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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The next twenty years from now on, students will not use printed books any more. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In the era of rapid social change leading technology to widespread and increasing the way of study complexity and displacement. As result, some people begin to doubt that whether students will not use printed books any more in the next twenty years from now on. With all aspects carefully considered, it is no exaggeration to say that printed book will not be replace any more and here are three main reasons as follow;

To the very basic first, the printed book is portable for person who would like reading wherever. With the rapid pace of society, more and more people would like to reading when they are taking bus, on the plane or even waiting something in the row. Therefore, the printed book play an accessorial role in those times, not only improve efficiency on studying but also the place of reading became to infinity.


On the other hand, the price of printed book is very economic. No one could deny that the unit price of printed book is reasonable for common people. We can spend a little cost to exchange a huge value for ourselves including the money, times, energy, convenient and so on. To contrast with other type of book such as e-book, he or she should to buy an expensive a personal or table computer fist, and then studying the complicate the knowledge how to using them. It is difficulty for many people, especially older and children.

In addition, the printed book is easy to collection. In the contemporary, collecting the book is a culture among the people, different person reads and collects different printed book for satisfy their interest. It symbolized a yearning of knowledge and offered the collector a surrounding for keep on studying. However, these aspirations can not be substituted by computer, magazines, radio, cell phone and so on.


In conclusion, without the printed book, people will feel boring in many times. Without the printed book, the studying will not only tired in spirit but also in own body. Without the printed book, people never to know how a interest impact on study. Thus, the history of development of human proved that the printed book is a crystal of human knowledge and anyone can substitute for it whatever past thousands of years.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The next twenty years from now on, students will not use printed books any more. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In the era of rapid social change leading technology to widespread and increasing the way of study complexity and displacement. As (a) result, some people begin to doubt that whether students will not (不要not, any more后加or not) use printed books any more in the next twenty years from now on. With all aspects carefully considered, it is no exaggeration to say that printed book will not be replace (replaced) any more (at all?) and here are three main reasons as follow( followed) ;

To the very basic first, the printed book is portable for person who would like reading wherever(everywhere會不會更通順). With the rapid pace of society, more and more people would like to reading (不能又to又ing) when they are taking bus, on the plane or even waiting something in the row. Therefore, the printed book play an accessorial role in those times, not only improve efficiency on studying (study可作名詞) but also (+make) the place of reading became(不要BECAME了) to infinity.

On the other hand, the price of printed book is very economic(用CHEAP比較好,economic主要說抽象的,如果要用應是economical) . No one could deny that the unit price of printed book is reasonable for common people. We can spend a little cost (不要cost) to exchange a huge value for ourselves including the money, times, energy, convenient (convenience) and so on. To contrast（contrasting） with other type(types) of book such as e-book, he or she should (have) to buy an expensive a personal or table computer fist, and then studying (-ing) the complicate the (complicated) knowledge how to (how to改成of) using them. It is (a) difficulty for many people, especially older and children.

In addition, the printed book is easy to collection(collect). In the contemporary, collecting the book (books) is a culture among the people, different person reads and collects different printed book for satisfy their interest. It symbolized a (the?) yearning of knowledge and offered the collector a surrounding for (of) keep (+ing) on studying. However, these aspirations can not be substituted by computer, magazines, radio, cell phone and so on.

In conclusion, without the printed book, people will feel boring in many times. Without the printed book, the studying will not only tired in spirit but also in own body. Without the printed book, people （+would） never to(-to)  know how a (an) interest impact on study. Thus, the history of development of human proved that the printed book is a crystal of human knowledge and anyone can substitute for it whatever past thousands of years.

結構不錯, 要注意小詞的運用.尤其ing和 to do要弄清楚.
不熟悉運用的詞最好用熟悉的詞語來替代.

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3# cocolinkin

鞠躬！感谢！