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1)学生的评价起到监督作用,促使教师认真负责
2)允许学生参与评价,能够调动学生的积极性,使他们更愿意参与到学习中
3)然而,学生的判断有时存在偏差,他们考虑问题不够全面,如果过多的依赖于学生的意见来评价一个老师,可能导致不公正的评判

Next: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to finish a project and then start another than to finish two projects at the same time. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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发表于 2009-7-8 13:38:27 |只看该作者
I agree.
1)在一个时间段只做一项工作会更投入、更全神贯注(engrossed and absorbed)
2)一个时间段想着多件事情,往往每件都干不好,而且多花很多时间(time-wasting)
3)。。。。。实在想不出第三点了- -

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who have power and earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples in your answer.
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don't agree,reasons:
1,金钱不是衡量成功标准,还有许多方面很重要,比如家庭,友谊,个人的社会地位等,如果我们在这些方面得到自我满足也是成功。
2,如果只是赚到了很多钱,却失去朋友、家庭、社会地位,也一样是一个loser.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statment?Always telling the truth is the most important  consideration in any relationship.
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Admittedly, telling the truth is an important consideration under most circumstances.

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However, it is not all that beneficial to be honest in every relationship. For example, in the relationship between the political leaders and citizen. Something that could endanger country’s security should not be publicized.

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Furthermore, as for individuals, information that could upset others might be withheld if it is of slight importance.



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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that may destroy the friendship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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本帖最后由 laurayql 于 2009-7-9 09:28 编辑

disagree.

1) if telling the truth for our friends' own good, then that doesn't mean that the friendship will be destoryed. On the other hand, our friends may benefit from it and the friendship will porbably getting more solid.

2)What if we are aware of our friends' mistake and pretending to be unknown, and our friends suffers a great lost due to that mistake? That must be even worse than hearing something unpleasant from our friends.

3)If a friend choose to be angry about my advice, which is cruel but right, then the friend himself is too naive and short-sighted, who just want to hear the good words and ignore their own mistakes.

4) However, sometimes making a suggestion too straightforward may hurt our friends feeling and cause a damage of their self-esteem. So it is important to point out their mistake in a less sharp way. Also, choosing the right time and placce is esstential.


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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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hey, everyone~~
the first couple of participants did a good job at writing English arguments, how about keeping it going?

try not to use Chinese, or at least start with English statements and then give the Chinese ones.
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我下午来支持,呵呵

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35# laurayql
Question:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I do not agree with the statement. I think one should make any decision alone, let alone important ones. But what I really mean is one should listen to as many as possible suggestions from various groups of people before they make the decision. And then when it is time to bring out the decision, one should give the decision by themselves.

reasons as follows:
1, the suggestions given by others are always limited and local. for example, if one wants to start an company, then the suggestions from home, classmates, and friends whose major is market-related are always different and with limitations. we cannot exclusively listen to any part. instead we should synthesize diverse aspects to reach a proper decision according to our own situation.

2, the decision is related to one own business, so we one should be responsible for his own decision. during one's life, there are not so many chances to make important decisions. and at such critical moment, we should decide by ourselves how to go and what to do. for example, a high school student who is going to attend university chooses major.

3, but what we should keep in mind is we must gather as much as information to make important decisions. otherwise we will make mistake and regret. for example, ahout whether going abroad for university.

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do you agree or disagree with the following statement? in today's world, to speak well is more important than to write well. use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.

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at the beginning, i do not agree with this point,although speak well is a good quality for moder society, well, we should not overlook the importance of the write. there are 3 reasons to bolster my argue.
1.writing could reveal ones ability at both reading and thinking. If a people only could speak well,but cannot write well,it will cause the other people's doubt that there maybe some flaws with this people's ability.
2.write well could help a person in his or her career, the documents, the plans, and also the decisions need the staff or the secretary who could well manage the write.
3. writing always has a unique power in certain area, for instance, the contract, the judge. Only writing them down would the paper with a legal force.

next one  12.Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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40# jlmjacky

As we know, a museum is an institution exhibits the tangible and intangible heritage of humanity and its development, for the purposes of education, study and enjoyment. Therefore, people who travel to new places will always be quite eager to visit the local museum for enlarging the scope and enjoyment.
1) people who travel to new places always want to have some ideas of the place, such as the history of the place and special objects unique to the place. while the local mesuems just exhibit such objects. for example, shaanxi history museum.

2) people travel to new places always for pleasure, and many museums provide interesting subjects to amuse the traveller. many antiques and sth you have never seen will provoke you to laugh. for example, when i went to the palace museum in the forbidden city four years ago, i enjoyed its splendor and the majesty of imperial power so much that i deeply proud of my own country.

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do you agree with the following statement? the ability to cooperate with other well is more important today than in the past. use specific reasons and examples to  support your answer.

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It is better to finish a project and thenstart another than to finish two projects at the same time. Use specificreasons and examples to support your answer.

我来补充下!

1. 在区分不同的事情的时候,就要列计划。好的计划是成功的前提。按照轻重缓急,分别完成不同的任务。
2. 完成任务可以带来成就感,激励自己继续努力。
3. 避免分心,可以全心全意做好每一件事情。

我觉得大家可以就同一个话题提出自己的不同看法。这样的话更全面。
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I agree with the opinon that the ability to cooperate with others is both  important at today  and in the past .It is universally acknowledged that the cooperation is significant on our process for achieving success at today except some those people who have a enough ability to solve the problems themselves.It is necessary for ue to take a look at this problem respectively.
1 Firstly,there is no denying that a number of famous scientisits who have contribute to our society succeed individually in the past.On the basis of careful observing and deducing,they get the results and the also the reputations themselves .for example,Newton......
2 However,there are also some examples we can see that cooperation is also very important in the past,for instance,the discovery of the radium by marie curie and his husband....or the bill gates,the CEO of the micosoft company, who invent the computer....
3 Furthermore,with  the increasingly development of the technology and the modern culture s between the humans,cooperation have become more and more necessary in our today's society.
打了个2比1的,后面省略的是例子,3的例子就是问题越来越复杂,一个人已经不可能解决了。
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没人了啊,自己来吧
Comparing with the advantages and the disadvantages of these two choices,no doubtly,I perfer to be self employed and operate my own busniess,rather than work for others.There are compelling reasons for me to draw this conclusion.As I will discuss below.
1 To begin with,we can not neglect if we choose the career of our own,we have to burden more pressure you have never imaged.Make the last desicion is always the most difficult things for a leade.Even worse,you may go to find a psychologist to comfort you.(这自己发散的,怪异吧)

2 In addition owning a busniess of ourselves ,we can have the choice to determine the future of the business.If you work for someone's company,you will be the follower that have to listen to the advices of others even though they have drawn an inaccurate or  ridiculous conlusion.
3 furthermore,you can allot the time as you like.Having a rest when you feel tired or have a coffee at the time you like, are always the best choice.But you should remember you are the lader of the business,resposible for you staff and your own career is as important as your life.
It can judge the life of your own company.
随便写的,大家拍怕
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44# jiangskysky
你这么急干嘛,一天一个就好了嘛,我明天来

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