they traveled through (?) tour guide.

In addition, why so many travelers are fond of travel with tour guide is that guide will save their time and lighten （好词） their finical burden. On one hand, it is universally acknowledge that tour guide will made the schedule in the travel to let visitors travel more place at the same time. As for me, the tour guides make the travel line very well after know where I want to place when I was travel in Beijing. On the other, we can not emphasize the finical power influence our travel too much. Obviously, most of the guides could buy the discount ticket and told us where is not worth to play.

Nevertheless, one argument, also the one I find most compelling, against my claim, is that visitors will have individual purposing and loss the flax time schedule when we travel by tour guide. Although I consider this point, in my observation, we could discuss with the guide and choose the guide who suite us. One needs to look no further than the successful traveler to find amply evidences that this is the case.(这句话看不懂，请赐教J) For instance, my professor is 56 years old and also a big fun of trip; he will discuss the schedule with his guide before travel and find the elder guides who are good at history and local culture. Now, he is famous in travel in our school.（最后一句可以和前句合并）

In sum, this issue is a complex one, which requires subjective judgments. Thus, travel by ourselves surely satisfy the freedom and faxable of the travel. Other fundamental needs of our travel like, understanding the history of a city, the culture of local people, are more well-met by tour guide travel than by ourselves travel. In the final analysis, a tour guide led group is the best way of trip.

小评：
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请先用WORD查错，个别语法问题请注意；
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结构不错，注意提高句式的复杂和多样性。