5.6月份 cracking ibt essay! 小组写作组 melody的 第5次作业

melody106UID：2559573

In today's society, millions of information try to lead people go to different directions which make us a little bit confused about what we should hear and what we should do. On this situation, the opinions of famous people seem to be more attractive than other information sources, which means people are inclined to listen to what the famous people say and copy what they do. However, I hold that whether we should pay attention to famous people's opinions should depends on whether they guide people to a correct direction.

What we called famous people, such as actors, athletes and rock stars, their behaviors are almost for business purposes and view money as their final goal. So, whether should we trust their arguments? That should be decided by our own judges. Because it is not safe for us to accept everything they say. Take the recent serious public issue "Sanlu" for example, some actresses showed in the ads of this kind of diary product, which gave costomers a wrong signal that this product is safe for children. But in the end, people find out that what the famous people acclaimed showed a risky direction which caused thousands of children to disease or even death.

On the contrary, famous people sometimes take the moral responsibility to call for behaviors which could benefit our society. Maybe they hold a performance show for children who lost the chance to study just due to they could not afford the education fee and donate all the revenu for this poor children. Famous people could harness their influence on public's attention  to care about the poor, the sick and the old. In this sense, we should accept famous people's opinion as what they do will be beneficial to our society.

Based on all above I have analyzed, it will not go too far to say that we should judge by ourselves to decide whether we should listen to the famous people's opinions.
这次时间刚刚好，如果多点时间还可以多点字数，哎，还要多练。

wangxinfeiUID：2633557

In today's society, millions of information try to lead people go to different directions which make(makes，从句做主语) us a little bit(little 和bit 是不是重复了) confused about what we should hear and what we should do. On this situation, the opinions of famous people seem to be more attractive than other information sources, which means people are inclined to listen to what the famous people say and copy what they do. However, I hold that whether we should pay attention to famous people's opinions should depends on whether they guide people to a correct direction.

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What we called famous people, such as actors, athletes and rock stars, their behaviors are almost for business purposes and view money as their final goal. So, whether should we trust their arguments? That should be decided by our own judges. Because it is not safe for us to accept everything they say. Take the recent serious public issue "Sanlu" for example, some actresses showed in the ads of this kind of diary product, which gave costomers(customers) a wrong signal that this product is safe for children. But in the end, people find out that what the famous people acclaimed showed a risky direction which caused thousands of children to disease or even death.

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On the contrary, famous people sometimes take the moral responsibility to call for behaviors which could benefit our society. Maybe they hold a performance show for children who lost the chance to study just due to they could not afford the education fee and donate all the revenu for this poor children. Famous people could harness their influence on public's attention  to care about the poor, the sick and(改成or会不会好些) the old. In this sense, we should accept famous people's opinion as what they do will be beneficial to our society.

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Based on all above I have analyzed, it will not go too far to say that we should judge by ourselves to decide whether we should listen to the famous people's opinions.( `0 ?. t$ E* g, h, P/ z
总结：
1。结构清晰，观点明确，论证充分。
2。句子结构丰富，单词复杂程度适中，这方面是我要努力学习的，为什么我总摆脱不了初中的单词呢-_-!
3。4分甚至可以判为5分。