Issue208 主要是提纲~

网兜妮妮UID: 2612538

TOPIC: ISSUE208 - "The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."

提纲
一个人的穿着，举止可以反映一个人的兴趣和态度，但是一个社会的价值和理念不能通过这些反应。
1 个人衣着举止能反应个人的兴趣和态度。比如招聘的面试环节就是根据这个来做出判断的。
2 社会作为一个整体（拥有完全统一的思想和价值观）已经不存在了。虽然在有些国家，比如阿拉伯，女人们还是会有一种着装要求不露脸，表明女人社会地位的低下。但是这样的情况已经越来越少见了。在大多数国家都倡导多元文化的时候，人们的着装更多的反应是社区或者小团体的价值观，而非整个社会的。
3有些社会深层的价值观很难被反映。有些社会理念很难在外表和着装上有所反应，比如崇尚法律权威，得要考调查和访谈才能判断出来

As one who always wear color shirts reveals he is a vivid man and easy to talk. I agree that from the look, dress and act, one can easily show his or her attitudes and interests. However, when it comes to the notion we can know the society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people,I strongly disagree with it, for it is hard to get all-round value of today's multiple society.

From the begining, one's cloth and behaviors always act as a key to let us know a person. A man who wear a tie seems value his possition very much and a girl dressed in a expensive dress always be treated nice. Anyway,people use clothing and other decoration to show their characters as well as attitude. I tend to dress in red to reavl my passionate and indicate I would like to help other, and my shirt implies I was a college studenct and not in work. Moreover, we often judge a man by his act rather than his words, that is, we think one's act totally imply his attitude. Companys like its emplyees do work effeicently, and the director require the interviewer to judge the behavior of interviewees to decide whether he or she is the person they need. Although a employee’s ability cannot be domonstrated untill he had worked in one or two months, the experienced interviewer can always make a basic judgement on the interviewee for his or his appearence and behavior.

However, when it somes to the queation whether people's clothing and behavior can reflect a society's ideas and values, I cannot agree with the speaker any more. In fact, today's society were not a completely whole. Someone who clamor for the speaker's assertion will cite examples as the woman in Arab still dress the clothes which reavels little of their face, almost two eyes, which indicate the the society value less of woman. They are only few exceptions. Yet, countries today are more of multiple culture society, the most telling example is American society, which is famous for its multi-culture characters. And any people in this society represent his or her own community’s or group's idea and attitude instead of the society as a whole. In fact, the society has long been lost a homogenous culture. We can easily find a person who is African American, or he is a youngster form the sorth, from his appearence or acts. But it is totally difficult to find the similaity of two Americans who claims both of them hold the same American value. According, they have their own ways to understand the American as well as the American way, therefore, act differently with each other.

Finally, some value of society is hard to express by dressing and behavioring. For example, Americans value the authority of law, but this can be hardly seen from appearence or act unless we live with them and concerning about the news report or experiencing a real case. Therefore, just depend on our observation of people's appearance and behavior to judge a society's ideas and values, we will not get a well-round result of it.

网兜妮妮UID: 2612538

自己顶个，大家帮我看看这个提纲能行不？有没有问题，把握不太准的说。。。

heraraUID: 2680518

我拍你一下吧 别生气 为了进步 也是参考而已
1   招聘环节主要看的并不是穿着 你没说服力
2   你的这个分论点可以算ARGUMENT了 你说的社会完整太抽象了 你解释也不明白 你举的美国非洲裔的例子更是不妥当 你不怕人说你种族歧视吗
3 一些简单错误不能犯， 比如Accordingly, 你写成 According

网兜妮妮UID: 2612538

谢谢~我小小申辩一下。
1 招聘面试环节的第一印象就是外表，并且主考官通过行为对应聘者做出基本判断。没有说服力么？
2可能是我提纲不清楚。我想表达的是，人们的穿着反映了小团体的态度和价值观，比如企业工作服。但是在一个多元社会，已经不存在一个社会的整体的价值观了。这点很难讲清楚么？还是我没表达好？

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