[TOEFL 2009上半年-Dark_Tournament写作组 hjhj1110第十七次作业]

hjhj1110UID: 2553667

第十七次作文

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to cooperate with other well is more important today than in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

（03/04/07）周三（4月1号）晚22：00交

I agree with it- The ability to cooperate with other well is more important today than in the past. Because cooperation really have many advantages for our lives. I would like to explain these advantages in the following passages.

第一  合作可以节省时间
With an increasingly need of various products, collaborating with other is a good way to save time.
In modern times, life is very busy and time seems limited. Every person in the cooperation program often finish a part of the work which can be assembled together to be a whole production. This method obviously faster than the way of doing work alone. I can think of no better illustration than the example of computer science which is my major in university. When a software project is handled, we should build up a group by rule, in which project manager, programmer, documents writer and tester are doing different tasks at the same time. So the project can be completed in a shote time, at least quicker than one person doing all the work.

第二  合作可以全面地解决问题，可以发现自己的不足，相互学习
It is also conformable to take the software program for example in order to demonstrate the second reason: cooperation can make problem be solved in the round. Constraints of thoughts are hard to avoid by every individual. When facing a kind of problem which the programmer does not familiar with, such as profit margin for a bank software, a tester who has experience can help the programmer. Persons in the project can communicate with each other, thus they can share experience and knowledge to solve different kinds of problems may be encountered. In this case we can find that another advantage of cooperation is making products perfect.

第三  合作可以相互监督
The last reason that I want to explicte is inter-supervise. Nowadays, work is going to be a burden for the workers. Many of them are always goldbricking to avoid assignments. But in a group, they must finish their tasks, or other members will condemn him/her, even never want to be members with that person any more.

To sum up the above reasons, I think we are clear about how an important position cooperation play in the modern society than the past times.

网兜妮妮UID: 2612538

I agree with it- The ability to cooperate with other well is more important today than in the past. Because cooperation really have many advantages for our lives. I would like to explain these advantages in the following passages.（首段直接引用题目好像不是很好的写法）
第一  合作可以节省时间
With an increasingly need of various products, collaborating with others is a good way to save time. / k. P6 z  H  s" j
In modern times, life is very busy and time seems limited. （应该和过去对比一下，可能表达效果会更好一点）Every person in the cooperation program often finish a part of the work which can be assembled together to be a whole production. This method obviously faster than the way of doing work alone. I can think of no better illustration than the example of computer science which is my major in university. When a software project is handled, we should build up a group by rule, in which project manager, programmer, documents writer and tester are doing different tasks at the same time. So the project can be completed in a shote time, at least quicker than one person doing all the work.


第二  合作可以全面地解决问题，可以发现自己的不足，相互学习1 _; c4 g/ @1 Y. S# l
It is also conformable to take the software program for example in order to demonstrate the second reason:（这句的过渡很好，学习） cooperation can make problem be solved （这句怎么觉得怪怪的，cooperation is helpful in solving problems 是不是会好一点？）in the round. Constraints of thoughts are hard to avoid by every individual. （这句的理由很充分）When facing a kind of problem which the programmer does not familiar with, such as profit margin for a bank software, a tester who has experience can help the programmer. Persons in the project can communicate with each other, thus they can share experience and knowledge to solve different kinds of problems which they may encountered. In this case we can find that another advantage of cooperation is making products perfect.
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第三  合作可以相互监督
The last reason that I want to explicte is inter-supervise. Nowadays, work is going to be a burden for the workers. Many of them are always goldbricking to avoid assignments. But in a group, they must finish their tasks, or other members will condemn him/her, even never want to be members with that person any more（这个例子要是论证的更充分一点就好了）. " l4 e3 \) ^% t- d& l% X1 d

To sum up the above reasons, I think we are clear about how an important position cooperation play in the modern society than the past times.
恕我直言，感觉楼上这篇文章写的比较匆忙，观点很好，但论证不太好，可能是没有时间。
还有，题目是合作在现代社会比在过去更重要了，同意与否，是不是文章里面还是要涉及一下跟过去的比较才会更切题？

桑梓UID: 2613051

清明有点事 来不及拍这次的作业了 等我回学校再补上 抱歉啦

桑梓UID: 2613051

I agree with it- The ability to cooperate with other well is more important today than in the past. Because cooperation really have（has） many advantages for our lives. I would like to explain these advantages in the following passages..

第一  合作可以节省时间
With an increasingly need of various products, collaborating with other is a good way to save time.  
In modern times, life is very busy and time seems limited. Every person in the cooperation program often finish（finishes） a part of the work which can be assembled together to be a whole production. This method obviously （少动词）faster than the way of doing work alone. I can think of no better illustration than the example of computer science which is my major in university. When a software project is handled, we should build up a group by rule, in which project manager, programmer, documents writer and tester are doing different tasks at the same time. So the project can be completed in a shote time, at least quicker than one person doing all the work.
第二  合作可以全面地解决问题，可以发现自己的不足，相互学习
It is also conformable to take the software program for example in order to demonstrate the second reason: cooperation can make problem be solved in the round. Constraints of thoughts are hard to avoid by every individual. When facing a kind of problem which the programmer does not familiar with, such as profit margin for a bank software, a tester who has experience can help the programmer. Persons in the project can communicate with each other, thus they can share experience and knowledge to solve different kinds of problems may be encountered. In this case we can find that another advantage of cooperation is making products perfect.
第三  合作可以相互监督
The last reason that I want to explicte is inter-supervise. Nowadays, work is going to be a burden for the workers. Many of them are always goldbricking to avoid assignments. But in a group, they must finish their tasks, or other members will condemn him/her, even never want to be members with that person any more. （其实这个例子还可以展开讲一点的）
To sum up the above reasons, I think we are clear about how an important position cooperation play in the modern society （结束的有点仓促）