【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组 第十三次作业 by 33wong】

33wongUID: 2617025

第十三次作业

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
should pay a fee to be allowed to drive on the city streets during the time when there is the greatest amount of traffic. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. (07.1.14) + l! l) ~3 `. i7 d& g" s; m% i2 Y  R
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With the highly development of economic, the quantity of families that have their own car is increase. Some of the countries start to charge money from drivers who want to get to be allowed to drive on the city streets during the time when there is the greatest amount of traffic. To this, opinion changes from people to people. I support that drivers should pay the fee.

Firstly, charging the fee is good for our environment. Charging the fee could lead some drivers doesn’t want to driver their car anymore. And the fume discharged by cars is the major formation of the air pollution. The fewer amount of cars, the less pollution of air. On the other hand, drivers are always roaring their car along the road with out thinking perhaps there are still someone studying, sleeping or doing something else. To charge fee can reduce these noise.

The other advantage is, government has more money to improve the way people live therefore reduce the probability of the traffic accidence. For example, government might make more investment in traffic development to reduce the accident or accelerate the speed of cars. Moreover, government could plant plenty of trees which make drivers relax and comfortable along the roadside. And more trees means the clean atmosphere, the twittering of birds and fragrance of flowers, for this, people will prefer to travel by bicycle instead of cars, which reduce the probability of traffic accident.
Absolutely, this measure will arouse some disadvantages. For instance,
the decrease income in family. Even though many drivers are willing to pay the fee, there are still some people who want to buy a car originally changing their opinion. This will reduce the profits of the car company and the incomes of some family which works for companies produce cars. Charging fee also has an impact on family’s investment for their children’s future, their house or something else.
Although there’re some demerits, the advantages are overweighing them. We can do something like encourage the treatment of car to solve these problems or make travel in a more comfortable way.

mimicaUID: 2457275

With the highly development of economic(economy), the quantity of families that have their own car is increase(这句很生硬more and more families have private cars). Some of the (删)countries start to charge money from drivers who want to get to be allowed to（删） drive on the city streets during the time when there is the greatest amount of traffic. To this, opinion changes from people to people. I support that drivers should pay the fee.（开头罗唆，后面这两句又太短）) G2 g（）/ h+ i, L6 t, F
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Firstly, charging the fee is good for our environment. Charging the fee could lead some drivers doesn’t want to driver their car（s） anymore. And the fume discharged by cars is the major formation of the air pollution. The fewer amount of cars, the less pollution of air. On the other hand, drivers are always roaring their car along the road with out thinking perhaps there are still someone studying, sleeping or doing something else. To charge fee can reduce these noise.& ]) b. N+ N0 \5 C' m
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The other advantage is, government has more money to improve the way people live therefore(to) reduce the probability of the traffic accidence. For example, government might make more investment in traffic development to reduce the accident or accelerate the speed of cars. Moreover, government could plant plenty of trees which make drivers relax and comfortable along the roadside. And more trees means the clean atmosphere, the twittering of birds and fragrance of flowers, for this, people will prefer to travel by bicycle instead of cars, which reduce the probability of traffic accident.

Absolutely, this measure will arouse some disadvantages. For instance,the decrease income in family. Even though many drivers are willing to pay the fee, there are still some people who want to buy a car originally changing their opinion. This will reduce the profits of the car company and the incomes of some family which works for companies produce cars. Charging fee also has an impact on family’s investment for their children’s future, their house or something else.(这一段反面论证使原观点不够明确)( o+ q( y. W4 v, b2 I3 |4 A
Although there’re some demerits, the advantages are overweighing them. We can do something like encourage the treatment of car to solve these problems or make travel in a more comfortable way.

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