TOEFL 4—6月Dark_Tournament写作小组 偷闲透气 第八次作业

偷闲透气UID: 2148172

It is more important to use land for human need than to save land for endangered animals.

I always think human beings are a little more selfish than other creatures living in this world. Why? Because most of time our human beings are more likely to consider ourselves, such as our requirements to use land. We always hear somebody says that human needs land for development of our country and society, and even somebody says that using land for us is more important than saving land for endangered animals. From my personal perspective, I totally disagree this irresponsible saying. There are following reasons.

Firstly, saving land for endangered animals is important for our human beings' future. As we know, all creatures living in this world is interacting with each other, and one creature can not independently live in the world. As a dominant creature in the world, in order to satisfy our demanding and development, our humans, through population expansion, occupy many lands.
The more land used by the human, the less land that animals will have. For those endangered animals, lesser land is waiting for them. However, without these animals, our world's natural balance will be broken. Our human can not live in an unbalanced world. If our human do not care about those endangered animals, and do not provide a place for them to live in, there will be more and more animals becoming endanger animals. Can you imagine the final result? All animals in this world become endangered, and then died, only human lives lonely in the world and die lonely.

Secondly, those endangered animals are precious, not only for doing research about creature diversity, but also for educating human. If we save land for these endangered animals, our scientists will have chances to learn them. For example, through learning these animals’ special traits and their life habits, scientists will know how to keep the animals from being endangered. Also, through saving a land for those endangered animals, we can take our children to see them, and let children know the importance of protecting animals. I believe that through such a positive education way, our offspring will pay more attention to animal protection, and the chance that animal become endangered will become less.

Through my above analysis and considering the benefits mentioned, I think saving land for endangered animals is more important then using land for human need.

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It is more important to use land for human need than to save land for endangered animals." `3 e: L, n* a+ O5 D%

1 f. T1 ]! Q$ ~I always think human beings are a little more selfish than other creatures living in this world. Why? Because most of time our human beings are more likely to consider ourselves, such as our requirements to use land. We always hear somebody says that human needs land for development of our country and society, and even somebody says that using land for us is more important than saving land for endangered animals. From my personal perspective, I totally disagree with this irresponsible saying. There are two reasons，it's important for our human beings' future and also for educating human.
Firstly, saving land for endangered animals is important for our human beings' future. As we know, all creatures living in this world is interacting with each other, and one creature can not independently live in the world. As a dominant creature in the world, in order to satisfy our demanding and development, our humans, through population expansion, occupy many lands. The more land used by the human, the less land the other animals will have. For those endangered animals, lesser land is waiting for them.(这一句感觉明显和前面几句重复凑数) However, without these animals, our world's natural balance will be broken. Our human can not live in an unbalanced world. If our human do not care about those endangered animals, and do not provide a place for them to live in, there will be more and more animals becoming endanger animals. Can you imagine the final result? All animals in this world become endangered, and then become extinct, only human lives lonely in the world and die lonely.(没有具体的例子).

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Through my above analysis and considering the benefits mentioned, I think saving land for endangered animals is more important then using land for human need.
（我觉得整篇文章都缺少具体的例子，因为我自己写的是人类用地更重要，不好为你举例子，大体上想了一个，比如在Secondly里，如果能写一个通过对大熊猫的保护，增强了人们的爱心，社会更加和谐了~之类的，会更好。还有，最后能有一些具体的数字，比如以现在的速度动物灭亡，据预测多少年以后人类将成为孤家寡人，应该可以再网上找到这方面的具体数字。）
这是我第一次拍文，不知道说的对不对^L^

ghr0111UID: 2605646

It is more important to use land for human need than to save land for endangered animals." `3 e: L, n* a+ O5 D%

I always think human beings are a little more selfish than other creatures living in this world. Why? Because most of time our human beings are more likely to consider ourselves, such as our requirements to use land. We always hear somebody says that human needs land for development of our country and society, and even somebody says that using land for us is more important than saving land for endangered animals. From my personal perspective, I totally disagree with this irresponsible saying. There are two reasons，it's important for our human beings' future and also for educating human.
Firstly, saving land for endangered animals is important for our human beings' future. As we know, all creatures living in this world is interacting with each other, and one creature can not independently live in the world. As a dominant creature in the world, in order to satisfy our demanding and development, our humans, through population expansion, occupy many lands. The more land used by the human, the less land the other animals will have. For those endangered animals, lesser land is waiting for them.(这一句感觉明显和前面几句重复凑数) However, without these animals, our world's natural balance will be broken. Our human can not live in an unbalanced world. If our human do not care about those endangered animals, and do not provide a place for them to live in, there will be more and more animals becoming endanger animals. Can you imagine the final result? All animals in this world become endangered, and then become extinct, only human lives lonely in the world and die lonely.(没有具体的例子).

Secondly, those endangered animals are precious, not only for doing research about creature diversity, but also for educating human. If we save land for these endangered animals, our scientists will have chances to learn them. For example, through learning these animals’ special traits and their life habits, scientists will know how to keep the animals away from being endangered. Also, through saving a land for those endangered animals, we can take our children to see them, and let children know the importance of protecting animals. I believe that through such a positive education way, our offspring will pay more attention to animal protection, and the chance that animal become endangered will become less.
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Through my above analysis and considering the benefits mentioned, I think saving land for endangered animals is more important then using land for human need.
（我觉得整篇文章都缺少具体的例子，因为我自己写的是人类用地更重要，不好为你举例子，大体上想了一个，比如在Secondly里，如果能写一个通过对大熊猫的保护，增强了人们的爱心，社会更加和谐了~之类的，会更好。还有，最后能有一些具体的数字，比如以现在的速度动物灭亡，据预测多少年以后人类将成为孤家寡人，应该可以再网上找到这方面的具体数字。）
这是我第一次拍文，不知道说的对不对^L^

天使左路UID: 2606987

I always think human beings are a little more selfish than other creatures living in this world. Why? Because most of time our human beings are more likely to consider ourselves, such as our requirements to use land. We always hear somebody says that human needs land for development of our country（countries） and society, and even somebody says that using land for us is more important than saving land for endangered animals. From my personal perspective, I totally disagree (加上with)this irresponsible saying. There are following reasons.8 k' _* V3 _( H. \" ~8 k6 z. S, J

Firstly, saving land for endangered animals is important for our human beings' future. As we know, all creatures living in this world is interacting with each other, and one creature can not independently live in the world. As a dominant creature in the world, in order to satisfy our demanding and development, our humans, through population expansion, occupy many lands（不是通过人口的膨胀来占领土地的，是人口多了才需要地，是一种因果关系，不应该是一种手段。）.7 c7 h; S( H* e. H) Z
The more land used by the human, the less land that animals will have. For those endangered animals, lesser land is waiting for them. However, without these animals, our world's natural balance will be broken. Our human can not live in an unbalanced world. If our human do not care about those endangered animals, and do not provide a place for them to live in, there will be more and more animals becoming endanger（ed） animals. Can you imagine the final result? All animals in this world become endangered, and then died, only human lives lonely in the world and die lonely.（这段很多重复的观点，可以通过不通侧面来丰富一下这个观点，很多没必要的重复可以删除）

HSecondly, those endangered animals are precious, not only for doing research about creature diversity, but also for educating human. If we save land for these endangered animals, our scientists will have （多个more比较自然）chances to learn（study更好） them. For example, through learning these animals’ special traits and their life habits, scientists will know how to keep the animals from being endangered. Also, through saving a land for those endangered animals, we can take our children to see them, and let children know the importance of protecting animals. I believe that through such a positive education way, our offspring（s） will pay more attention to animal protection, and the chance that animal become endangered will become less. ! F+ ]) X# N  w2 r$ b

my above analysis and considering the benefits mentioned, I think saving land for endangered animals is more important then（than） using land for human need.
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偷闲透气UID: 2148172

按照各位观点，改了一下：

It is more important to use land for human need than to save land for endangered animals.
不同意。认为：为濒危动物留地重要。
理由：1. 为了人类的明天。生物链，缺一不可。
2. 留地给濒危动物可以让动物存活，以供科学家研究和教育后代保护环境。

I always think human beings are a little more selfish than other creatures living in this world. Why? Because most of time our human beings are more likely to consider ourselves, such as our requirements to use land. We always says that human needs land for development of our country and society, and even says that using land for us is more important than saving land for endangered animals. From my personal perspective, however, I totally disagree with this irresponsible saying. There are two reasons

Firstly, saving land for endangered animals is important for our human beings' future. As we know, all creatures living in this world is in a creature-chain and interacting with each other, and one creature can not independently live in the world without others. As a dominant creature in the world, and in order to satisfy our demanding and development, humans through population expansion, occupy many lands. The more land used by the human, the less land animals including endangered animal may use.
Without land to live in, more and more animals will become endangered, and endangered animals will be extinct. Then, other species which live upon these animals become endangered and extinct accordingly. Our world's natural balance will be finally broken. The irreversible loss of biodiversity has a fatal impact on the ability of humans to survive.
Can you imagine the final result? All animals in this world become endangered, and then become extinct, only human lives lonely in the world and die lonely. Some scientist even made a forecast that our world’s biodiversity will disappear within 300 hundred years if human beings do not consider other living species’ living conditions.

Secondly, those endangered animals are precious, not only for doing research about creature diversity, but also for educating human. If we save land for these endangered animals, our scientists will have more chances and time to study them. For example, through studying these animals’ special traits and their living habits, scientists will know how to keep the animals away from being endangered. Also, through saving a land for those endangered animals, we can take our children to see them, and let children know the importance of protecting animals. Taking panda as a good example, Chinese government saves land in Sichuan province to protect panda, a live fossil which has been lived in our world for more than 1,000 years. Although Panda is still an endangered animal, its amount has increased through government’s effort. Now, Chinese scientists can learn more about prehistoric animals through researching Panda, and Chinese people also learn more about the importance of animal protection.
I believe that through such a positive education way, our offspring will pay more attention to animal protection, and the chance that animal become endangered will become less. / B9 @! d/ q, c' D: ?- B0 f

Through my above analysis and considering the benefits mentioned, I think saving land for endangered animals is more important than using land for human need.