TOEFL 2009上半年-Dark_Tournament写作组 网兜妮妮第二十一次作业

网兜妮妮UID: 2612538

Every person has its own way to manage money. Some people like saving money for a lone time and buying something that can last a long time, for girls, mostly, it is an expensive piece of jewelry, while others consider that money should be used for a short-term pleasure, like a vacation. As to me, I usually prefer spending money on a thing which can benefit me a longer time.

Although sacrifice a short-term pleasure sometimes make me unhappy at the moment, I still like to saving my money to a big one, which can last long time. For the reason everytime I look at it,I use it or wear it ,I feel good. Like my necklace, I saving my pocket money for almost half a year, and finally I got it last month.It is a well-made one and anytime I wear it, I feel great in myself, and I have more self-confidence than I don't wear.

On the other hand, when I buy something that can last a long time, I will find my treasure is increasing when the time is going, because the things I brought, maybe last year, is still there. So when I was looking around my room, I saw all this: an expensive pen, which I brought one year ago; my CDs in my bookcase, from my high school years till now, they are all there and help me relax any time I need them; my little ring, it is a newly brought one, and I think I can wear it maybe two to three years for its special style that will never outdated. I do think this kind of things can bring me happiness more than a short-time pleasure.

Furthermore, in my opinion,an investment for education is also a kind of things that can last a long time which needs paying attention. From this sight, education benefits a person a life-long time than any other things. So,saving money from vacations and bars and spending it on books and classes,as far as I can concern,is a wise investment. From education, I gain knowledge and improve myself to a productive life.It  also helps me to find a better job and make more money.

To sum up, as what I showed above, I like to buy things which can last a long time, and I think the advantages weigh more than the other choice has.

桑梓UID: 2613051

Every person has its own way to manage money. Some people like saving money for a lone time and buying something that can last a long time, for girls, mostly, it is an expensive piece of jewelry, while others consider that money should be used for a short-term pleasure, like a vacation. As to me, I usually prefer spending money on a thing which can benefit me a longer time.

Although sacrifice（用动名词） a short-term pleasure sometimes make（makes） me unhappy at the moment, I still like to saving my money to a big one, which can last long time（last for a long time 或者last long）. For the reason everytime I look at it,I use it or wear it ,I feel good. Like my necklace, I saving my pocket money for almost half a year, and finally I got it last month.It is a well-made one and anytime I wear it, I feel great in myself, and I have more self-confidence than I don't wear.(再说一下necklace可以用很长时间及其等等好处会好点吧)
On the other hand, when I buy something that can last a long time, I will find my treasure is increasing when the time is going（觉得有点怪 用as time goes by？）, because the things I brought, maybe last year, is still there. So when I was looking around my room, I saw all this: an expensive pen, which I brought one year ago; my CDs in my bookcase, from my high school years till now, they are all there and help me relax any time I need them; my little ring, it is a newly brought one, and I think I can wear it maybe two to three years for its special style that will never outdated. I do think this kind of things can bring me happiness more than a short-time pleasure.（觉得这段和前一段的论述有点重复 刚开始还以为LZ要说things that last for long 会增值~）

Furthermore, in my opinion,an investment for education is also a kind of things that can last a long time which needs paying attention. From this sight, education benefits a person a life-long time than any other things. So,saving money from vacations and bars and spending it on books and classes,as far as I can concern,is a wise investment. From education, I gain knowledge and improve myself to a productive life.It  also helps me to find a better job and make more money.! （这段倒是真可以用来说things that last for long 会增值）
To sum up, as what I showed above, I like to buy things which can last a long time, and I think the advantages weigh more than the other choice has.

网兜妮妮UID: 2612538

谢谢楼上的点评，很有帮助~~