TOPIC: ARGUMENT203 - The following appeared in a newspaper feature story.
"At the small, nonprofit hospital in the town of Saluda, the average length of a patient's stay is two days; at the large, for-profit hospital in the nearby city of Megaville, the average patient stay is six days. Also, the cure rate among patients in the Saluda hospital is about twice that of the Megaville hospital. The Saluda hospital has more employees per patient than the hospital in Megaville, and there are few complaints about service at the local hospital. Such data indicate that treatment in smaller, nonprofit hospitals is more economical and of better quality than treatment in larger, for-profit hospitals."
这个题不知道怎么下手,我写提纲的时候发现,有四个事实,但是反驳起来3个事实都貌似有一个共同的原因就是;大医院毕竟去的人多,去的也基本都是重病。。所以导致了1。小医院呆的平均时间短 2。小医院治愈率没有大医院高 3。小医院平均每个人配备的医务人员少 那应该怎么展开啊?
1.S 2days vs. M 6days stay
2.S twice cure rate than M
3.more employees per patients in S than M (楼主这里理解错了,貌似。。)
4.few complaints about S(注意。这里没有比较级。。)
以上4点都为了说明S更经济更高质量than M.