0910G[North America Flying] Issue13 by whtkd

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not only to enrich harmonious culture ,but also to preserve certain idea that only some languages properly convey, nevertheless 最后一段这里前面应该加逗号和上面说骄傲任务那部分构成并列形式，否则语法上恐怕有毛病（但是我不知道具体叫什么毛病），如果有了逗号会形成这样两句
preventing the language from extinction is a pride of task
preventing the language from extinction is not only to enrich harmonious culture ,but also to preserve certain idea that only some languages properly convey, nevertheless

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最后一段最后一句Only them understand the their language for sharing same culture know how to make a method to develop language.

应该是only they 为什么要用宾格呢还有 understand the their language 这里倒是用了冠词，但是还有一点要记住，用了冠词就别用代词这里应该把the去掉

抱歉零敲碎打，总体上水平有限没法详细谈，但是细节上还是奔着发现一处纠正一处的态度，并非灌水，请见谅

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17# ccrobin000
ccrobin000太强大了，崇拜~这些错，我一点没看出来。

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18# 追忆2009
我这些都是零敲碎打，边角余料而已，对于真正写出高档的文章，我看出的这些没什么用处，也可以说如果真的到了美国如果教授写文章都是助手改这些小错误的