喜洋洋杀G大队--dingyi0311 issue208

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"The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."
The speaker asserts that we can tell much about a society`s ideas and value by observing the appearance and behavior of its people, for that the look, dress, and act can reveals people`s attitudes and interests. I concede that the speakers claim is to some extend reasonable. However, appearance is not the only way to a person`s inter world, and that it can be deliberately changed to disguise the real thought.

Experience told us that we can usually tell a people`s ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people. For example, if we see a lady wearing cloth with shining color and fashion style, me will thought that she is comparably more lively, extroversive, and easier to get on with than a man wearing black western suit and sun glasses. Similarly, the idea of the society can also reveal itself on the the appearance and behavior of its people. The women in Islam country all cover their faces with head clothes. We can refer that woman there are more conservative, and this is the truth. The reasons for this phenomenon is that a unique society usually have its own values an ways of thinking that define themselves from other society, and this unique trait will reflect themselves on the look, dress, and behavior of the majority of its people in the society.

Nonetheless, the appearance and behavior of its people is not the only way to understand the ideas and values of the society. The education of the youngsters and the history of the country are also very important way to have a overall knowledge about a society. When The Chinese students are taught in the school, teachers are prone to taught them to avoid mistake, so that they can achieve higher score in the examination. However, the students in western school encourage students to have their idea expressed and wish them to have unique thought. Therefore, we can see that the Chinese people are more prudent and rigid, otherwise the western people are more extroversive and willing to take risk.

Moreover, the appearance and behavior of the people is sometimes conceivable, people can deliberately change them to hide their real thought. For example, if you first time visit Japan, you will find that the Japanese are the people who most frequently use honest title when they call people, and they even bow to others to show respect. You will thought that the Japanese are showing their polite in this way. Actually, this only indicates that they are not familiar with you and you are not one of them.

In sum, the appearance and behavior can to some extend betray the ideas and values of a society, yet, there are other ways for us to explore the culture, and in some occasions, the appearance can be serve to cover the real thought rather than reflect the ideas and values.

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The speaker asserts that we can tell much about a society`s ideas and value by observing the appearance and behavior of its people, for that the look, dress, and act can reveals people`s attitudes and interests. I concede that the speakers claim is to some extend reasonable. However, appearance is not the only way to a person`s inter world, 是不是only way感觉跟topic无关.只要证明它是一种way就可以了and that it can be deliberately changed to disguise the real thought.

Experience told us that we can usually tell a people`s ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people. For example, if we see a lady wearing cloth with shining color and fashion style, me will thought that she is comparably more lively, extroversive, and easier to get on with than a man wearing black western suit and sun glasses. 这段中心词是idea and value,不过这个例子似乎跟论点有些偏.Similarly, the idea of the society can also reveal itself on the the appearance and behavior of its people. The women in Islam country all cover their faces with head clothes. We can refer that woman there are more conservative,这个例子不错 and this is the truth. The reasons for this phenomenon is that a unique society usually have its own values an ways of thinking that define themselves from other society, and this unique trait will reflect themselves on the look, dress, and behavior of the majority of its people in the society. 说理感觉还不够,有点不断重复topic的感觉

Nonetheless, the appearance and behavior of its people is not the only way to understand the ideas and values of the society. The education of the youngsters and the history of the country are also very important way to have a overall knowledge about a society. When The Chinese students are taught in the school, teachers are prone to taught them to avoid mistake, so that they can achieve higher score in the examination. However, the students in western school encourage students to have their idea expressed and wish them to have unique thought. Therefore, we can see that the Chinese people are more prudent and rigid, otherwise the western people are more extroversive and willing to take risk. 感觉这个分论点跟原题有点偏了.

Moreover, the appearance and behavior of the people is sometimes conceivable, people can deliberately change them to hide their real thought. For example, if you first time visit Japan, you will find that the Japanese are the people who most frequently use honest title when they call people, and they even bow to others to show respect. You will thought that the Japanese are showing their polite in this way. Actually, this only indicates that they are not familiar with you and you are not one of them. 说理成分较少.而且这个例子不是特别supportive,他们并不是hide real thought. it may be more convincing to indicate that they seem to be polite and respect each other, but actually they speak dirty words all the time after they get acquaｉnted with each other.

In sum, the appearance and behavior can to some extend betray the ideas and values of a society, yet, there are other ways for us to explore the culture, and in some occasions, the appearance can be serve to cover the real thought rather than reflect the ideas and values.
感觉这个题目并不好写，虽然例子会比较多，但是理论的说理比较难．ＬＺ第二个分论点有些偏题，这种补充论题的最多在结尾一笔带过．加油！

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The speaker asserts that we can tell much about a society`s ideas and value by observing the appearance and behavior of its people, for that the look, dress, and act can reveals people`s attitudes and interests. I concede that the speakers claim is to some extend reasonable. However, appearance is not the only way to a person`s inter world, and that it can be deliberately changed to disguise the real thought.

Experience told us that we can usually tell a people`s ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people. For example, if we see a lady wearing cloth with shining color and fashion style, me will thought that she is comparably more lively, extroversive, and easier to get on with than a man wearing black western suit and sun glasses. Similarly, the idea of the society can also reveal itself on the the appearance and behavior of its people. The women in Islam country all cover their faces with head clothes. We can refer（infer） that woman there are more conservative, and this is the truth. The reasons for this phenomenon is that a unique society usually have its own values an ways of thinking that define themselves from other society, and this unique trait will reflect themselves on the look, dress, and behavior of the majority of its people in the society. （这一段由小见大 层次清晰 好）

Nonetheless, the appearance and behavior of its people is not the only way to understand the ideas and values of the society. The education of the youngsters and the history of the country are also very important way to have a overall knowledge about a society. When The Chinese students are taught in the school, teachers are prone to taught them to avoid mistake, so that they can achieve higher score in the examination. However, the students in western school encourage students to have their idea expressed and wish them to have unique thought. Therefore, we can see that the Chinese people are more prudent and rigid, otherwise the western people are more extroversive and willing to take risk.（觉得这一段有点偏题）

Moreover, the appearance and behavior of the people is sometimes conceivable, people can deliberately change them to hide their real thought. For example, if you first time visit Japan, you will find that the Japanese are the people who most frequently use honest title when they call people, and they even bow to others to show respect. You will thought that the Japanese are showing their polite in this way. Actually, this only indicates that they are not familiar with you and you are not one of them. （这个说成刻意掩饰有点牵强）

In sum, the appearance and behavior can to some extend betray the ideas and values of a society, yet, there are other ways for us to explore the culture, and in（on） some occasions, the appearance can be serve to cover the real thought rather than reflect the ideas and values.
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