长风破浪济沧海——Vikki 的写作帖 [1006G]

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W1 in Sep.

1）篇章
大写：需替换的词
粗体：拼写错误

TOPIC: ISSUE143 - "Artists should pay little attention to their critics.* Criticism tends to undermine and constrain the artist's creativity."
*those who evaluate works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.
WORDS: 155          TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2009-9-7 16:11:23

Objectively saying, it is wiser for artists to pay some attention to their critics. This is not only because of  that the artist's creativity is not so easy to be undermined or constrained by criticism, but also because of that the critics is in terms of an active role in the DEVELOPMENT of both art and artists.

Paying some attention to the critics does not meant to undermine or constrain the artist's creativity. Primely, creativity of an artist mainly depends on the artist's individual genious and inocent understanding of the world, which could be little affected by critics from other people. In addtion, paying some attention to the critics does not meant to accept them totally as an creative artist should have their own opinion on their art. What's more, even if the critics are majoritilly or totally accepted, chances for it to undermine or constrain the creativity are remonte.

On the other hand, criticism
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AWP 的原始稿，惨不忍睹哦，但是缺点可以更清楚地看到吧，改进，加油。

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Objectively saying, it is wiser for artists to pay some attention to their critics. This is not only because of  that the artist's creativity is not so easy to be undermined or constrained by criticism, but also because of that the critics plays in terms of an active role in the DEVELOPMENT of both art and artists.

Paying some attention to the critics does not meant to undermine or constrain the artist's creativity. Primly, creativity of an artist mainly depends on the artist's individual genius and innocent understanding of the world, which could be little affected by critics from other people. In addition, paying some attention to the critics does not meant to accept them totally as an creative artist should have their own opinion on their art. What's more, even if the critics are major or totally accepted, chances for it to undermine or constrain the creativity are remote.

On the other hand, criticism might a kind of active elements to the creativity of artists. Different points of view always provide excellent new ideas for people who need some fresh thinking, especially for the artists, like a sort of new windows opening to different new world. Even for the same theme, distinct angels of views may provide various senses and imaginations which is helpful for creativity. In other words, if the criticism provide a sort of new version for the artist, it might be active to the emerge of creativity but not undermine or constrain.

To scroll down on the point of view above, it is no need for an artist to pay little attention to their critics for critics has little effect to undermine or constrain the artist’s creativity but might be helpful for its emerge.
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需替换的词
DEVELOPMENT - EVOLUTION
UNDERMINE 破坏- WEAKEN ; DESTROY
CONSTRAIN 约束- INHIBIT

缺乏例证
篇幅 288

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W1 in SEP.  A243

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W1 in Sep.  summary

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PLAN IN W2

PLAN IN SEP.
2009-09-07~2009-09-30 [3H/D, 5D/W, 3W]

1)篇章训练：
每天一篇，必需开始写了！完成 NAF 组作业即可。
（参考SPECTACULAR https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=962293 ）[1h/d]

7 I143	8 I131	9 A242
		12 I208	13 A243
	I221 14	I48 15	A101 18
	I185 19	I130 20	A167 21
	I50 22	I153 25	A105 26
	I51 27	I131 28	I88 29	A51 30	A53
	I43	I103	I56	A238	A45

2)造句训练：
方法，汉译英；材料，《NCE3&4》（各十篇）；时间，20d 2009-08-06~2009-08-26 0.5h/d  =>  INTERPRETATION

3)遣词训练：
USE A WORD THREE TIMES AND IT'S YOURS.  -- MW
目的，积累主动词；
材料，《TOFEL-ibt 写作词汇小伴侣》，按照篇章练习所对应的词类；
时间，30d 2009-09-06~2009-11-06 [0.5h/d]

操作方法FROM 诸葛~ https://bbs.gter.net/thread-918693-1-1.html

“每天至少练习2篇ISSUE文章的汉译英练习，每篇文章独立一个txt文档文件。打开你的北美范文，然后翻到后面中文翻译的地方，看一句中文，然后做汉译英的翻译练习，将你翻译的结果打字到文档文件里保存，当一个段落或者一篇文章翻译完后，仔细对照原文。这时候你会发现你翻译的和英文原文有很大的不同，这里面包括词汇和句式的差异等等。这时候你要注意，原文中使用好的词汇和表达方式你都要统统的以其所在分句的形式抄在一个本子上（中英文都要抄上），然后每天没事的时候就看着你抄写的中文再次回想对应的英文是什么，就这样每天坚持翻译两篇文章，然后看抄写下的中文回想和记忆对应的英文部分，两周后就会翻译完这30篇文章。这个时候就要停下来不要再翻译新的文章。你要做的是再次从第一篇到第三十篇文章做汉译英的翻译练习。…… 笔者当时使用的是《北美范文》和《杨鹏GRE&&GMAT难句》作为写作汉译英的材料

“词《TOEFL-ibt 写作词汇小伴侣》“在前271页中把你认为重要的和你将来写作可能会用到的词汇和短语统统用红笔把它右边的中文释义画下来（英文词汇不要画任何东西）。每天要给自己定出进度来（例如：50页词汇），将左面的英文单词用卡片一类的东西挡住，练习看你画出的后面的中文释义和词性来想左面被挡住的词汇是什么（注意不会使用的词汇要特别查词典看用法，这里面多是动词比较复杂；名词，形容词，副词等都相对容易得多）。用这个方法将271页的词汇和短语在一周左右的时间迅速的过掉第一遍，[2009-09-07~2009-09-16]这个时候请你不要着急，因为还不熟练。你需要适当的缩短时间，例如：5天，再重复上面的步骤。如此练习一个月左右”[2009-09-07~2009-10-06]

4)语法加固：
读《TOFEL-ibt 语法精要》，注意每章总结；
T:2009-08-06~2009-09-05 [0.5h/d] 13p/d

5)读书：
书目，G作文电子书、孙远、官方、5.5、高分；
总结，方法、计划、词汇、句型。[1h/d]

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1006G组本周任务：1I+1A（全文），2I+5A（提纲）
              从给出的题目中任选一道I和一道A写全文

16"Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals."

85"Government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts."

63."To truly understand your own culture—no matter how you define it—requires personal knowledge of at least one other culture, one that is distinctly different from your own."

6.The following was written as a part of an application for a small business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe.
"A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. Currently, the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away; thus, our proposed club, the C Note, would have the local market all to itself. Plus, jazz is extremely popular in Monroe: over 100,000 people attended Monroe's jazz festival last summer, several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe, and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly,' which airs every weeknight. Finally, a nationwide study indicates that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment. It is clear that the C Note cannot help but make money."

207.It is known that in recent years, industrial pollution has caused the Earth's ozone layer to thin, allowing an increase in the amount of ultraviolet radiation that reaches the Earth's surface. At the same time, scientists have discovered, the population of a species of salamander that lays its eggs in mountain lakes has declined. Since ultraviolet radiation is known to be damaging to delicate tissues and since salamander eggs have no protective shells, it must be the case that the increase in ultraviolet radiation has damaged many salamander eggs and prevented them from hatching. This process will no doubt cause population declines in other species, just as it has in the salamander species.

160.As people grow older, an enzyme known as PEP increasingly breaks down the neuropeptide chemicals involved in learning and memory. But now, researchers have found compounds that prevent PEP from breaking neuropeptides apart. In tests, these compounds almost completely restored lost memory in rats. The use of these compounds should be extended to students who have poor memory and difficulty in concentrating-and therefore serious problems in school performance. Science finally has a solution for problems neither parents nor teachers could solve.

39.The following appeared in a memorandum from the president of Humana College.
"Last year the number of students who enrolled in long-distance degree programs at Omni University increased by 50%. During the same year, Omni showed a significant decrease from prior years in expenditures for dormitory and classroom space, most likely because instruction in the long-distance programs takes place via interactive video computer connections. In contrast, over the past three years, enrollment at Humana College has diminished and costs of maintaining buildings have risen. Thus, to increase enrollment and solve the problem of budget deficits at Humana College, we should initiate and actively promote long-distance degree programs like those at Omni."

232.The following appeared in a memo from the sales manager of Eco-Power, a company that manufactures tools and home appliances.
"Many popular radio and television commercials use memorable tunes and song lyrics to call attention to the products being advertised. Indeed, a recent study of high school students showed that 85 percent could easily recognize the tunes used to advertise leading soft drinks and fast-food restaurants. Despite our company's extensive advertising in magazines during the past year, sales of our home appliances declined. Therefore, to boost company profits, we should now switch to advertisements featuring a distinctive song."

36.The following appeared in an article written by Dr. Karp, an anthropologist.
"Twenty years ago Dr. Field, a noted anthropologist, visited the island of Tertia and concluded from his observations that children in Tertia were reared by an entire village rather than by their own biological parents. However, my recent interviews with children living in the group of islands that includes Tertia show that these children spend much more time talking about their biological parents than about other adults in the village. This research proves that Dr. Field's conclusion about Tertian village culture is false, and thus that the observation-centered approach to studying cultures is invalid. Because they are using the interview-centered method, my team of graduate students working in Tertia will establish a much more accurate understanding of child-rearing traditions there and in other island cultures."

上周互改安排：月下花魂，我是闯天，janelee（第一组）
              tinyfist，jasminexjj（第二组）
              两组成员组内进行互改
         

规则：周五交本周作业和上周的互改，作业和互改结果直接回复本邮件即可。周六八点半开会时可对互改进行讨论。

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第二季 莫听穿林打叶声【2009-11-06~2010-02-05】90d (AW ; V; R)

FOCUS ON!!!!!!!

TIME
6h/d   5d/w   30h/w   4w/m  
3m  12w   60d    360h
MON.~FRI. + SAT.

1 AW [5h/d] M.~F.

1)篇章训练：
I高频 A全部题库 全文+修改 进度跟奋斗6G 组  [1.5h/d]
2)造句训练：
方法，汉译英；材料，《杨鹏GRE&GMAT难句》（198s 5s/d 36d）、《北美范文》（I 三十篇 16d）+《NCE3&4》（各十篇 20d）；时间，(1s+1p)/d  36d  2009-11-09~2009-12-26 [1h/d]
3)遣词训练：
目的，积累主动词；材料，《TOFEL-ibt 写作词汇小伴侣》；时间，20d  2009-11-09~2009-12-06 [0.5h/d]
4)语法加固：读《TOFEL-ibt 语法精要》，每周小结；2009-11-09~2009-12-09 [0.5h/d]
5) 过题库 4遍
8w 2w/t [1.5h/d]
6) 理论完善——读书 1book/w
NOV.
孙远
手把手
官范
DEC.
高分 I A
5.5  I A

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过题库
1 分类
2 提纲
3 参考《官范》、《高分》的题目翻译

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第二季 莫听穿林打叶声【2009-11-06~2010-02-05】90d (AW ; V; R)

FOCUS ON!!!!!!!

TIME
6h/d   5d/w   30h/w   4w/m  
3m  12w   60d    360h
MON.~FRI. + SAT.

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TIME 2009-11-06~2009-12-06
4w 20d 100h
[6h/d] M.~F.

1)篇章训练：
I高频 A全部题库 全文+修改 进度跟奋斗6G 组  
[1.5h/d] 20:20-21:50

2)造句训练：
方法，汉译英；材料，《杨鹏GRE&GMAT难句》（198s 5s/d 36d）、《北美范文》（I 三十篇 16d）+《NCE3&4》（各十篇 20d）；时间，(1s+1p)/d  36d  [2009-11-09~2009-12-26] [1h/d]

3)遣词训练：
目的，积累主动词；材料，《TOFEL-ibt 写作词汇小伴侣》；时间，20d  2009-11-09~2009-12-06 [0.5h/d]
4)语法加固：读《TOFEL-ibt 语法精要》，每周小结；2009-11-09~2009-12-09 [0.5h/d]
5) 过题库 4遍
8w 2w/t [1.5h/d]
6) 理论完善——读书 1book/w [1h/d]
NOV.
孙远
手把手
官范

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奋斗6G 组

本周任务：1I+1A（全文），2I+5A（提纲）
              本次I为国际类；全文为I11，A11

11"All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems." （全文）


13"Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct."


116."With the growth of global networks in such areas as economics and communication, there is no doubt that every aspect of society—including education, politics, the arts, and the sciences—will benefit greatly from international influences."


140.The following appeared in a report of the Committee on Faculty Promotions and Salaries at Elm City University.
"During her seventeen years as a professor of botany, Professor Thomas has proved herself to be well worth her annual salary of $50,000. Her classes are among the largest at the university, demonstrating her popularity among students. Moreover, the money she has brought to the university in research grants has exceeded her salary in each of the last two years. Therefore, in consideration of Professor Thomas' demonstrated teaching and research abilities, we recommend that she receive a $10,000 raise and a promotion to Department Chairperson; without such a raise and promotion, we fear that Professor Thomas will leave Elm City University for another college."


57.The following appeared in a newsletter on nutrition and health.
"Although the multimineral Zorba pill was designed as a simple dietary supplement, a study of first-time ulcer patients who took Zorba suggests that Zorba actually helps prevent ulcers. The study showed that only 25 percent of those ulcer patients who took Zorba under a doctor's direction developed new ulcers, compared to a 75 percent recurrence rate among ulcer patients who did not take Zorba. Clearly, then, Zorba will be highly effective in preventing recurrent ulcers and if health experts inform the general public of this fact, many first-time ulcers can be prevented as well."


38.The following memo appeared in the newsletter of the West Meria Public Health Council.
"An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces. A study reports that in nearby East Meria, where fish consumption is very high, people visit the doctor only once or twice per year for the treatment of colds. Clearly, eating a substantial amount of fish can prevent colds. Since colds are the reason most frequently given for absences from school and work, we recommend the daily use of Ichthaid, a nutritional supplement derived from fish oil, as a good way to prevent colds and lower absenteeism."

97.The following appeared in a memo from the manager of television station KICK.
"A nationwide survey reveals that a sizeable majority of men would like to see additional sports programs on television. After television station WACK increased its sports broadcasts, its share of the television audience in its viewing area almost doubled. To gain a larger audience share in our area, and thus increase company profits, KICK should also revise its broadcast schedule to include more sports coverage."

11.The following appeared in a memo from the mayor of the town of West Egg.
"Two years ago, our consultants predicted that West Egg's landfill, which is used for garbage disposal, would be completely filled within five years. During the past two years, however, town residents have been recycling twice as much aluminum and paper as they did in previous years. Next month the amount of material recycled should further increase, since charges for garbage pickup will double. Furthermore, over ninety percent of the respondents to a recent survey said that they would do more recycling in the future. Because of our residents' strong commitment to recycling, the available space in our landfill should last for considerably longer than predicted." （全文）

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I 11 之前写过一次
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=961078&highlight=
再写一遍看看效果

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I11"All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."

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I 13"Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct."
[THE OUTLINE]

YES FEWER
IN A PUBLISHED UNSECO DOCUMENT IN THE LATE NINTINGTH CENTURY POINTED OUT THAT IN EVERY THREE DAYS THERE IS A KIND OF LANGUAGE DESPEARE ON THIS PLANET, AND THIS ISSUE HAS BECOME AN CONCERNED ONE IN ACDEMIC STUDIES, SOCIETY AND RELATED GOVENMENTS.
EXPRESS: SCHOLARS; PUBLIC PRESS; GOVENMENT DOCUMENTS
REASON OF THE RAISE OF WIDELY CONCERN: IMPORTANC
1 LANGUAGE LOST MIGHT BE RESULT FROM OVERWHELMING IMPACT FROM MAINSTREAM DURING THE CULTURE INTERCULTURE COMMUNICATION IN THE PROCESS OF GLOBALIZATION
2 NATIVE POPULATION DECREASE- LANGUAGE IS ONE OF THE FIRST IDENTIFICATIONS OF A NATION ;IT IS KNOWN TO ALL IN THE ACDAMIC FIELD OF ETHNIC STUDY THAT WITHOUT A LANGUAGE THE  GROUP OF PEOPLE WOULD NOT BE DENTIFIED AS A NATION . SO A LOST OF A LANGUAGE PAPELLE  TO A LOST OF THE NATION FOR SOME INSTENCE.
3 CULTURAL DIVERSITY

TO SOLVE THESE PROBLEMES
WE NEED THE ENDEAVOR FROM EACH WALK OF OUR SOCIETY
GOVENMENT PLAYS ONE OF THE MOST IMPORTANT ROLE OF THEM

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I 116."With the growth of global networks in such areas as economics and communication, there is no doubt that every aspect of society—including education, politics, the arts, and the sciences—will benefit greatly from international influences."

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A 140.The following appeared in a report of the Committee on Faculty Promotions and Salaries at Elm City University.
"During her seventeen years as a professor of botany, Professor Thomas has proved herself to be well worth her annual salary of $50,000. Her classes are among the largest at the university, demonstrating her popularity among students. Moreover, the money she has brought to the university in research grants has exceeded her salary in each of the last two years. Therefore, in consideration of Professor Thomas' demonstrated teaching and research abilities, we recommend that she receive a $10,000 raise and a promotion to Department Chairperson; without such a raise and promotion, we fear that Professor Thomas will leave Elm City University for another college."
OUTLINE