TOEFL暑期集结号作文 第3次作业 by taoyukun-daidai求很拍！

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TOEFL暑期集结号作文 第3次作业 by taoyukun-daidai
TOPIC: It is better for students at university or in college to choose difficult classes even if they cannot get top grades.
1. 阐述观点：不同意选择难课程；
2. 博士或科学家才要研究高难课题，才需要学习难的课程.大学生应该掌握简单的基础知识；
3. 难的课程容易得不到高分，拿不到奖学金和荣誉称号，没有成就感；
4. 大学生需要培养综合素质，而不能把时间都花在学习难的课程上；
5. 结论
Faced with choosing classes problems, the vast majority of people claim that it is better for students to choose difficult classes even if they cannot get top grades. They believe that doing harder thing could make them much better, but people who favor the opposite attitude, on the other hand, argue that easy classes is to difficult ones what the foundation is to a skyscraper. As I perceive the issue, learning easy classes is a batter choice. My view will be further substantiated by the following discussions.

First of all, contrary to the opinion of many people is my heartfelt objection to the idea that it is better for students at university to choose difficult classes even if they cannot get top grades. I hold the position that only doctor or scientists who investigate the technology need such highly difficult courses. Easy courses are to difficult ones what the heart is to a human. The promise of learning difficulty courses is that the students have already understood most of the platform classes in this area.

Secondly, Satisfied with it is bad for students to choose difficult classes are those people who hold the opinion that the difficult classes is too hard to get scholarship. In most of collages, the scholarship is depended on the grade point average. Grade point average is composed with all scores in final examination. If they want to get scholarship, they should get high scores in all examinations. In most case, it is very difficult to get high scores in difficult classes. For example, I chose a difficult course last year and got C in examination. I didn’t get scholarship only because of it. I regretted choosing the course because it made me lose my honor that year. So, choosing easy classes is a better choice.

In addition, we should all-round develop ourselves but not few difficult classes. The time for a student to study one difficult course may be two or three times longer than learning a easy course. The student would have no time to improve himself in other aspects. To illustrate this, there is an appropriate example. Abraham Lincoln, the sixteenth president of the United States. He worked as salespersons, rural post, and surveyors and carpenters when he was young. He improved himself at various aspects and finally succeeded. My viewpoint is that only if we learned fundamental classes and improved us at other sides, could we succeed in future.

Clearly, all the analysis warrants an unshakable conclusion that it isn’t better for students in collages to learn difficult courses.

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Faced with choosing classes problems, the vast majority of people claim that it is better for students to choose difficult classes even if they cannot get top grades. They believe that doing harder thing could make them much better, but （other）people who favor the opposite attitude, on the other hand（与but重复）, argue that easy classes is to difficult ones what the foundation is to a skyscraper. As I perceive the issue, learning easy classes is a better choice. My view will be further substantiated by the following discussions.

First of all, contrary to the opinion of many people is my heartfelt objection to the idea that it is better for students at university to choose difficult classes even if they cannot get top grades.（与大多数人意见不同，我中心的反对。。。这样翻译好别扭，过分套用句型了。这个可放在第一段说，这里不合适） I hold the position that only doctor or scientists who investigate the technology need such highly difficult courses. Easy courses are to difficult ones what the heart is to a human. The promise of learning difficulty courses is that the students have already understood most of the platform classes in this area.最好有个具体事例说明

Secondly, Satisfied with 的主语是哪个？这句好复杂，我都不会翻译了。如果是thoses people 翻译：那些认为困难课程太难而不能得到奖学金的人对这将不利于选困难课程这个说法很满意-？
难道你支持困难的课程？it is bad for students to choose difficult classes are those people who hold the opinion that the difficult classes is too hard to get scholarship. In most of collages, the scholarship is depended on the grade point average. Grade point average变which is composed with all scores in final examination. If they want to get scholarship, they should get high scores in all examinations. In most case, it is very difficult to get high scores in difficult classes. For example, I chose a difficult course last year and got C in examination. I didn’t get scholarship only because of it. I regretted choosing the course because it made me lose my honor that year. So, choosing easy classes is a better choice.


In addition, we should all-round develop ourselves but not （a）few difficult classes. The time for a student to study one difficult course may be two or three times longer than learning an easy course. The student would have no time to improve himself in other aspects. To illustrate this, there is an appropriate example. Abraham Lincoln, the sixteenth president of the United States. 改，（He改who） worked as salespersons, rural post, and surveyors and carpenters when he was young. He improved himself at various aspects and finally succeeded. My viewpoint is that only if we learned fundamental classes and improved us at other sides, could we succeed in future。林肯的例子是说要全面发展才能成功，与主题脱离，可以转述成并非学hard class才能成功要全面发展

Clearly, all the analysis warrants an unshakable conclusion that it isn’t better for students in collages to learn difficult courses.

为了大家进步，我就说说缺点把:loveliness:
感觉楼主有点过于套用句型，导致表达上太牵强。戴云教过无数的学生，他的句型ets估计最熟悉，所以我们要多变通使用。另外内容与主题要直线型连接比较好，有些句子可以合并为复杂的从句，这样感觉更好。
太晚了，就不多说。。。
以上个人愚见，说得不当见谅！