[TOEFL 2009上半年-Dark_Tournament写作组 ericsong1125第16次作业]

ericsong1125UID: 2493162

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are busy doing different things that they can do few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.（03/03/07）

As the technology and social development, people are crowded by a mass of information about various fields which always lead to different things. In this rapid step world, people are busying doing these different things which covering most of their time. However, not all things need to be finished perfectly. Things should be done distinctively.

To begin with, different requirements and expectations result in different outcomes. Before people treating each task, they should be certain what the requirement is and whether it needs to be done well. If boss require the task finished with an eligible standard, employees would not done it with perfect because they could use extra time to do other tasks for more profits. If employees make all products well which cost more time and energy but in return of less profit, it is like attending to trifles and neglect the essentials. Another example that football club increasing gradually to be a business company should not only enlarge their fans group mercantile purpose but also compete for champion as their final task. If it is a team to expect avoiding relegation and finally it does, we should cheer for them instead of chiding for not get the champion. Thus, if people meet the requirement and expectation, their work should be well.

Moreover, increasing knowledge and living standard raise people's criterion of things. People today receive more and more knowledge and enjoy the modern technology, both of which broaden the view and raise the standard. Of course, people could be unsatisfied with some of things not done well which in past should be evaluated by higher grade. For instance, hospitals today could treat various diseases by sorts of equipment and modern method however there are still amounts of them could not be healed. Patients attacked by smallpox which leads to death were never healed before, nevertheless, today people would feel unsatisfied with long term to heal or bad sequel after attacked by cancer. These results are not caused by different things but unappeasable desire. Therefore, not doing things well is not merely resulting from busy doing different things.

All in all, despite people are busy doing different things, it is unnecessary for people to treat all things well.

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1# ericsong1125 As the technology(technological) and social development, people are crowded by a mass of information about various fields which always lead to(不是很懂额) different things. In this rapid step world, people are busying doing these different things which covering(个人认为covers比较好) most of their time. However, not all things need to be finished perfectly. Things should be done distinctively.. A! H2 _7 a) v2 N# Z  j  I
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To begin with, different requirements and expectations result in different outcomes. Before people treating each task(太中文化了), they should be certain what the requirement is and whether it needs to be done well. If (+a)boss require the task (+being)finished with an eligible standard, employees would not done it with perfect because they could use extra time to do other tasks for more profits. If employees make all products well which cost more time and energy but in return of less profit, it is like attending to trifles and neglect the essentials. Another example that football club increasing gradually(+want) to be a business company should not only enlarge their fans group mercantile purpose but also compete for champion as their final task. If it is a team to expect avoiding relegation and finally it does, we should cheer for them instead of chiding for not get the champion. Thus, if people meet the requirement and expectation, their work should be well.9 T$ t1 b5 X- A. ?

4 h$ v# p/ i* l+ @) `' yMoreover, increasing knowledge and living standard raise people's criterion of things. People today receive more and more knowledge and enjoy the modern technology, both of which broaden the view and raise the standard. Of course, people could be unsatisfied with some of things not done well which in past should be evaluated by higher grade. For instance, hospitals today could treat various diseases by sorts of equipment and modern method however there are still amounts of them could not be healed. Patients attacked by smallpox which leads to death were never healed before, nevertheless, today people would feel unsatisfied with long term to heal or bad sequel after attacked by cancer. These results are not caused by different things but unappeasable desire. Therefore, not doing things well is not merely resulting from busy doing different things.' |, u+ |9 B5 k! \! g( h

. w" U  n8 ]) R$ y$ A! C- LAll in all, despite people are busy doing different things, it is unnecessary for people to treat all things well.

词汇量很可观..可能是写得比较仓促,所以很多简单的语法错误...然后觉得观点不是很明确..共同进步..

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1# ericsong1125
As the technology and social development, people are crowded by a mass of information about various fields which always lead to different things. In this rapid step world, people are busying(busy) doing these different things which covering most of their time. However, not all things need to be finished perfectly. Things should be done distinctively.

To begin with, different requirements and expectations result in different outcomes. Before people treating each task, they should be certain what the requirement is and whether it needs to be done well. If boss require the task finished with an eligible standard, employees would not done it with perfect because they could use extra time to do other tasks for more profits. If employees make all products well which cost more time and energy but in return of less profit, it is like attending to trifles and neglect the essentials. Another example (is) that football club increasing gradually to be a business company should not only enlarge their fans group mercantile purpose but also compete for champion as their final task. If it is a team to expect avoiding relegation and finally it does, we should cheer for them instead of chiding for not get the champion. Thus, if people meet the requirement and expectation, their work should be well.


Moreover, increasing knowledge and living standard raise people's criterion of things. People today receive more and more knowledge and enjoy the modern technology, both of which broaden the view and raise the standard. Of course, people could be unsatisfied with some of things(something) not done well which in past should be evaluated by higher grade. For instance, hospitals today could treat various diseases by sorts of equipment and modern method, however there are still amounts of them could not be healed. Patients attacked by smallpox which leads to death were never healed before(时态改为have never been healed before好点吧), nevertheless, today people would feel unsatisfied with long term to heal or bad sequel after attacked by cancer. These results are not caused by different things but unappeasable desire. Therefore, not doing things well is not merely resulting from busy doing different things.


All in all, despite people are busy doing different things, it is unnecessary for people to treat all things well.
文章写得不错,很连贯流利,用词也很丰富.但是貌似写的有些偏题的嫌疑…
文章提出的观点是: 人们总是做很多不同的事情，结果什么都做不好.
如果反对的话就是:人们能够做很多事情,而且做得很出色.
但LZ的观点是:要区别对待每一件事情,不必要把他们都做得很好.
请LZ好好斟酌一下.个人观点仅供参考,LZ加油^_^