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Does human activity improve or damage the earth? Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is widely understand that earth is human’s home which the one and only. In this era of rapid social development, the positive and negative discuss among the persons in whether human activity improve or damage the earth. With passing time, there are many natural phenomenon and evidences proved that the human activity harmed earth from past to the present even into the future.

Firstly, no one could deny that the resource of earth is decreasing day by day. It is mainly in consumption of oil and gas by car, plane and the other equipment of engineering. These unlimited equipments are expensing the limited resource of earth. At the same time, the harmful gas was released from equipments which were invented by human, leading to high intensive carbons in the air and impact temperature floating unnaturally. The most important, due to over-rich carbon elements as result to series the greenhouse effect. All in all, the key reason of bad natural phenomenon should contribute to the human activity on wasting resource of earth.

Secondly, the human activity also impact natural condition in the earth. We usually hear the unhappy news that some specific was extinct. And that frequency of happen is become to common. In accordance with many investigation and researches, the pollution of human is main reason on bad weather and extinct animal. Otherwise, huge carbon gases were released from cars, factory, and the other equipment into the fresh air. Numerous tresses were destroyed by people for building and manufacturing. Chemical water was drain to river and sea with any prohibits. Over-hunt animal for money. All of these activities lead earth surrounding more fragile and delicate, gradually and eventually, we will loose our home together.

Nevertheless, there are other kind of human activities, did not like pollution or waste natural resource, it is the war. The city, natural materials, even people life, can be destroyed in a moment while the war was explored. The war which was launched by human, have enough power to destroy everything which alive in the earth such as the First and Second World War. According to recent research, these wars consumed and destroyed led to shorten living of earth about 100 years. It is a fearful digit. Therefore, we can not doubt that the human activities give influence on earth so huge.

In conclusion, it is no exaggeration to say that the human activities harm earth from past to now, must into future, and make people’s life no better than before.

这篇文章写的很是痛苦,脑子总是没有可用的资源,希望能多给我开开这个题材的思路。

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