0910G【Try Best】第一小组 issue99 by faustqq

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这个是临时写的，真有点不好意思向上帖了，不过要交作业嘛.....
ISSUE99 - "In any realm of life-whether academic, social, business, orpolitical-the only way to succeed is to take a practical, rather than an idealistic, point of view. Pragmatic behavior guarantees survival,whereas idealistic views tend to be superceded by simpler, more immediate options."
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  I agree with the speaker a little bit. The creature living in this world which is the most realistic and practical, I think,must not be the human being. When rats are hungry, they will eat their dead friends’ body without hesitation. I am sure in monkey’ mind there is no romance,so the practical view of marriage for them is that any female monkey can be his wife. Of course, we can’t take that kind of view. Why? Because we are human being,and If there were not a lot of unrealistic ideas disturb our decision and behavior,what would we behave like.
  Frankly, I don’t like ideal people. They usually are good at thinking but poor in getting job done. Everyone can portrait　an ideal person in their imagination. He talks a lot and never ends. Although　his speech makes sense and the plan is actually perfect, he never uses ‘verb’. His plan is too big and perfect to implement. Finally, he accomplishes nothing and waits for right age forever. This kind of people are　stupid, and they may forget an important fact that we live in the world, not in the haven. In the world where we live, there are imperfection and sadness. However, to take a totally practical view of the life itself is ideal. Our brain is born with unrealistic mind. Plato may be one of the most ideal. The country in his mind can never be built. So what? People think he is a famous and intelligent philosopher. We love novelist and artist,whose job is to make unreal thing. Is there anyone who can claim that he is never ideal? He must be the saddest guy in the world because the truth is harsh and our unrealistic mind gives us energy to survive.
  To be practical or to be ideal? It is not a question. We live with both kinds of views. When we think about life, job,friend, and career, to be unrealistic is human. We will create an excellent prospect in our mind, we want everything to be good, and our ideal hope gives us a view of joy. Although the truth is of course different from what we think,we can live with this sad truth. Just remember that we have right to be ideal but only to be practical can make us fulfill our dream.

FaustQQUID: 2613078

中文提纲：第一段：动物最practical，难道人也要一定要practical才好吗
              第二段：不实际的人当然不好，但是要想完全实际这个想法本身就不实际，理想化是人的本性。
              第三段：我们限可以理想化来美化生活，但只有实际才能实际我们的梦想。

nlhustUID: 2404239

还是应该抽出时间好好写写的，毕竟是第一篇嘛。。
感觉你这个风格和AW有点差别啊，可以好好看看范文，学习学习
anyway，按时交了作业，值得鼓励！！

cooljcqUID: 2498528

作文已经给你修改了，希望你能看一下，修改的作文在附件里面

heliappleUID: 2621347

1# FaustQQ 我也改好了，在附件里