0910G【Try Best】第二小组 issue13 by bittnt

bittntUID: 2295266

TOPIC: ISSUE13 - "Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and

fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are

spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct."
WORDS: 452          TIME: 00:56:39          DATE: 2009-5-30 17:18:42

The globalization is changing the world. Practical offical language such as English can bring young people more suitable jobs, can serve businessman to make an easier deal and so. While the language are inextricably related with the culture and the history of the particular regions and countries.I support the point that the languages of the countries or the regions should never be forgotten, however, the lesser-known languages ought to gives way to the pratical international offical language.

On the one hand, the practical official language has its reason to attract people to learn it. it makes the communication easier. Hence, there are more trust will be build for people from diferent areas. Then trust can make that people can work together. Considering the story of the tower of Babel from Gensis, people can make a tower to the heavens since they can use the single language. For the real case, it is the truth that most employers are tend to hire the bilingual applicant one from two, who have the same qualified in the major, especially for those international well-paid companies.

What’s more, the main purpose of the language is to communicate effectively. On the contrary, the lesser-known languages will lead the barrier of the communication.  For those people who stick to the lesser-known language, most are suffered from hunger, homelessness, disease and others. It is still common for a scientist tend to publish their finds in english. In that cases, to learn those international language is irresistible.

On the other hand, each language is a kind of mirror of the culture and history of the particular group of people, as the saying goes" where there is a different language, there is a unique culture". For some people, the extinction of a language means to destroy the culture. That is to say, it is important to protect the original languages. For example, most European clings to their languages. The French government even assembles many academic to promote their language in other countries.

In addtion, those lesser-known language also has its particular usages.Take Eskimo as a instance, their language have most words to describe snow, ice and fish. Using the language, Eskimo can tell the slight differences in different weather of the region they lived.  And it will be weird that most Eskimo describe the different snow in the same words in other language. That is to say, we may fail to find any proper if the language disappeared.

Therefore, we should not totally forget the lesser-known language, since it has value of representing our passed culture. While, we still have to encourage more and more young people to learn the universal official language, since it is more effective and economical communication tools.

CharlesHuUID: 2638360

The globalization is changing the world. Mastering Ppractical official languages such as English can bring young people more suitable jobs, can serve businessmean to make an easier deals easier and so. While the languages are inextricably related with the culture and the history of the particular regions andor countries,. I support the point that the languages of the countries or the regions should never be forgotten, however, the lesser-known languages ought to gives way to the practical, international and official languages.

On the one hand, the practical official language has its reasons to attract people to learn it. itIt makes the communication easier. Hence, there are more trust will be builtd for people from different areas. Then the trust can helpmake that people can work together. Considering the story of the tower of Babel infrom GensisGenesis, people can make a tower to the heavens since they communicated easily in can use the single language. For the real case, it is the trueth that most employers are tend to hire the bilingual applicant one from two, who have the same qualificationed in the major, especially for those international well-paid companies.
esp.后的主语是companies,主干中的是employers，两者不一致，.

What’s more, the main purpose of the language is to communicate effectively. On the contrary, the lesser-known languages will lead the barrier of theto communication.  For those people who stick to the lesser-known languages, most are suffered from hunger, homelessness, disease and others. It is still common for a scientist tend to publish their finds in englishEnglish. In that casesthat case, to learn those international languagethose international languages is irresistible.

On the other hand, each language is a kind of mirror of the culture and history of the particular group of people, as the saying goes" where there is a different language, there is a unique culture". For some people, the extinction of a language means to destroy the culture. That is to say, it is important to protect the original languages. For example, most European clings to their native languages. The French government even assembles many academics to promote their language （觉得用French更好） in other countries.

In addition, those lesser-known languages also haves its particular usages.Takeusages. Take Eskimo as aan instance, their language have most words to describe the snow, ice and fish. Using the language, Eskimo can tell the slight differences in different of weather of thein different region they lived.  And it will be weird that most Eskimo describe the different snow in the same words in other languages. That is to say, we may fail to find any proper if the language disappeared.

Therefore, we should not totally forget the lesser-known language, since it has value of representing our passed culture. While, we still have to encourage more and more young people to learn the universal official languages, since it isthey are more effective and economical communication tools.

文章的论证充分，结构清晰，尤其是连接转折词的应用值得学习。但是的总结段感觉就是开头的重复，可以考虑变换一下，加深主题。文章中的拼写语法错误偏多。
我很佩服你能在56minites内写出这样一篇文章，我可能要一倍的时间了！惭愧！
对不起，不知道为什么这些汉字变不了大小了。