[TOEFL 2009上半年-Dark_Tournament写作组 ericsong1125第十七次作业]

ericsong1125UID: 2493162

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to cooperate
with other well is more important today than in the past. Use specific reasons
and examples to support your answer.（03/04/07）

As technology and society rapid development, people are crowd with a mass of information and facing more complex problems. All these problems could not be solved by single person, so cooperation plays a significant role in our daily life. Thus the ability to cooperate is more important today than before.

From objective point, complex and countless problems need cooperation. Various fields today are all composed by different parts which could be in same realm or not. Within this background, people have to cooperate to solve these problems. Here is an example about software engineering. As we all know the software we used everyday in PC are all constituted with diverse modules, each of which is finished by different engineer. If they could not cooperate well in the product, these modules could not be compatible in working. Another, noble prize gainer is not merely one person in recent years, which are always done by a group even hundreds of people. Thus, ability to cooperate is requirement for the objective world.

From subjective point, cooperation could broaden the knowledge and view of people to finish every task. With great cooperation, people could share the resources, focus on the advantages, diminish the defects and improve the efficiency. Aristotle took many years to solve his science problem by himself thousands years ago. If he could communicate or cooperate with other talented scientists to share the wisdom and intelligence, the period of researching could be shorter and the results could be better. Moreover, people today need to cooperate to find the novelty issue and deal with amount of information to pursue the interests and discover the unknown. Even the ancestors need it, people today must cooperate to promote the development.

Additionally, cooperation could not help people to adapt the change in objective world but also be valuable for making plan to obtain the solution. Thus, nowadays need more cooperation than ever before and future need more than today.

In conclusion, in my point of view, the importance of ability to cooperate can never be denied.

答案就在眼前UID: 2622922

1# ericsong1125

As technology and society rapid development, people are crowd with a mass of information and facing more complex problems. All these problems could not be solved by single person, so cooperation plays a significant role in our daily life. Thus the ability to cooperate is more important today than before.
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" H( n$ p# ^1 JFrom objective point, complex and countless problems need cooperation. Various fields today are all composed by different parts which could be in same realm or not. Within this background, people have to cooperate to solve these problems. Here is an example about software engineering. As we all know the software we used everyday in PC are all constituted with diverse modules, each of which is finished by different engineers. If they could not cooperate well in the product, these modules could not be compatible in working. Another, noble prize gainer is not merely one person in recent years, which are always done by a group of even hundreds of people. Thus, ability to cooperate is requirement for the objective world.) M5 z  k7 j  z0 Z/ @6 ?% s, Q

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In conclusion, in my point of view, the importance of ability to cooperate can never be denied.




行文流畅 LZ请冲满分吧~~o(∩_∩)o..


By the way， Lz几号考试?

答案就在眼前UID: 2622922

1# ericsong1125

As technology and society rapid development, people are crowd with a mass of information and facing more complex problems. All these problems could not be solved by single person, so cooperation plays a significant role in our daily life. Thus the ability to cooperate is more important today than before.

From objective point, complex and countless problems need cooperation. Various fields today are all composed by different parts which could be in same realm or not. Within this background, people have to cooperate to solve these problems. Here is an example about software engineering. As we all know the software we used everyday in PC are all constituted with diverse modules, each of which is finished by different engineers. If they could not cooperate well in the product, these modules could not be compatible in working. Another, noble prize gainer is not merely one person in recent years, which are always done by a group of even hundreds of people. Thus, ability to cooperate is requirement for the objective world.) M5 z  k7 j  z0 Z/ @6 ?% s, Q

From subjective point, cooperation could broaden the knowledge and view of people to finish every task. With great cooperation, people could share the resources, focus on the advantages, diminish the defects and improve the efficiency. Aristotle took many years to solve his science problem by himself thousands years ago. If he could communicate or cooperate with other talented scientists to share the wisdom and intelligence, the period of researching could be shorter and the results could be better. Moreover, people today need to cooperate to find the novelty issue and deal with amount of information to pursue the interests and discover the unknown. Even the ancestors need it, people today must cooperate to promote the development.% k3 W% B+ J# {% P1 N) }2 [) k+ u0 i: a

Additionally, cooperation could not only help people to adapt the change in objective world but also be valuable for making plan to obtain the solution. Thus, nowadays need more cooperation than ever before and future need more than today.
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In conclusion, in my point of view, the importance of ability to cooperate can never be denied.


行文流畅
LZ请冲满分吧~~o(∩_∩)o..
By the way， Lz几号考试?

mimicaUID: 2457275

Astechnology and society rapid development, people are crowd with a massof information and facing more complex problems. All these problemscould not be solved by single person, so cooperation plays asignificant role in our daily life. Thus the ability to cooperate ismore important today than before.
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Fromobjective point, complex and countless problems need cooperation.Various fields today are all composed by different parts which could bein same realm or not. Within this background, people have to cooperateto solve these problems. Here is an example about software engineering.As we all know the software we used everyday in PC are all constitutedwith diverse modules, each of which is finished by different engineers.If they could not cooperate well in the product, these modules couldnot be compatible in working. Another, noble prize gainer is not merelyone person in recent years, which are always done by a group evenhundreds of people. Thus, ability to cooperate is requirement for(of) theobjective world.% [5 b( k: O' t9 W4 g+ H
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Fromsubjective point, cooperation could broaden the knowledge and view ofpeople to finish every task. With great cooperation, people could sharethe resources, focus on the advantages, diminish the defects andimprove the efficiency. Aristotle took many years to solve his scienceproblem by himself thousands of years ago. If he could communicate orcooperate with other talented scientists to share the wisdom andintelligence, the period of researching could be shorter and theresults could be better. Moreover, people today need to cooperate tofind the novelty issue and deal with amount of information to pursuethe interests and discover the unknown. Even the ancestors need it,people today must cooperate to promote the development.
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Additionally,cooperation could not help people to adapt the change in objectiveworld but also be valuable for making plan to obtain the solution.Thus, nowadays need more cooperation than ever before and future needmore than today.
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In conclusion, in my point of view, the importance of ability to cooperate can never be denied.

neozhongnlUID: 2448721

As technology and society rapid development, people are crowd with a mass of information and facing more complex problems. All these problems could not be solved by single person, so cooperation plays a significant role in our daily life. Thus the ability to cooperate is more important today than before. (总体不错,有很多小的语法错误)

From objective point, complex and countless problems need cooperation. Various fields today are all composed by different parts which could be in same realm or not. Within this background, people have to cooperate to solve these problems. Here is an example about software engineering. As we all know the software we used everyday in PC are all constituted with diverse modules, each of which is finished by different engineer. If they could not cooperate well in the product, these modules could not be compatible in working. Another, noble prize gainer is not merely one person in recent years, which are always done by a group even hundreds of people. Thus, ability to cooperate is requirement for the objective world.

From subjective point(这样的分段方式让人有点迷糊), cooperation could broaden the knowledge and view of people to finish every task. With great cooperation, people could share the resources, focus on the advantages, diminish the defects and improve the efficiency. Aristotle took many years to solve his science problem by himself thousands years ago. If he could communicate or cooperate with other talented scientists to share the wisdom and intelligence, the period of researching could be shorter and the results could be better. Moreover, people today need to cooperate to find the novelty issue and deal with amount of information to pursue the interests and discover the unknown. Even the ancestors need it, people today must cooperate to promote the development.!

Additionally, cooperation could not (ONLY) help people to adapt the change in objective world but also be valuable for making plan to obtain the solution. Thus, nowadays need more cooperation than ever before and future need more than today.

In conclusion, in my point of view, the importance of ability to cooperate can never be denied.

结构挺清晰的
小错误很多
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