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[活动] 6、7月份 cracking ibt essay! 小组写作组 lingyao1 第十四次作业 [复制链接]

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most people often let others make decisions for them rather than make decisions by themselves. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


In this rapid of society change leading to life complexity and psychological displacement, a positive and negative effect among in person that whether the most of people often let others make decisions for them in turned to dramatic controversy. But as far as I am concerned, it is not absolutely about controversy.

Apparently, there are many decision should to be made by him or her in the life such as loving, working or marry. These decisions are not impacted by other people. For example, anyone could be impacted on me when I was wooing the girl who was my love to, even including my parents. This decision plays an essential role in my whole life and no one could deny that I must need to confirm by myself.

Besides, there are other kind of decision should be made by other people, not by oneself. In contemporary society, the rapid development of economics was very complexity, as consequence, massive necessary choice or decision needs to be made or confirm by a group of people or public. In accordance with company for instance, it is usually to see that a policy of company or deal of business were completed with many leaders’ decision. Because that those managers have a responsibility for every employees' or client's benefits. They did not confirm according to their personal thinking. At the same time, the decision of group is better and more security than one’s.

Nevertheless, he or she makes a decision must according to personal surrounding or atmosphere. Thinking that whether most or less people make decision by themselves, that was not correctly and reasonable. Different condition makes different decision which may by a group of people or only one people. In conclusion, no matter that making decision with a group people or one, the result is correct or reasonable, that is the most important.
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发表于 2009-6-8 20:20:18 |只看该作者
1# lingyao1

In this rapid of society change leading to life complexity and psychological displacement, a positive and negative effect among in person that whether the most of people often let others make decisions for them in turned to dramatic controversy. But as far as I am concerned, it is not absolutely about controversy.

Apparently, there are many decisions should to be made by him or her in the life such as loving, working or marry(这里列举形式不并列可以吗?我不确定). These decisions are not impacted by other people. For example, anyone could be impacted on me when I was wooing the girl who was my love to, even including my parents. This decision plays an essential role in my whole life and no one could deny that I must need(你觉得这里有问题吗?) to confirm by myself.

Besides, there are other kind of decisions should be made by other people, not by oneself. In contemporary society, the rapid development of economics was very complexity(词性错), as consequence, massive necessary choice or decision needs to be made or confirm by a group of people or public. In accordance with company for instance, it is usually to see that a policy of company or deal of business were completed with many leaders’ decisions. Because that those managers have a responsibility for every employees' or client's benefits. They did not confirm according to their personal thinking. At the same time, the decision of group is better and more security(词性错) than one’s.

Nevertheless, he or she makes a decision must according to personal surrounding or atmosphere. Thinking that whether most(more) or less people make decision by themselves, that was not correctly and reasonable. Different condition makes different decision which may by a group of people or only one people. (这里是否该分段了?)In conclusion, no matter that making decision with a group people or one(with的对象不明确啊), the result is correct or reasonable, that is the most important.
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