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发表于 2009-6-26 20:02:23 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
65.Thefollowing appeared in a memo from the president of a chain of
cheese stores located throughout the United States.

"For many years all the stores in our chain have stocked a wide variety of
both domestic and imported cheeses. Last year, however, the five
best-selling cheeses at our newest store were all domestic cheddar cheeses
from Wisconsin. Furthermore, a recent survey by Cheeses of the World
magazine indicates an increasing preference for domestic cheeses among its
subscribers. Since our company can reduce expenses by limiting inventory,
the best way to improve profits in all of our stores is to discontinue
stocking many of our varieties of imported cheese and concentrate
primarily on domestic cheeses."

很多年来我们的所有连锁店都储备了很多种类的国产奶酪和进口奶酪。然而去年,我们的最新店里五种销量最高的奶酪都是威斯康星出产的cheddar奶酪。而且,最近一次由Cheese
of the World杂志所举行的调查显示,其订阅者对于国产奶酪的倾向性越来越高。由于我们公司可以通过限制库存来减少开支,在我们所有连锁店增加盈利的最好方式就是停止贮备很多进口奶酪而主要集中于国产奶酪。



破题分析:
1.陈述,我们的所有连锁店本来国产和进口两种奶酪都储备.
2.三个论据:去年我们最新店五种销量最高的奶酪都是国产的.(威斯康星出产的cheddar奶酪)/最近一次CW杂志的调查显示其订阅者对于国产奶酪的倾向性越来越高./公司可以通过限制库存来减少开支.
3.结论(提议):所有连锁店增加赢利的最好方式就是停止贮备很多进口奶酪,主要集中于国产奶酪.


提纲:
1.如题目所述,由于去年一家最新连锁店的五种销量最高的奶酪都是国产的,由CW杂志调查显示其订阅者对国产奶酪的倾向性越来越高,并且政府认为这样可以通过限制库存来减少开支,所以该国准备改变国产进口奶酪都储备的模式转而停止贮备很多进口奶酪,主要集中于国产奶酪的销售.然而这种观点是缺乏周全考虑的.
2.首先,去年五种最高销量的奶酪虽然是国产的,但是数据仅仅来源于宜家最新的商店,非常不具有代表性.
(这家店很可能对国产奶酪采取了促销模式,也可能这家店所处地域的人群由于某些背景比较青睐国货,并且这是一家新店,并不一定像许多年来得其他所有连锁店一样贮备很多进口奶酪,它很可能本来就大部分销售国产奶酪.)
3.其次,CW杂志的调查并不具有说服力.
(这家杂志社的影响力是未说明的,因而他的订阅者受众就不一定具有代表性.即使CW杂志非常受欢迎,非常具有影响力,杂志社所采用的调查手段我们是不清楚的.如果是在杂志上刊登类似于回馈问卷的形式,那么订阅过杂志的人都应该知道,至少我身边的人这样,很少会参与到这个随刊附带的问卷活动中.这也致使了调查结果的不可靠性.)
4.公司通过限制库存是可以减少开支,但是减少开支并不可以直接得出会增加赢利.
(赢利是一个收入大于成本的过程.公司减少了开支即总成本降低,但是减少了进口食品的贮备和销售是对成本和利益都会造成影响的.如果进口食品的单价高于国产食品的单价,很可能出售少量进口食品的收入都会超过大量国产食品出售所得到的收入.这样一来成本降低,收入的增加与否无法确定,盈不盈利也是无法预测的.)
5.总结来说,有关奶酪的这些数据对政府来说是有参考价值的,但是在完善的市场调查等各项调查确定之前,我们不能武断地认为停止贮备很多进口奶酪就一定会增加盈利.
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发表于 2009-6-26 20:05:25 |只看该作者
It is argued that because last year the bestfive sellers of cheese in a newest store are all domestic,and a recently survey by the CW has showed that more and more readers of CWprefer the domestic cheese,also,according to economic theories,to dicontinuestocking the imported cheese can reduce the expense,thus,the government decideto change the old pattern of stocking both kinds of cheese,and,instead,concentrate on the stock and selling of the domestic cheese.However,thedicision is lack in general consideration.

First of all,the datathat the five best sellers are all demestic is unpursuadable.The result comesfrom merely one newest store of the area.It can not represent all the otherstores.The newest store may have taken some methods such as to offer discountsto make the domestic cheese sell better.Or the store is located in an areawhere most of the residents tend to buy domestic products,for example there maylive many elder residents whose perception are more traditional than theyounger ones.What’s more,as is said,it is a newest store,there’s no necessarilyevidence to prove that it is like all the other stores in the past years tostock equally domestic and imported cheess.Maybe it’s just because it sellsmostly domestic cheese that the best five sellers are all domestic.


The survey conductedby the CW is also not convincing.Whether the magazine is famous is remainedunknown,so it’s readers cannot efficiently reflect the general opinion of thecheese.Even though the CW is a popular magazine,having fame all over thecountry,the way that the magazine take to do the survey is uncertain to us.Ifit uses methods such as putting the survey papers within the magazine to reachthe reader who buy it,most regular magazine readers,or at least people aroundme will know that it’s of no effect.Because most people will pay no attentionto the unremarkable paper,let alone to pay to send it back to the magazine office.All this lead to the unprecision of the survey taken.


It is true that to limit the stock of someproducts will reduce the cost,but the reduce of the expense does not directlymean that the profits will increase.The profits consist of the total expense andthe total income.When the income is more than the expense,we earn profits.Thelimit of the stock do save the expense,but it has effects on both the expenseand the income of the imported cheese.If the unit price of the imported cheeseis higher than that of the domestic cheese,it is probable that selling a smallamount of imported cheese will earn more than selling a large amount ofdomestic cheese.Thus,although the expense has decresed, the income isuncertain,so whether there is profit is unpredictable.


To sum up,all the phenomenon about the cheese dohave value for us to take into account.But before more all-around research ofthe whole cheese market, we cannot simply to get a conclucion that to stop thestock of imported cheese will profit for sure.
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