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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are busy doing different things that they can do few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.03/03/07

         It is true that people can not performe well when they are involved in different things. In our daily life. You may easily find those people ,especially the agriculture-worker ,doing a few jobs to struggle for life at the same time.unfortunately ,they can’t stand such heavy pressure that areusually trapped with sicknesses and even bring much more trouble to our society as a result . nevertheless.it is not exactly precise to criticize those people including,agriculture –worker s,young married men ,business managers and so forth for doing more jobs beyond their ability to make more money and therefore lead to some unpredictable problems ranging from health,crime, and traffic accident.

    In fact, It is the globle economy situation ,to a large extent ,rather than the workers themselves that is creating so much trouble to our life.faced with a mounting economic crisis,the unemployment problem become more and more serious while the worker’s wages is much lower than that of before.eventually,the prices of the life necessities are always on the rising.so in order to survive, people need work more harder than ever before to make the ends meet .To put in another way,the more job you work in limited time the worse quality you will produce ,so anyone can hardly raise the productivity while improve the quality.


    On the other hand ,it is holistically detrimental both for the workers and the whole society.if the number of the workers who doing different jobs keeps increasing all the time. The consequence might be horrible.the authority should make some measures to stop this phenomenon.,such as to provide more job oppositions for the unemployment group at the same time rise the salaries .additionally, the prices of the food should be cut down and thus workers’s wages could afford the expense of a family life. Since they do not merely need to do quite a lot of jobs like before but even to improve the productivity to stimulate the economy.moreover, various types of insurances must be available ,which make people feel safer and happier.and have a large extent to reduce people’s anxieties .

In brief, I’m personally believe that people can’t do different things well when they are busy.so everyone in our society should avoid such situation.if it has already existed ,we must try our best to sweep away..
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