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发表于 2009-5-27 21:52:40 |显示全部楼层

137. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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There are many kinds of special high schools in my country called XX foreign language school. And students in there have different education from other school students. They can choose whatever courses they want, and they can have classes with teachers whose native language is English. After graduate from school, they act more activity than students who come from other schools. So I agree with the statement that high schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study.

High school students are still teenagers, they have lots of unique ideas that anybody else cannot think out. They are in high school, they need to open their scope to find out what they are really interested. So they can go and take part in them and develop their interests in these fields. For example, if a student take part in some social activities like to help public community, they can accumulate his/her experience of this field that can help him/her to get into sociology department in college.

High school students are still teenagers, they could have more dysphoria than adults. So they really need to calm down with learn something they interested. So they can fall in subjects and forget those things which drive them crazy with finding a real suited subject for themselves. For instance, teenagers would confused with some physical questions. But if they are concentrate on what they want, they could ignore everything else, it’s good for their study.

High school students are still teenagers, they could have more chances to absorb different kinds of knowledge that can help them know more about earth even many subjects of they choose would not be their professional courses at colleges. Knowledge is power, isn’t it?

With more knowledge, you can have wiser scope to the world; with more knowledge, you can have more power to change the world; with more knowledge, you can have more ideal to achieve.

加油!

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发表于 2009-6-4 06:36:47 |显示全部楼层
没有看到第13次作业哦!
初步浏览了一下你的这次作文,发现您有个比较严重的语言运用问题,那就是基本上都是
中式英语思维模式,句式变换太少,而且特别喜欢用they can ...这种句式英语中比较
少用。建议多背一点好句子!

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