【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组chelseajcole的 第11次作业】

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It’s better to use own knowledge and experience to solve question, or ask other people for advice?

When you face a question,what is your first reaction of how to deal with it?Ask someone else or use your own knowledge and experience to solve it?As my personal experience,people’s first reaction when they adress the problem which they encounter always depend on what they used to do it.The choice is a difficult one as both ways of solve problem have adventages,personally,I believe that,although use someone own knowledge and experience is obviously more helpful to oneself,the benefits are often not significant enough and in many ways solve problem in this kind of way can limit one’s communication ability and the chance to get new knowledge and experience.

As we all know,practice is the only way to test the truth.To solve a concrete problem with you own knowledge not only strengthen abstract principles or theories of relative academy you have learnt but also comprehend them profoundly.Therefore,the knowledge you seized become vividly.Let’s cite a blatant case for example.The question like how to ride bicycle.If you only ask someone else how to ride it,no matter how much times he/she teach you,you won’t acquired the skills until you sit on the saddle,handling the handrail can you control the bike.Using one’s own experience is crucial to solve a problem,especially practical problem.

On the other hand,when your own experience or knowledge out of work,the question you never image before,you'd better ask other people to help you.Story goes when I was in high school,I confused with a math puzzle which I found it on a magazine.At first,I want to get the answer by myself.Just after a short period I recognized that this puzzle is surpass the knowledge I earned and thus it is impossible to figure out by myself only.After I talk with one of my classmate,both of us got some new ideas.As the famous saying goes that:I have got an idea,you have got an idea,if we change it,both of us got two ideas.Nonetheless,new ideas wouldn’t help us conquer the question.It seems that consult our math teacher is the best way to unentangle the confusion.To our great superise,our math teacher taught us a new method to get the answer yet also point out the mistake we made in the way we done.Through this case,which I take leave to believe,the reason why human being live together is that they can help each other,expecially when we meet question,if not, why don’t us live independently?

In a word,if people deal with some practical problem they should try to find the answer by themselves,whereas facing problem,which completely confuse you or could resolve it in many ways,ask someone else should be your first choice.

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When you face a question,what is your first reaction of how to deal with it?Ask someone else or use your own knowledge and experience to solve it?As my personal experience,people’s first reaction when they adress the problem which they encounter always depend(s) on what (how?)they used to do it.The choice is a difficult one (is difficult)as both ways of solve(ing) problem(s) have adventages,personally,I believe that,although use(using) someone own knowledge and experience is obviously more helpful to oneself,the benefits are often not significant enough and in many ways solve(ing) problem (s)in this kind of(删) way can limit one’s communication ability and the chance to get new knowledge and experience.

As we all know,practice is the only way to test the truth.To solve a concrete problem with you own knowledge not only strengthen（s） abstract principles or theories of relative academy you have learnt but also comprehend(s) them profoundly.Therefore,the knowledge you seized become vividly.Let’s cite a blatant case for example.The question like how to ride bicycle.If you only ask someone else how to ride it,no matter how much times he/she teach(es) you,you won’t acquired the skills until you sit on the saddle,handling the handrail can you control the bike.(这句话貌似俩谓语)Using one’s own experience is crucial to solve a problem,especially practical problem.

On the other hand,when your own experience or knowledge （缺谓语is）out of work,the question you never image before,you'd better ask other people to help you.Story goes(时态？) when I was in high school,I confused with a math puzzle which I found it on a magazine.At first,I want （ed）to get the answer by myself.Just after a short period I recognized that this puzzle is surpass (surpassed)the knowledge I earned and thus it is (was)impossible to figure out by myself only.After I talk(ed) with one of my classmate,both of us got some new ideas.As the famous saying goes that:I have got an idea,you have got an idea,if we change it,both of us got two ideas.(这是原版？)Nonetheless,new ideas wouldn’t help us conquer the question.It seems （ed）that consult our math teacher is the best way to unentangle the confusion.To our great superise,our math teacher taught us a new method to get the answer yet also point out the mistake we made in the way we done.Through this case,which I take leave to believe,the reason why human being live together is that they can help each other,expecially when we meet question,if not, why don’t us live independently?

In a word,if people deal with some practical problem (s)they should try to find the answer by themselves,whereas facing problem,which completely confuse you or could resolve it in many ways,ask someone else should be your first choice.

时态过于混乱，用词太过中式。

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【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组chelseajcole的 第11次作业】

It’s better to use own knowledge and experience to solve question, or ask other people for advice? 9 G) C* s) ?7 S4 @ 3 h1 ~, z# ~" y8 c: t When you face a question,what is your first reaction of how(of how多余） to deal with it?(To)Ask someone else(,) or(to)use your own knowledge and experience to solve it?As my personal experience,people’s first reaction when they adress the problem which they encounter always depend(s) on what(how) they used to do (with,do with 表示deal with) it.The choice is a difficult one as both ways of solve（ing） problem have adventages,personally,I believe that,although use（ing） someone own knowledge and experience is obviously more helpful to(for) oneself,the benefits are often not significant enough and in many ways(是想说in many cases吗，solve加ing) solve problem in this kind of way can limit one’s communication ability and the chance to get new knowledge and experience（这句话断开分成2句写）.2 （这句! ~0 D! @! P6 w2 U1 X, r As we all know,practice is the only way to test the truth.To solve a concrete problem with you own knowledge not only strengthen abstract principles or theories of relative academy you have learnt(,) but also comprehend them profoundly.Therefore,the knowledge you seized become vividly.Let’s cite a blatant case for example.The question like how to ride bicycle.If you only ask someone else how to ride it,no matter how much times he/she teach(es) you,you won’t acquired the skills until you sit on the saddle,handling the handrail can you control the bike(删掉can you control the bike，否则语法不对了）.Using one’s own experience is crucial（我建议用essencial,)to solve(ing)(crucial 和essential用法都是be~ to/for sth.或sb.) a problem,especially(a) practical problem(one).2 k1 D' s7 F4 i7 z- A & q+ T5 Q0 L( g- R: U* c% H On the other hand,when your own experience or knowledge out of work,the question you never image before,you'd better ask other people to help you(不理解）.Story goes when I was in high school,I confused with a math puzzle which I found it（删it） on a magazine.At first,I want to get the answer by myself.Just after a short period（of time)(after a while) I recognized that this puzzle is surpass（surpass是vt,改成 far beyond) the knowledge I earned (previously)and thus it is impossible to figure out by myself only(exclusively).After I talk with one of my classmate(s),both of us got some new ideas.As the famous saying goes that:I have got an idea,you have got an idea,if we change it,both of us got two ideas.Nonetheless,new ideas wouldn’t help us conquer the question.It seems that consult our math teacher is the best way to unentangle(unentagle指排解纠纷吧，本身这个词很少用，而且没见过此用法）the confusion.To our great superise（surprise),our math teacher taught us a new method to get the answer yet(前面是肯定的话，yet是转折词无递进意） also point out the mistake we made in the way we done.Through this case,which I take leave to believe（不懂）,the reason why human being live together is that they can help each other,expecially when we meet question(s),if not, why don’t us live independently?. c) h0 Y8 u( b- L- { 6 n( H- O* @, PIn a word,if people deal with some practical problem(s) they should try to find the answer by themselves,whereas facing problem,which completely confuse you or could resolve it in many ways,ask(ing) someone else should be your first choice. PS:红色为明显的语法错误，蓝色是个人建议。 第一段主旨段稍微啰嗦了，应该更加明确。 结构还是清晰的，第二段针对practical cases，说应该用solve them on our own. 第三段针对issues that beyond one's ability to solve, 应该 take others' advice. 两段都用举例展开论证 最后一段总结不错，照应全文。 不足的地方是，句子结构很混乱，很多时候不大明白，很多地方时态用的不对，应该进一步word framing 和 organizing your language. 你是个高中生？？

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