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hyacinthUID: 2184492

首先我想问的是这样的题目可以折中的么？就是我们既要保护一些古建筑，也要兴建一些现代大厦。


thatll 发表于 2009-6-30 15:16

yep...

jiang08UID: 2391146

首先我想问的是这样的题目可以折中的么？就是我们既要保护一些古建筑，也要兴建一些现代大厦。

reasons of preserving old, historic buildings:
P! A
1, historic buildings of a city are symbols of the process of  development of the city, and hence they can record some important events happened in the long history of the city. they then can be used as didactic materials to young generations. take the Great Wall for example.
2, historic buildings usually are gracious and carry with beauty so that they can be served as aesthetic materials and edify people. for example, Gardens of Suzhou
3, historic buildings also can be used for morden function, if we reconstruct them properly.' {2 V  P*
thatll 发表于 2009-6-30 15:16

纯粹从专业角度挑刺，第三点动词应该是renovate/rehabilitate，reconstruct是已经倒塌的建筑物照原样重建~
我觉得这个题折中很好。另外苏州园林的话，老外可能不知道怎么回事，你可以用点西方的例子比如帕提农神庙什么的。

honey67UID: 2645316

顶一下，不要沉下去了。。。
我觉得这样的方式蛮好的。又不会花太多的时间，而且可以对作文题目有些思路。

thatllUID: 2538832

15# honey67
Progress is OK and is what we our human beings are always hoping for. However the progress I indicate needs to be illustrated beacause I think the progress should be versitile and must be versitile. If not and the progress is exclusive to one aspect, it will step to an inverse direction in my point of view.
我想问的是这样的立意可以否？会不会算是离题？
1, Progress in one aspect such as weapons should be stoped according to the human beings' needs for protecting ourselves from the wildlives. Whether we should move on in the progress of weapons depends on the needs for protecting but for ruinning our human beings.
2, Progress in many parts should go on and even should accelerate. We are now paying more attention to the materialism while aspects on the spirits receive not adequate attentions. We should realize it and start to balance it. Otherwise we could also step into disaster because of the mental problems such as voidness.
3, Only if the progress is overall and versatile can the progress is the real progress to our buman beings.

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Nowdays eating meals with families regularly is not important. agree or disagree?

草莓棉花糖UID: 2623305

我觉得用英文思考暂时会阻挡思路 我还是先中文好了
不同意
1.在忙忙碌碌的现代生活中，能和家人吃饭是一件很轻松愉快的事情。庆祝生日、加奖金等。
2.增进彼此的感情。平时上班 上学就很忙碌了，很好有时间聚集在一起，吃饭的时候如果在聚不到一起，真的是很少接触，感情会因此淡化。
3.节省。如果单独一个一个人的做食物，或者去饭店，很浪费，也很费钱。
所以和家人在一起吃饭很必要

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8 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication
among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

littlesaisaiUID: 2549251

1. Watching television let us have common topic to talk with friends and family. As an important and prevalent form of mass communication, television has become an indispensable way of gaining information. We listen to the news, wathcing the latest TV series and live sports game, which we watch become our topics in our daily lives.
2. At the leisure time, television provides a way of relaxation, watching tv with friends and family to share the leisure time is beautiful.
3. However, on the other hand, excessive dependence with television often leads to reduce the communicatioin with friends and family. When we enjoy the comfortable feeling of watching TV, we always become lazy and indifferent so as to ignore people who we should take care of.
4. in order to watch TV, people choose to stay at home but not go outdoors with friends. So, they will miss many chances of communication, such as party, travel, etc.

前两点赞成，后两点指出缺点。这样写好，还是全盘否定观点鲜明比较好呢？大家给给意见，主要是觉得赞成只能写出两点，想不出更多了。

Next topic:
When people need to complain about a product or poor service, some prefer to complain in writing and others prefer to complain in person. Which way do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

honey67UID: 2645316

Though it might be true in some cases,  i don't quite agree with the author's opinion stated above. The following reasons and examples would enhance and strengthen my point of view.

First of all, with the help of certain TV programs we had broadened our perspective,thus could generate more topics to discuss with friends and families than ever before.

Secondly,we could get together more often than we used to do our own staff separately. Thinking about any plays or programs that we enjoy in common. We would love to stay together to watch ,to talk and to share our ideas and feelings.

Thirdly,some TV programs are talking about effective relationship management,it does help us to do better communication with the people around us.

恩，我觉得前两项还是可以作为主要观点的，但是第三点有点将就。你们觉得呢？

Next topic:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
A person should never make an important decision alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

thatllUID: 2538832

22# honey67
I think it is not easy to straightly say yes or no to this question. As for this problem, I will take the opinion that we should consider as many as suggestions raised by others but more importantly we should decide by ourselves finally.
所以我要问的是这样的话题怎么阐述算是不偏题，我这样的立论可以吗？下面的话我就直接阐述为什么这两者同样重要。
1, firstly, before we arrive the final decision, we should and must consider adequate advices so that we would not make blunders.
2, further more, the final decision must be made by ourselves. otherwise, on one hand we are irrespondible for ourselves; on the other hand, we will contrite later.
3, the two are equally important.

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上上楼的问题

桐庐钓徒UID: 2620263

冒泡~小水一下
很快归来~~~

xiwartsUID: 2606033

看情况：
如果是小事情小问题就当面：更加直接有效，写费时间而且不好确定写给谁
如果是大问题就写：像出现问题的上级领导反映问题，写的过程中可以避免面对面交谈中过于情绪化的抱怨

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Do famous athletes and entertainers deserve high salaries?
Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

IsabelaUID: 2660020

There are many famous athletes and entertainers paid  over millions of dollars ever year.      From my perspective ,I believe that they deserve their rather hefty pay.
1. Being a star in  whether the entertainment industry or sports industry means they must have paid so much efforts to reach a such extent as a professional.
2.To keep the  status as both a excellent athletes or a movie actor  and a popular star is never an easy work ,they must work hard to win the game or do a good job as an actor and pay much attention on their behaviors as well as deal with the realationship with the
media at the same time.
3.Being live a life under the watch of people,they have to suffer the pressure as being  someone famous which many of us couldn't bear.
恩~~刚开始准备~也不知道这么写行不行~~希望大家多多指证~

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Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done.Other people prefer to take their time and live at a lower pace.Which so you prefer~?Use specific reasons and examples to support your anwser.

xiwartsUID: 2606033

the former one:
1.the high pace of modern society requires people to make quick decisions and get things done quickly. a lot of opportunities  lost while we could not catch up the pace.
2.it saves times and things are done more effectively
3.it will improve one's abilities in doing things under pressure
个人觉得第三点太牵强了~  ls第一点是不是跟第二点稍微有点重~我也才开始准备写作，希望大家指教~   

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166. What events make a person an adult?
People recognize a difference between children and adults. What events (experiences or ceremonies) make a person an adult? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

草莓棉花糖UID: 2623305

1.用自己赚的钱给父母买东西
2.有责任感，对父母 爱人 儿女等
3.在失败中获得勇气与教训，以后会做的更好

还是上一个题目吧 挺不好想的
166. What events make a person an adult?
recognize a difference between children and adults. What events (experiences or ceremonies) make a person an adult? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

iscongcongUID: 2592112

make decisions for themselves

1make decisions 说明有自己的思想，见解，可以独立的思考自己的问题。
2make decisions 能正确的认识自己，了解自己的优缺点。为自己的将来和人生做出成熟的规划
2make desicion 表明一个人responsible，对自己和别人的生活负责

有点疑问，题目中指的events和ceremony指的是那种比较正式宏大或者是具体的事件，我写的提纲对不对


153)        The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer. What are some of the qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer.
21世纪开始了，你认为新世纪会有什么变化？

文赋UID: 2611067

1. new energy will replace fossil fuels;
2. environmental problems will be solved; 这个也就是好写，说实话我倒是不信.
3. television will be replaced by personal computer and internet.
我倒是怀疑ETS还有这种发散思维的出题趋势没。

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119. Schools should ask students to evulate sheir teachers?