〓DIES IN FLAMES〓 issue 30

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Since the beginning of the industrial revolution, the technological advancements have never stopped bringing great changes to human lives.
People are growing concerned that our world is teeming with many kinds of new technological productions, which benefit human beings incessantly in every walk of life. For example, the achievements of medicine nowadays are running effectively to reduce the menace to people caused by diseases; （村子）the achievements of transportation make it convenient for people to come-and-go between two places.

（computer例子单独成段）The global exertions of Internet make people get new information more successfully.

However, in accordance with the situations at this stage, it is sometimes
(原来过于绝对) illegitimate to justify all the progresses that can bring about positive influences, for the simple reason that lots of sharp contradictions in society were assuredly aroused by the development of technology. Take the issue of nucleus as an example, in order to generate more electricity to satisfy the demands of manufacturing and daily life, many countries constantly put efforts on the construction of nuclear power plants and on investigation of the nuclear technology. Yet other problems come with them simultaneously, for each country’s government should be fully aware of the nuclear pollution of rivers around them. Furthermore, the increasing ability of manufacturing nuke makes human beings surrounded by the nightmare of the nuclear warfare, which might be broken out at any time.



(论调与上一段有重复，可以把好的方面去掉，直接坏)
（第一句要用题目中的关键字进行反驳TS必须提及题目中的关键字）Although technological advancement could bring short-term advantages for increasing people’s efficiency, whether it gives a permanent social value is an extended topic that is worthy to discuss in the round. Its efficiency need long time to be validated. For instance, in the field of industry, in order to create more values, the application of new technology is updated continuously. However, problems come by during the development, the course of production are delayed because such new updates tend to get some malfunctions. People have to put more focus on inspecting and maintaining them. At the even worse, during the course of maintenance, the efficiency of production might be decreased.（软件的升级）

The more you know, the more you have to learn. Thus…(稍微略写 补充说明，详略得当)
In addition, with the improvement of mechanical level, manpower in numerous workshops has been replaced by automatic product lines. As a result, the superfluous labor forces in factories leads to the fact that unemployment has reached a peak especially after the appearance of financial crisis. In order to get a new job, these people begin to learn extra knowledge and master every detail of new technology, which not only occupied almost all their leisure time, but also burden their lives. As far as I concerned, it is pessimistic to say that the technical advancement is not enhancing, but truncating their leisure time.