[5.6月份 cracking ibt essay! 小组写作组 lsr91 第7次作业]

lsr91UID：2540702

With the development of world, many kinds of new industry factories come out. And they bring people a lot of new objects that can improve our lives. But any of these invention hardly can avoid bring environment pollution except solar energy system. Even new technology cannot cleanse the earth, how about human activities? The answer is obviously not. I don’t agree the opinion that human activities can make the earth a better place to live.

In the history of earth, there is no organism have destroy the earth like human being. For instance, in order to win the war, many country started researching nuclear weapons that have ruin the environment of some places on earth, like Hiroshima, at the same time, the firestorm that leveled Hiroshima after the atomic blast.

People cannot leave electricity nowadays. But as we all know, electrical equipment can produce carbon dioxide. The more electrical equipments, the more carbon dioxide. The more carbon dioxide, the higher of temperature. That can bring greenhouse effect. And Melting glaciers will followed with the effect. So our earth would be ruined by ourselves and we don’t recognize it.

People can leave more pollution in the future. We cannot deny that we keep making pollution everyone, including sewage, life rubbish, and car exhaust. And we don’t stop doing this even the energy of earth is running out. We cannot make a solution to the pollution, the exhaustion of earth. That would accelerate our deaths.

If we really wanted it, we can improve the quality of life, if we really wanted it, we can let earth be better.

这次字数还稍微查差一些，主要分论点里面想不出来好的例子，希望改的同学多提点意见；

也有些句子中式了，见谅~

nanorockUID：2638085

With the development of human society, many kinds of industry factories came out. And they bring people a lot of new objects (products) that can improve our lives greatly. But any of these inventions hardly can avoid to bring environment pollution except solar energy system (过于武断了吧，不如改为 most of the inventions). Even new technology cannot cleanse the earth, how about we can expect them to benefit human activities? The answer is obviously not. Therefore, I don’t agree the opinion that human activities can make the earth become a better place to live.
In the history of earth, there is no any organism which has destroyed the earth like human being. For instance, in order to win the war, many countries started researching nuclear weapons to defeat their enemies, which have ruin the environment of some places on earth, like Hiroshima, at the same time, the firestorm that leveled Hiroshima after the atomic blast. So it is so pessimistic that the technology is always used to destroy our society and life but not to benefit them.
People cannot leave electricity nowadays (不如改作 People can not live without electricity nowadays). But as we all know, electrical equipment can produce carbon dioxide. The more electrical equipments, the more carbon dioxide. The more carbon dioxide, the higher of temperature induced by greenhouse effect. And Melting glaciers will followed with the effect. So our earth would be ruined by ourselves and it is sad that we have not recognized it now.
People can leave more pollution in the future. We cannot deny that everyone keep making pollution, including sewage, life rubbish, and car exhaust. And we don’t stop doing this even the energy of earth is running out. We cannot make a solution to the pollution, the exhaustion of earth. That would accelerate our deaths.
If we really wanted it, we can improve the quality of life, if we really wanted it, we can let earth be better.

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