Issue69【Triple Week】第2次练习by mymuro

mymuroUID: 2356228

写得不好，请见谅orz

TOPIC: ISSUE69 - "Government should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development"
WORDS: 404    TIME: 00:45:00     DATE: 2009-7-15 8:54:48

According to the speaker, government should set up as few as they can to help develop science. As far as I am concerned, we cannot simply expect every technology will benefit mankind. It is rational to distinguish technologies into different kinds. Although some scientific researches give human a bright future, some restrictions are needed in touchy researching fields to lead science research to a correctly developmental direction.

Indeed, unfettered atmosphere make a great contribution to science development. As a result, in contemporary society, life has become more convenient and effective than before. For example, since genetic engineering research become nearly unrestricted, it has a great success in the treatment of diseases like hormone deficiency. If government can keep on supporting and sponsoring genetic engineering, we can expect the end of some fatal diseases like AIDS in the near future.

However, it is necessary to place some restriction to touchy researches like human cloning, nuclear weapons and other technologies which may aggravate the greenhouse effect. Human cloning, which has become an explosive debate topic all over the world, will go to a wrong direction of killing human embryos at will to save other people. If the government cannot place some efficacious measure to restrict the morally and ethically wrong researches, it will become a seriously social problem. On the contrary, if government places some restrictions on human cloning--to use stem cells as replacement of human embryos, this technology will continuously benefit mankind in spite of lower speed than before.

In fact, scientific research and development is a double-edged sword so the restriction should be placed depending on different kinds of projects. For those controversial researches like human cloning and nuclear power, necessary restrictions are undoubtedly needed to stop touchy researching direction. However, for those beneficial technologies such as renewable energy and space exploration, government should place as few restrictions as possible and unconditionally sponsor them in resource and finance for the sake that human can expect great profits from them. Therefore, it is vital to supply unfettered atmosphere for these beneficial technologies to develop instead of being retarded by unnecessary restrictions.

In the final analysis, the speaker's viewpoint is unilateral due to the reasons mentioned above. Scientific researches can be distinguished into different kinds. It is advisable to place some necessary restrictions on touchy researches based on the unpredictable harms to human. But for the beneficial technologies, supplying unfettered atmosphere to them is justifiable.

newletter2002UID: 2653136

According to the speaker, government should set up as few as they can to help develop science. As far as I am concerned, we cannot simply expect every technology will benefit mankind. It is rational to distinguish technologies into different kinds. Although some scientific researches give human a bright future, some restrictions are needed in touchy researching fields to lead science research to a correctly developmental direction.

Indeed, unfettered atmosphere make a great contribution to science development. （句子用得蛮地道）As a result, in contemporary society, life has become more convenient and effective than before. For example, since genetic engineering research become nearly unrestricted, it has a great success in the treatment of diseases like hormone deficiency. If government can keep on supporting and sponsoring genetic engineering, we can expect the end of some fatal diseases like AIDS in the near future.(大可再写些其他论据吧 感觉有点单薄啊)

However, it is necessary to place some restriction to touchy researches like human cloning, nuclear weapons and other technologies which may aggravate the greenhouse effect. Human cloning, which has become an explosive debate topic all over the world, will go to a wrong direction of killing human embryos at will to save other people. If the government cannot place some efficacious measure to restrict the morally and ethically wrong researches, it will become a seriously social problem. On the contrary, if government places some restrictions on human cloning--to use stem cells as replacement of human embryos, this technology will continuously benefit mankind in spite of lower speed than before.（字数不是很多的话，我觉得那个核武器也是可以展开的，因为这个也是比较好写的）

In fact, scientific research and development is a double-edged sword so the restriction should be placed depending on different kinds of projects. For those controversial researches like human cloning and nuclear power, necessary restrictions are undoubtedly needed to stop touchy researching direction. However, for those beneficial technologies such as renewable energy and space exploration, government should place as few restrictions as possible and unconditionally sponsor them in resource and finance for the sake that human can expect great profits from them. Therefore, it is vital to supply unfettered atmosphere for these beneficial technologies to develop instead of being retarded by unnecessary restrictions.

In the final analysis, the speaker's viewpoint is unilateral due to the reasons mentioned above. Scientific researches can be distinguished into different kinds. It is advisable to place some necessary restrictions on touchy researches based on the unpredictable harms to human. But for the beneficial technologies, supplying unfettered atmosphere to them is justifiable.
楼主谦虚了 感觉楼主的文章 还是很不错的

mymuroUID: 2356228

过奖了，动手写句子前都要在脑海里反复修正。。。无用功过多，泪趴T_T