0910G【Try Best】第一小组 第一次作业 Argument238 by Faustqq

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ARGUMENT238
"At nearby Green Mountain College, which has more business courses andmore job counselors than does Mira Vista College, 90 percent of last year'sgraduating seniors had job offers from prospective employers. Butat Mira Vista College last year, only 70 percent of the seniors who informedthe placement office that they would be seeking employment had found full-timejobs within three months after graduation, and only half of these graduateswere employed in their major field of study. To help Mira Vista's graduatesfind employment, we must offer more courses in business and computer technologyand hire additional job counselors to help students with their resumés andinterviewing skills."
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Maybe there are other reasons for this difference of employment between Green Mountain College and Mira Vista College other than the lack of courses and interviewing skills.
In a more developed place, the graduated is easy to get a job. There are more companies in the place, so there are more opportunities for the appliers.If the economy situations in two place are different, the reason for low rate of employment of the graduates can not be attributed to the education. So the measure taken by the government or the university will not be efficient.

Different colleges have different majors. The college in which there are more majors, such as literature, history, and philosophy, can not compare the graduates’ employ rate to other college directly. It is unfair. Students majoring in those kinds of areas is hard to get a job. Is this the situation of Mira Vista College?

If we don’t considerate those situation, the comparison is meaningless. But provided those situation can not cause the result mentioned, is this measure really helpful?Think about a graduate who writes a good resume and have an excellent interview skill, is it make a difference between now and before? He is still himself. The interviewer wants a man who can work and have working skill and the company do not care which clothes he wears when interviewing. The problem is more profound.Maybe the reason lies in the college education. Does the college teach the skill students need in work?

To solve this problem we need more investigation.

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中文提纲：第一段：提出可能还有别的原因
              第二段：地方差异可能是造成差别的原因
              第三段：是否是学科设制的问题
              第四段：如果不论以上前提，提出的几点方法可能没法根本解决问题，问题可能有深层原因
              第五段：结尾

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终于改好了，在附件里哦。