TOEFL 4—6月-Dark_Tournament小组写作 桑梓 第十一次作业

桑梓UID: 2613051

No one can refute the fact that life is filled with problem-solvings. We might also say that life is a question-solving proceed. Everyone faces different questions each day. When talking about which is the better way to solve questions,using our own knowledge or asking other people for advice, based on what I know, it depends on what kind of  question you are solving.



If the question is one of the type that you have met before , and you have found out perfect solutions. Then there is no need for you to seek other people's advice, since you know that you have the ability to work it out. Remember when we were in the elementary school, our math teachers did not teach us how to solve all the questions on the paper, but most of us could get a high mark in exams. Why? Because the teacher had taught us the methods to solve different kinds of problems. The problems might change the way it is represented, the figures might be different. As long as we grasped the methods to solve a certain type of questions, we can find the correct solutions to them however they changed. The problems we meet in our life are too much more complex than math problems, but there is something alike--after you grasp the methods to solve a kind of questions, you can totally depends on your own knowledge and experience to solve it well without the advices of other people.



However, if you are facing a problem that you have never met before, and you do not know what to do with it at all. Well, then you need some help. You can search some information on the Internet, find some books in the library. But I strongly recommend you to find other people's advices especially those who have confronted with same sorts of issues before, since those people know the methods. The old have gone through a lot in life, their experience can help us understand the world better; the young have the curiosity and energy to explore the world, they might offer us a totally new way to look at the issue; the people of our age understand our thoughts and can share theirs with us. In a word, other people's advices help us to get a thorough understanding of the problem and a nice solution.



To sum up, the better way to solve a problem is depending on the problem that you are trying to solve. There is no absolute answer. If you are quite familiar with the problem, it is OK to use your own knowledge and experience to figure it out; if you are a green hand facing the question, you'd better ask others for advices.  

lulufriendUID: 2612617

我竟然惊奇地发现你我都用了math teacher的例子~~虽然用法不大一样~而且结构上也很一致~很巧。。很欣赏你的文笔中透露的逻辑感（我所或缺的）~~一起加油吧

lulufriendUID: 2612617

1# 桑梓

呵呵~被分到改你的文呢~想说真的很巧~
我开始了哦~

No one can refute the fact that life is filled with problem-solvings. We might also say that life is a question-solving proceed. Everyone faces different questions each day. When talking about which is the better way to solve questions, using our own knowledge or asking other people for advice, based on what I know, it depends on what kind of
question you are solving.

If the question is one of the type that you have met before , and you have found out perfect solutions.(这只是一从句把，应该和主句一起构成一整句把)(,then)Then there is no need for you to seek other people's advice, since you know that you have the ability to work it out. Remember when we were in the elementary school, our math teachers did not teach us how to solve all the questions on the paper, but most of us could get a high mark in exams. Why? Because the teacher had taught us the methods to solve different kinds of problems. The problems might change the way it is(was) represented, (or)the figures might be different(可能是笔误把，两句话不能这么连). As long as we grasped the methods to solve a certain type of questions, we can(could) find the correct solutions to them however they changed. The problems we meet in our life are too much more complex than math problems, but there is something alike--after you grasp the methods to solve a kind of questions, you can totally depends on your own knowledge and experience to solve it well without the advices(advice不能加s) of other people.(推理过程很明确，正是我所缺乏的~好好向你学习)

However, if you are facing a problem that you have never met before, and you do not know what to do with it at all. (这只是一从句把，应该和主句一起构成一整句把？？)Well, then you need some help. You can search some information on the Internet, find some books in the library. But I strongly recommend you to find other people's advices especially those who have confronted with same sorts of issues before, since those people know the methods(可以接个副词~). The old have gone through a lot in life, their experience can help us understand the world better; the young have the curiosity and energy to explore the world, they might offer us a totally new way to look at the issue; the people of our age understand our thoughts and can share theirs with us. In a word, other people's advices(advice不能加s，要么用suggestions)  help us to get a thorough understanding of the problem and a nice solution.

To sum up, the better way to solve a problem is depending on the problem(issue~) that you are trying to solve. There is no absolute answer. If you are quite familiar with the problem, it is OK to use your own knowledge and experience to figure it out; if you are a green hand facing the question, you'd better ask others for advices.

很喜欢你的文章的言简意赅，逻辑清晰，推理合适~我会好好学习的
只是在细处给你做了些微的修改，希望不会介意
我不知道托福对此会有无特别要求，只是觉得如若在文章中适当加入些难词会更出彩~~
仅此拙见~~一起努力吧！！

hjhj1110UID: 2553667

No one can refute the fact that life is filled with problem-solvings. We might also say that life is a question-solving proceed. Everyone faces different questions each day. When talking about which is the better way to solve questions,using our(my与后面的I对应) own knowledge or asking other people for advice, based on what I know, it depends on what kind of  question you are（I am, 这一句里面的my, I, I am应该是要对应的） solving.; D) F4 N" I. |; X# K9 t" t
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If the question is one of the type（types） that you have met before , and you have found out perfect solutions. Then there is no need for you to seek other people's advice, since you know that you have the ability to work it out. Remember when we were in the elementary school, our math teachers did not teach us how to solve all the questions on the paper, but most of us could get a high mark in exams. Why? Because the teacher had taught us the methods to solve different kinds of problems. The problems might change the way it is represented (这里应该不是problems自己change the way，我认为应该是be represented in a changed way, or “the problems might be changed to another represented way” ), the figures might be different. As long as we grasped the methods to solve a certain type (types) of questions, we can find the correct solutions to them however they changed. The problems we meet in our life (lives) are too much more complex than math problems, but there is something alike--after you grasp the methods to solve a kind of questions, you can totally depends on your own knowledge and experience to solve it well without the advices of other people.# Z3 [3 Z: a4 Q& L2 J( I
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However, if you are facing a problem that you have never met before, and you do not know what to do with it at all. Well, then you need some help. You can search some information on the Internet, find some books in the library. But I strongly recommend you to find other people's advices (to find/ask/turn to other people for advices) especially those who have confronted with (confront 是及物动词,不用with) same sorts of issues before, since those people know the methods. The old have gone through a lot in life (their lives), their experience can help us understand the world better; the young have the curiosity and energy to explore the world, they might offer us a totally new way to look at the issue; the people of our age understand our thoughts and can share theirs with us. In a word, other people's advices help us to get a thorough understanding of the problem and a nice solution.
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To sum up, the better way to solve a problem is depending on the problem that you are trying to solve. There is no absolute answer. If you are quite familiar with the problem, it is OK to use your own knowledge and experience to figure it out; if you are a green hand facing the question, you'd better ask others for advices.  

错误不多哦，不错不错，但是总觉得缺少点生动的例子（只能鸡蛋里挑骨头了），呵呵 ，我要向你们学习了~ 一起加油