TOEFL 4—6月Dark_Tournament写作小组 偷闲透气 第十三次作业

偷闲透气UID: 2148172

Drivers should pay a fee to be allowed to drive on the city streets during the time when there is the greatest amount of traffic.

With the development of our society and economy, more and more Chinese people become rich and buy new cars. In their mind, owning a car represents their social status and wealth. However, because of rapid increasing of the amount of cars, traffic problems are aroused accordingly. Some people think that driver should be responsible for traffic problems, and pay relevant fees during the rush hours when traffic jams occur. From my personal perspective, however, I do not think it is a necessary way for driver to pay the fee to solve the traffic problems. There are following reasons.

Firstly, paying money is not an efficient way to solve traffic problems. In China, most people, who own a car, are often very rich, and they do not care about spending money to drive car. These drivers are willing to pay money to drive on those city streets which are most convenient for them to drive, even they know that driving there will cause traffic jam. My friend Jim is an example. In my city, drivers are required to pay "driving fees" when they drive to certain areas during 5pm and 6pm. Actually, Jim has paid this fee for 2 years, and he tells me that he would like to pay this fee because the streets he drives during the rush hours are the nearest ways for him to go home.

In my opinion, the best way to avoid traffic is that government should pay attention to the improvement of city infrastructure and transportation ways, for instance, building roads and expressways, and improving buses and subways. The reasons that causing traffic are varies. I think the most noticeable reason is that our city's infrastructure is not built very well. For example, roads are very narrow. So, if the government prefers to re-build those old roads, make roads widen, and/or build expressways, drivers will have more choices to drive, and the pressure of certain areas or streets will be decreased accordingly. Also, along with the improvement of buses and subway, more people would like to take these public transportation ways to go to work. Furthermore, educating drivers and making they have more senses about traffic regulations are another effective way to avoid traffic problems. Traffic orders shall be abided by all people. I believe that with the great efforts of government and people, our city's traffic problems will be solved soon.

All in all, let me repeat my opinion: it is unnecessary that driver should pay a fee to drive on the streets during the rush hours when there are traffic jams.

恩恩的囡囡UID: 2542371

1# 偷闲透气

Drivers should pay a fee to be allowed to drive on the city streets during the time when there is the greatest amount of traffic.
With the development of our society and economy, more and more Chinese people become rich and buy new cars. In their mind, owning a car represents their social status and wealth. However, because of the rapid increasing of the amount of cars, traffic problems are aroused accordingly. Some people think that drivers should be responsible for traffic problems, and pay relevant fees during the rush hours when traffic jams occur. From my personal perspective, however, I do not think it is a necessary way for drivers to pay the fee to solve the traffic problems. There are following reasons.

Firstly, paying money is not an efficient way to solve traffic problems. In China, most people, who own a car, are often very rich, and they do not care about spending money to drive car. These drivers are willing to pay money to drive on those city streets which are most convenient for them to drive, even they know that driving there will cause traffic jam. My friend Jim is an example. In my city, drivers are required to pay "driving fees" when they drive to certain areas during 5pm and 6pm. Actually, Jim has paid this fee for 2 years, and he tells me that he would like to pay this fee because the streets he drives during the rush hours are the nearest ways for him to go home.
In my opinion, the best way to avoid traffic jam is that government should pay attention to the improvement of city infrastructure and transportation ways, for instance, building roads and expressways, and improving buses and subways. The reasons that causing traffic are varies. I think the most noticeable reason is that our city's infrastructure is not built very well. For example, roads are very narrow. So, if the government prefers to re-build those old roads, make roads widen, and/or build expressways, drivers will have more choices to drive, and the pressure of certain areas or streets will be decreased accordingly. Also, along with the improvement of buses and subway, more people would like to take these public transportation ways to go to work. Furthermore, educating drivers and making they have more senses about traffic regulations are another effective way to avoid traffic problems. Traffic orders shall be abided by all people. I believe that with the great efforts of government and people, our city's traffic problems will be solved soon.6 e. D- Z# |) P" n% a

All in all, let me repeat my opinion: it is unnecessary that driver should pay a fee to drive on the streets during the rush hours when there are traffic jams.

总体感觉挺好的，一起努力啊~

liurui8802UID: 2595045

With the development of our society and economy, more and more Chinese people become rich and buy new cars. In their mind(s), owning a car represents their social status and wealth. However, because of rapid increasing of the amount of cars, traffic problems are aroused (多是激发感情，这么用不恰当，查一下用法）accordingly. Some people think that driver should be responsible for traffic problems, and pay relevant fees during the rush hours （when traffic jams occur）删掉. From my personal perspective, however, I do not think it is a necessary way for driver to pay the fee to solve the traffic problems. There are following reasons.$ p' M% g8 L& P* A, a  DFirstly（first), paying money is not an efficient way to solve traffic problems. In China, most people, who own a car, are often very rich, and they do not care about spending money (to drive car)(on cars). These drivers are willing to pay money to drive on those city streets which are most convenient for them to drive, even they know that (driving there)(their behavior) will cause traffic jam. My friend Jim is an example(朋友是一个例子？中式英语）. In my city, drivers are required to pay "driving fees" when they drive to certain areas during 5pm and（to) 6pm. Actually, Jim has paid this fee for 2 years(pay是个瞬间动词，不能延续2年）, and he tells me that he would like to pay this fee because the streets he drives （on)during the rush hours are(is) the nearest ways (去掉s)for him to go home.% h- ^2 C) v5 N) ?( sIn my opinion, the best way to (void traffic)避开交通？ is that government should pay attention to the improvement of city infrastructure and transportation ways,（facilities) for instance, building roads and expressways, and improving buses and subways. The reasons (that)删掉 causing traffic are varies（varied). I think the most noticeable reason is that our city's infrastructure is not built(constructed) very well. For example, roads are very narrow. So, if the government prefers to re-build those old roads, (to)make roads widen, and/or build expressways, drivers will have more choices to drive, and the pressure of certain areas or streets will be decreased accordingly. Also, along with the improvement of buses and subway, more people would like to take these public transportation (ways)删掉 to go to work. Furthermore, educating drivers and making they（them) have more senses(sense) about traffic regulations are（主谓不一致） another effective way to avoid traffic problems. Traffic orders（order) shall be abided by all people. I believe that with the great efforts of government and people, our city's traffic problems will be solved soon.All in all, let me repeat my opinion: it is unnecessary that driver should pay a fee to drive on the streets during the rush hours when there are traffic jams(结尾太简单了）