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19# wk4a
TOPIC: ISSUE212 - "If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it is justifiable."
Admirable is the firm determination to achieve one's goal regardless the difficult and arduous process, but it is never wise to unnecessarily embrace every potentially detrimental means, taking persons involved or the whole society into consideration in the long run. (简洁明白!)
As for individuals, though the anticipated destiny is appealing, ignoring detrimental aspects can result in both a less favorable result and other unexpected outcomes.(文采好,观点也明了) Generally, people tend to find excuse to purge them of a charge when the goal seems to be just. It is not uncommon to find a man who does not exist to show shadowy fight(什么意思) (A shadowy flight into the dangerous world of a man who does not exist: Michael Knight— a young loner on a crusade to champion the cause of the innocent, the helpless, the powerless, in a world of criminals who operate above the law.
幽灵般地驰骋在危险的世界中,讨伐罪恶势力——这就是迈克奈特,一位年轻的孤胆英雄,一位在罪犯横行、法无天的世界中,为无辜和无助的人们主持正义的勇士。 )against the dangerous world to champion the cause of the innocent, the helpless and the powerless. Thus encouragement in movies raise a false conclusion among people especially teenagers: to bring a clean society is to kill all the wicked. However, Aristotle marked two thousand years ago, "the rule of law is better than the rule of any individuals." It is dangerous to put the whole law system aside and take actions totally based on people's own judgment. Some black sheep in society may be kicked out, but the whole regulations and orders are messed up, leaving the whole society paralyzed. (恕我没明白你这段后面在分析什么啊)
不能学习以暴制暴的手段,虽然目标是维护世界和平。
More seriously, for countries, narrowly focusing on a goal and ignoring other aspects(和上段紫色部分对照下,觉得你两段在讲类似的事情)前一段讲个人,这里讲国家,额,似乎没区别? can cause a big lost rather than achievement. Untold inter-country wars have proved this tragedy long numerous times. The Second World War, for example, which is caused by selfish desire of a few countries, put the whole world in hell. For those countries that started the two wars, agreeable are the victories that can bring much sources and lands, and significantly beneficial to their own development. However, for the rest that lost their homelands, thousands of people can be homeless and homeless let alone(终于对了!你喜欢用let alone 我喜欢用not to mention) the environment could be seriously damaged. If the goal is paid by the sacrifice of majority, it is not justifiable.
Actually, every unscrupulous mean which has been put into practice is a result of both shortsighted and egoism. Some individuals or organizations that put their goals beyond everything may achieve some benefits, but such benefits are at the expense of other relatively enormous sacrifice(see,和上面那段又是很类似)其实确实没东西写了。. It is absurd to close all the factories in order to eliminate environment pollution; it is ridiculous to recall all the cars in expecting to reduce traffic accidents; it also too foolish to kill all the patients when try to control a fatal virus. One the contrary, if during the pursuit process for a goal, people carefully evaluate all the possible means and choose a multiple-win one, a virtuous circle can be enjoyed as well.
Justifiable or not, the judgment of means should never narrowly based on people who take them, but on every possible influenced aspects, people, organizations and environment. The thriving of society, as a whole, is the final goal we need to pursuit.
(不知道是不是脑子有点转不动了,我觉得你这三段的内容不够清晰,似乎都有相似的陈述,建议写下提纲)
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这一篇脑袋没怎么想,一团糟糟 |
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