Dark_Tournament 第八次作业 by lewinsky

lewinskyUID: 2479218

It is more important to use land for human need than to save land for endangered animals

    A mutitude of people, who have a favorable attitude toward that economic development is suprior to endangered species, live under the illusion that using land for human need is of great significance. From my point of view, however, it is an unbearable action that taking advantage of sparse land where the only habitat for human being and animals to boost economy at the expense of extinction of endangered animals.
    As I see it, one of the fundamental argument to impose ourselves on saving land for endangered species is the fact that we human-being seized much space ,which leads to an increasing tendacy of animal extinction. Currently, what we are surrounded are the forest of skyscrapers built by concrete and steel, barely does the majority of animals have suitable enviroment for them to survive. We humans, to some extent, have a responsibility to take affirmative measures to protect their land which belongs to them.
    In addition, exploiting much land for human utilization exerts neagtive influences on enviroment. All to often we observe that clear-cutting of forests or polluting of lakes and streams due to the constructing of buildings and factories. Nowadays, most children fail to recall the conception about of limpid river, blue sky, and serne weather which resulted from the product of industrialization. In other words, enviroment problem, an extreme serious problem, has indirect something to do with overuse of land.
    Furthermore, saving land for endangered animals is an appeal to self-preservation. Apparently, there is an intricate relationship among animals including human-being which each species depends on many others for its survival. In this sense, the importance of saving land for endagered animals cannot be overstressed. In the absence of land for endangered animals might give rise to extinction which ultimately condemn million of people to death as well.
    To sum up, I uphold the opinion absolutely because saving land for endangered animal is not only a bulwark against an unpredictable future, it is alsp a way to maintain a comfortable enviroment.

chelseajcoleUID: 2589519

A mutitude(multitude) of people, who have a favorable attitude toward that economic development is suprior to endangered species, live under the illusion that using land for human need is of great significance. From my point of view, however, it is an unbearable action that taking advantage of sparse land where the only habitat for human being and animals(为什么人们和动物住的地方，直接说是creature好不好？） to boost economy at the expense of extinction of endangered animals.
开头很简洁很精彩，语言好
    As I see it, one of the fundamental argument to impose ourselves on saving land for endangered species is the fact that we human-being seized much space ,which leads to an increasing tendacy of animal extinction. Currently, what we are surrounded are the forest of skyscrapers built by concrete and steel, barely does the majority of animals have suitable enviroment for them to survive. We humans, to some extent, have a responsibility to take affirmative measures to protect their land which belongs to them.
觉得光是说理了，如果有个具体的例子可能更好

In addition, exploiting much land for human utilization exerts neagtive influences on enviroment. All to often we observe that clear-cutting of forests or polluting of lakes and streams due to the constructing of buildings and factories. Nowadays, most children fail to recall the conception about of limpid river, blue sky, and serne weather which resulted from the product of industrialization. In other words, enviroment problem（delicate enviromental balance), an extreme serious problem, has indirect something to do with overuse of land.

Furthermore, saving land for endangered animals is an appeal to self-preservation. Apparently, there is an intricate relationship among animals including human-being which each species depends on many others for its survival. In this sense, the importance of saving land for endagered animals cannot be overstressed. In the absence of land for endangered animals might give rise to extinction which ultimately condemn million of people to death as well.
这段和环境有雷同，人和动物的关系可以在环境一段中带到
To sum up, I uphold the opinion absolutely because saving land for endangered animal is not only a bulwark against an unpredictable future, it is alsp a way to maintain a comfortable enviroment.

写的很好，文笔很好，挑不出什么毛病，但觉得就是没什么具体的例子，一直在说理，不过字数已经很多了，